EPISODE 1: All that's Left
Chapter 1:
Trey: Hey, Zara, How's Laura doing?
Zara: She's sleeping like never before, (Chuckles)
Jak… moree: Hey, Could you guys pipe down over there? I'm trying to sleep.
Trey: Heh, Sorry man!
Dan: Hey! Rebecca! Check out this cool thingy i found!
Rebecca: Shh! James is sleeping! Ugh, What is It?
Dan: I think its a Knife, it's really messy though.
Nickolas: Hey you two, what is that that you found?
Dan and Rebecca: Nothing!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
David: What the fuck?! Who is that?
Jake: I don't know, Lets Find out.
Stranger: AHHHHH NOOOOOOO PLEASE GO AWAY!!!!
Jake: Aw shit! Dad! We have to help that girl!
David: Ugh, Guys, Who's Gonna Come with me to help?
CHOICE AND DIALOGE TIME!
Post what you want your characters to say, and make a group descision
[Send Someone of your Choice to Help David] [Leave Woman Behind] [Let David Go Alone]
Vote here:
http://strawpoll.me/2940998
Trey goes with David, he checks if it's possible to save her without any of his own getting killed. If it is, he starts shooting walkers so she can get away.
EPISODE 1: All that's Left
Chapter 1:
Trey: Hey, Zara, How's Laura doing?
Zara: She's sleeping like never before, (Chuckles)
Jak… moree: Hey, Could you guys pipe down over there? I'm trying to sleep.
Trey: Heh, Sorry man!
Dan: Hey! Rebecca! Check out this cool thingy i found!
Rebecca: Shh! James is sleeping! Ugh, What is It?
Dan: I think its a Knife, it's really messy though.
Nickolas: Hey you two, what is that that you found?
Dan and Rebecca: Nothing!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
David: What the fuck?! Who is that?
Jake: I don't know, Lets Find out.
Stranger: AHHHHH NOOOOOOO PLEASE GO AWAY!!!!
Jake: Aw shit! Dad! We have to help that girl!
David: Ugh, Guys, Who's Gonna Come with me to help?
CHOICE AND DIALOGE TIME!
Post what you want your characters to say, and make a group descision
[Send Someone of your Choice to Help David] [Leave Woman Behind] [Let David Go Alone]
Vote here:
http://strawpoll.me/2940998
Trey goes with David, he checks if it's possible to save her without any of his own getting killed. If it is, he starts shooting walkers so she can get away.
Trey goes with David, he checks if it's possible to save her without any of his own getting killed. If it is, he starts shooting walkers so she can get away.
EPISODE 1: All that's Left
Chapter 1:
Trey: Hey, Zara, How's Laura doing?
Zara: She's sleeping like never before, (Chuckles)
Jak… moree: Hey, Could you guys pipe down over there? I'm trying to sleep.
Trey: Heh, Sorry man!
Dan: Hey! Rebecca! Check out this cool thingy i found!
Rebecca: Shh! James is sleeping! Ugh, What is It?
Dan: I think its a Knife, it's really messy though.
Nickolas: Hey you two, what is that that you found?
Dan and Rebecca: Nothing!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
David: What the fuck?! Who is that?
Jake: I don't know, Lets Find out.
Stranger: AHHHHH NOOOOOOO PLEASE GO AWAY!!!!
Jake: Aw shit! Dad! We have to help that girl!
David: Ugh, Guys, Who's Gonna Come with me to help?
CHOICE AND DIALOGE TIME!
Post what you want your characters to say, and make a group descision
[Send Someone of your Choice to Help David] [Leave Woman Behind] [Let David Go Alone]
Vote here:
http://strawpoll.me/2940998
Felix Davis
Skills: great fighter and can basic med skills
Weapons: bolt action rifle and machete
Age:20
Personality: doesn't ge… moret attached to anyone, but very loyal
Background: he worked in the police force for a while before it all happened. Doesn't like to talk about anything about his past.
EPISODE 1
CHAPTER 2
James: Alright! Lets go get her David
David: Okay, But i'll need Wilson!
Wilson: Hell No! (Pushes Trey)
T… morerey: Ugh! You asshole!
(The 3 attack the walkers)
David: Ugh, Well... That was, Fun...
Trey: Hello Miss, were gonna get you out of here okay? What's your name?
Stranger: Mel-Me-Melisa... (Melisa jumps at trey and hugs him)
Trey: Hey, Hey. It's Gonna be okay
Jake: I don't know trey, what if she's a bandit? we can't have her here
Trey: Shut Up Jake! She NEEDS Us.
Zara: Hey, lets let her in. she might be helpful
Jake: Fine, But when she kills you all, don't come crying to me...
Trey: Hey, Don't Listen To Him. Your gonna be okay, We'll get you cleaned up, and fed. Do you have any family?
Melisa: No... They Died Before all of this.
Trey: I'm so sorry. How old are you?
Melisa: 16 and a Half. I think...
Trey: Ha, Not easy to count how old you are these days huh?
