The Walking Dead: No Safety is over.

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  • that depends on what you guys want him to do.

    supersagig posted: »

    And Laura cries xd And what wil jake and nicolas do?

  • 10 MINUTES LEFT TO VOTE!

    EPISODE 1: All that's Left Chapter 1: Trey: Hey, Zara, How's Laura doing? Zara: She's sleeping like never before, (Chuckles) Jak

  • Trey goes with David, he checks if it's possible to save her without any of his own getting killed. If it is, he starts shooting walkers so she can get away.

    EPISODE 1: All that's Left Chapter 1: Trey: Hey, Zara, How's Laura doing? Zara: She's sleeping like never before, (Chuckles) Jak

  • well they're all outside, but if your saying he'll cover him, then sure.

    UCAAV29784 posted: »

    Nickolas should open the entryway in preparation for David and others.

  • okay, cool.

    Trey goes with David, he checks if it's possible to save her without any of his own getting killed. If it is, he starts shooting walkers so she can get away.

  • Nickolas should open the entryway in preparation for David and others.

    that depends on what you guys want him to do.

  • Wilson: Not i am doing THIS 'push Trey away'

    Trey goes with David, he checks if it's possible to save her without any of his own getting killed. If it is, he starts shooting walkers so she can get away.

  • Jake

    EPISODE 1: All that's Left Chapter 1: Trey: Hey, Zara, How's Laura doing? Zara: She's sleeping like never before, (Chuckles) Jak

  • You should give more time , though

    VOTING IS OVER!

  • edited November 2014

    Lol

    supersagig posted: »

    Wilson: Not i am doing THIS 'push Trey away'

  • EPISODE 1

    CHAPTER 2

    James: Alright! Lets go get her David

    David: Okay, But i'll need Wilson!

    Wilson: Hell No! (Pushes Trey)

    Trey: Ugh! You asshole!

    (The 3 attack the walkers)

    David: Ugh, Well... That was, Fun...

    Trey: Hello Miss, were gonna get you out of here okay? What's your name?

    Stranger: Mel-Me-Melisa... (Melisa jumps at trey and hugs him)

    Trey: Hey, Hey. It's Gonna be okay

    Jake: I don't know trey, what if she's a bandit? we can't have her here

    Trey: Shut Up Jake! She NEEDS Us.

    Zara: Hey, lets let her in. she might be helpful

    Jake: Fine, But when she kills you all, don't come crying to me...

    Trey: Hey, Don't Listen To Him. Your gonna be okay, We'll get you cleaned up, and fed. Do you have any family?

    Melisa: No... They Died Before all of this.

    Trey: I'm so sorry. How old are you?

    Melisa: 16 and a Half. I think...

    Trey: Ha, Not easy to count how old you are these days huh?

    Melisa: (Smiles) Nope.

    David: What the hell was that back there?

    Jake: Trying To Protect You.

    Nickolas: That wasn't protection, That was Straight up Cruelty!

    Zara: I'm sorry, but i agree. What did you say when we found Laura again?

    Jake: (says in a depressing tone) That, she was just a stupid baby, and could get us killed.

    Zara: And she hasn't has she? (Grins)

    Jake: yeah...

    James: So you two, Nick told me you found something

    Dan: yeah...

    James: Don't Go off alone please, I can't lose you guys.

    Dan and Rebecca: Yes sir.

    (they arrive at the warehouse they're staying at.) Trey: Here it is Melisa!

    End Chapter

  • next chapter. yes.

    supersagig posted: »

    You should give more time , though

  • i shall post chapter 3 either in an hour or tomorow, sit tight!

  • hey, i know i haven't added your character yet, but sit tight, he's in the next chapter

    mr.quality posted: »

    Felix Davis Skills: great fighter and can basic med skills Weapons: bolt action rifle and machete Age:20 Personality: doesn't ge

  • I wanted to help her xd what i said was for making Trey stay

    EPISODE 1 CHAPTER 2 James: Alright! Lets go get her David David: Okay, But i'll need Wilson! Wilson: Hell No! (Pushes Trey) T

  • Cool, the story's awesome so far.

    i shall post chapter 3 either in an hour or tomorow, sit tight!

  • oh, sorry, misread it.

    supersagig posted: »

    I wanted to help her xd what i said was for making Trey stay

  • No rush, I'm really liking the story though.

    hey, i know i haven't added your character yet, but sit tight, he's in the next chapter

  • you really think so? i don't think it's that good, and i haven't even wrote the good part yet.

    mr.quality posted: »

    Cool, the story's awesome so far.

  • It's good in our eyes.

    you really think so? i don't think it's that good, and i haven't even wrote the good part yet.