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Yeah, it really is, and I wouldn't say that if I didn't mean it. I like how things are going for Trey and interested about what's going on with Melisa.
hmmm, well, i already put trey in there, and it would be hard cause i would have to change like most of the chapter, i'm sorry, i'll make him a good guy next chapter.
Yeah, it really is, and I wouldn't say that if I didn't mean it. I like how things are going for Trey and interested about what's going on with Melisa.
Melisa: No, Sorry for bothering you, I just wanted to say that i'm leaving tomorow. I'm sorry if you guys don't trust me. I'll just go sleep somewhere.
Jake: Ugh. Wait.
Melisa: Hmm?
Jake: I trust you. I just don't wanna lose my dad... So sit down, we should get to know each other. Because your not leaving tommorow.
(Melisa smiles and her eyes widen) Melisa: Oh thank you, thank you, thank you!
Jake: Geez, Don't blow a gasket.
(in a different area)
Zara: Hey David, You think that girl is gonna be okay?
David: Yeah, she just needs to figure herself out. Isn't that right Laura? Isn't that right?
Nickolas: Hey Guys, Can you be quiet please?
David: Yeah sure.
Felix: Hey! where is everyone? I'm Back!
Dan: James! Wake up! Felix is back!
James: Ugh, Ok.
David: Good thing your back, Now we can sleep.
(the next morning)
Jake: Ugh... Hey, Get up, Stop laying on me.
Melisa: Hmm? Oh! So sorry!!
Jake: It's Okay.
David: Guys! Get up!
Jake: Dad, wha--
David: Zara is Missing! So is the car!
Jake: Oh shit.
David: Look. Over by the car.
Jake: (jake angrily stares at the ground) Jake: Blood...
David: There's Not Much, Just a few drips. She might not be dead. She was Kidnapped
Jake: Shit... Alright, I'm Going to find her.
Melisa: Not without us.
Trey: Yep.
Jake: Alright.
David: Be careful...
(They leave and arrive at something bad)
Jake: oh god...
(An arm with a bite is on the ground)
Melisa: Guys. Do you know the person who's hand this is?
Episode 1
Chapter 3
(Middle of the Night)
Jake: (snores)
Melisa walks in.
Jake: ugh, hello?
Melisa: Hi.
Jake: Hey. Did … moreMy dad show you where to sleep?
Melisa: No, Sorry for bothering you, I just wanted to say that i'm leaving tomorow. I'm sorry if you guys don't trust me. I'll just go sleep somewhere.
Jake: Ugh. Wait.
Melisa: Hmm?
Jake: I trust you. I just don't wanna lose my dad... So sit down, we should get to know each other. Because your not leaving tommorow.
(Melisa smiles and her eyes widen) Melisa: Oh thank you, thank you, thank you!
Jake: Geez, Don't blow a gasket.
(in a different area)
Zara: Hey David, You think that girl is gonna be okay?
David: Yeah, she just needs to figure herself out. Isn't that right Laura? Isn't that right?
Nickolas: Hey Guys, Can you be quiet please?
David: Yeah sure.
Felix: Hey! where is everyone? I'm Back!
Dan: James! Wake up! Felix is back!
Jam… [view original content]
Episode 1
Chapter 3
(Middle of the Night)
Jake: (snores)
Melisa walks in.
Jake: ugh, hello?
Melisa: Hi.
Jake: Hey. Did … moreMy dad show you where to sleep?
Melisa: No, Sorry for bothering you, I just wanted to say that i'm leaving tomorow. I'm sorry if you guys don't trust me. I'll just go sleep somewhere.
Jake: Ugh. Wait.
Melisa: Hmm?
Jake: I trust you. I just don't wanna lose my dad... So sit down, we should get to know each other. Because your not leaving tommorow.
(Melisa smiles and her eyes widen) Melisa: Oh thank you, thank you, thank you!
Jake: Geez, Don't blow a gasket.
(in a different area)
Zara: Hey David, You think that girl is gonna be okay?
David: Yeah, she just needs to figure herself out. Isn't that right Laura? Isn't that right?
Nickolas: Hey Guys, Can you be quiet please?
David: Yeah sure.
Felix: Hey! where is everyone? I'm Back!
Dan: James! Wake up! Felix is back!
Jam… [view original content]
Comments
that depends on what you guys want him to do.
10 MINUTES LEFT TO VOTE!
Trey goes with David, he checks if it's possible to save her without any of his own getting killed. If it is, he starts shooting walkers so she can get away.
well they're all outside, but if your saying he'll cover him, then sure.
okay, cool.
Nickolas should open the entryway in preparation for David and others.
Wilson: Not i am doing THIS 'push Trey away'
VOTING IS OVER!
Jake
You should give more time , though
Lol
EPISODE 1
CHAPTER 2
James: Alright! Lets go get her David
David: Okay, But i'll need Wilson!
Wilson: Hell No! (Pushes Trey)
Trey: Ugh! You asshole!
(The 3 attack the walkers)
David: Ugh, Well... That was, Fun...
Trey: Hello Miss, were gonna get you out of here okay? What's your name?
Stranger: Mel-Me-Melisa... (Melisa jumps at trey and hugs him)
Trey: Hey, Hey. It's Gonna be okay
Jake: I don't know trey, what if she's a bandit? we can't have her here
Trey: Shut Up Jake! She NEEDS Us.
Zara: Hey, lets let her in. she might be helpful
Jake: Fine, But when she kills you all, don't come crying to me...
Trey: Hey, Don't Listen To Him. Your gonna be okay, We'll get you cleaned up, and fed. Do you have any family?
Melisa: No... They Died Before all of this.
Trey: I'm so sorry. How old are you?
Melisa: 16 and a Half. I think...
Trey: Ha, Not easy to count how old you are these days huh?
Melisa: (Smiles) Nope.
David: What the hell was that back there?
Jake: Trying To Protect You.
Nickolas: That wasn't protection, That was Straight up Cruelty!
Zara: I'm sorry, but i agree. What did you say when we found Laura again?
Jake: (says in a depressing tone) That, she was just a stupid baby, and could get us killed.
Zara: And she hasn't has she? (Grins)
Jake: yeah...
James: So you two, Nick told me you found something
Dan: yeah...
James: Don't Go off alone please, I can't lose you guys.
Dan and Rebecca: Yes sir.
(they arrive at the warehouse they're staying at.) Trey: Here it is Melisa!
End Chapter
next chapter. yes.
i shall post chapter 3 either in an hour or tomorow, sit tight!
hey, i know i haven't added your character yet, but sit tight, he's in the next chapter
I wanted to help her xd what i said was for making Trey stay
Cool, the story's awesome so far.
oh, sorry, misread it.
No rush, I'm really liking the story though.
you really think so? i don't think it's that good, and i haven't even wrote the good part yet.
It's good in our eyes.
Thanks man, i should be able to get the next part out in 30 minutes, so i'll be AFK til then, but i'll be back!
Its okay , you could still changed it though (dont makr Wilson an asshole)
All the stories that i saw are good , icluinding yours one
Yeah, it really is, and I wouldn't say that if I didn't mean it. I like how things are going for Trey and interested about what's going on with Melisa.
Also for the next part could put Wilson say that he is sorry to James , David and Mellisa (not with Trey , i want to push him again xd)
hmmm, well, i already put trey in there, and it would be hard cause i would have to change like most of the chapter, i'm sorry, i'll make him a good guy next chapter.
well, trey and melisa aren't gonna get together, (put your shipments away god damnit! XD) she was just scared.
What do you have against Trey?
It should be a conflict and because i like pushing Trey
Yeah, an inner group conflict would be good.
Yeah, I love it. This is a great story and I can't wait to see where you go from here.
thanks man!
Yeah! Anytime!
Episode 1
Chapter 3
(Middle of the Night)
Jake: (snores)
Melisa walks in.
Jake: ugh, hello?
Melisa: Hi.
Jake: Hey. Did My dad show you where to sleep?
Melisa: No, Sorry for bothering you, I just wanted to say that i'm leaving tomorow. I'm sorry if you guys don't trust me. I'll just go sleep somewhere.
Jake: Ugh. Wait.
Melisa: Hmm?
Jake: I trust you. I just don't wanna lose my dad... So sit down, we should get to know each other. Because your not leaving tommorow.
(Melisa smiles and her eyes widen) Melisa: Oh thank you, thank you, thank you!
Jake: Geez, Don't blow a gasket.
(in a different area)
Zara: Hey David, You think that girl is gonna be okay?
David: Yeah, she just needs to figure herself out. Isn't that right Laura? Isn't that right?
Nickolas: Hey Guys, Can you be quiet please?
David: Yeah sure.
Felix: Hey! where is everyone? I'm Back!
Dan: James! Wake up! Felix is back!
James: Ugh, Ok.
David: Good thing your back, Now we can sleep.
(the next morning)
Jake: Ugh... Hey, Get up, Stop laying on me.
Melisa: Hmm? Oh! So sorry!!
Jake: It's Okay.
David: Guys! Get up!
Jake: Dad, wha--
David: Zara is Missing! So is the car!
Jake: Oh shit.
David: Look. Over by the car.
Jake: (jake angrily stares at the ground) Jake: Blood...
David: There's Not Much, Just a few drips. She might not be dead. She was Kidnapped
Jake: Shit... Alright, I'm Going to find her.
Melisa: Not without us.
Trey: Yep.
Jake: Alright.
David: Be careful...
(They leave and arrive at something bad)
Jake: oh god...
(An arm with a bite is on the ground)
Melisa: Guys. Do you know the person who's hand this is?
Trey: Th--That's her ring... Zara's Ring...
CHAPTER END.
Next chapter is out now!
It`s Wilson mude or something like that? Xd Why Laura doesnt cry xd , Great Chapter!!!!!!!!
wilson is sleepy.
and laura was sleeping.
Oh shit.
Oh shit indeed...