  • Thanks man, i should be able to get the next part out in 30 minutes, so i'll be AFK til then, but i'll be back!

    UCAAV29784 posted: »

    It's good in our eyes.

  • Its okay , you could still changed it though (dont makr Wilson an asshole)

    oh, sorry, misread it.

  • All the stories that i saw are good , icluinding yours one

    you really think so? i don't think it's that good, and i haven't even wrote the good part yet.

  • Yeah, it really is, and I wouldn't say that if I didn't mean it. I like how things are going for Trey and interested about what's going on with Melisa.

    you really think so? i don't think it's that good, and i haven't even wrote the good part yet.

  • Also for the next part could put Wilson say that he is sorry to James , David and Mellisa (not with Trey , i want to push him again xd)

    oh, sorry, misread it.

  • hmmm, well, i already put trey in there, and it would be hard cause i would have to change like most of the chapter, i'm sorry, i'll make him a good guy next chapter.

    supersagig posted: »

    Its okay , you could still changed it though (dont makr Wilson an asshole)

  • well, trey and melisa aren't gonna get together, (put your shipments away god damnit! XD) she was just scared.

    Yeah, it really is, and I wouldn't say that if I didn't mean it. I like how things are going for Trey and interested about what's going on with Melisa.

  • edited November 2014

    What do you have against Trey?

    supersagig posted: »

    Also for the next part could put Wilson say that he is sorry to James , David and Mellisa (not with Trey , i want to push him again xd)

  • It should be a conflict and because i like pushing Trey

    What do you have against Trey?

  • Yeah, an inner group conflict would be good.

    supersagig posted: »

    It should be a conflict and because i like pushing Trey

  • Yeah, I love it. This is a great story and I can't wait to see where you go from here.

    you really think so? i don't think it's that good, and i haven't even wrote the good part yet.

  • thanks man!

    mr.quality posted: »

    Yeah, I love it. This is a great story and I can't wait to see where you go from here.

  • Yeah! Anytime!

    thanks man!

  • edited November 2014

    Episode 1

    Chapter 3

    (Middle of the Night)

    Jake: (snores)

    Melisa walks in.

    Jake: ugh, hello?

    Melisa: Hi.

    Jake: Hey. Did My dad show you where to sleep?

    Melisa: No, Sorry for bothering you, I just wanted to say that i'm leaving tomorow. I'm sorry if you guys don't trust me. I'll just go sleep somewhere.

    Jake: Ugh. Wait.

    Melisa: Hmm?

    Jake: I trust you. I just don't wanna lose my dad... So sit down, we should get to know each other. Because your not leaving tommorow.

    (Melisa smiles and her eyes widen) Melisa: Oh thank you, thank you, thank you!

    Jake: Geez, Don't blow a gasket.

    (in a different area)

    Zara: Hey David, You think that girl is gonna be okay?

    David: Yeah, she just needs to figure herself out. Isn't that right Laura? Isn't that right?

    Nickolas: Hey Guys, Can you be quiet please?

    David: Yeah sure.

    Felix: Hey! where is everyone? I'm Back!

    Dan: James! Wake up! Felix is back!

    James: Ugh, Ok.

    David: Good thing your back, Now we can sleep.

    (the next morning)

    Jake: Ugh... Hey, Get up, Stop laying on me.

    Melisa: Hmm? Oh! So sorry!!

    Jake: It's Okay.

    David: Guys! Get up!

    Jake: Dad, wha--

    David: Zara is Missing! So is the car!

    Jake: Oh shit.

    David: Look. Over by the car.

    Jake: (jake angrily stares at the ground) Jake: Blood...

    David: There's Not Much, Just a few drips. She might not be dead. She was Kidnapped

    Jake: Shit... Alright, I'm Going to find her.

    Melisa: Not without us.

    Trey: Yep.

    Jake: Alright.

    David: Be careful...

    (They leave and arrive at something bad)

    Jake: oh god...

    (An arm with a bite is on the ground)

    Melisa: Guys. Do you know the person who's hand this is?

    Trey: Th--That's her ring... Zara's Ring...

    CHAPTER END.

  • Next chapter is out now!

    mr.quality posted: »

    Yeah! Anytime!

  • It`s Wilson mude or something like that? Xd Why Laura doesnt cry xd , Great Chapter!!!!!!!!

    Episode 1 Chapter 3 (Middle of the Night) Jake: (snores) Melisa walks in. Jake: ugh, hello? Melisa: Hi. Jake: Hey. Did

  • wilson is sleepy.

    and laura was sleeping.

    supersagig posted: »

    It`s Wilson mude or something like that? Xd Why Laura doesnt cry xd , Great Chapter!!!!!!!!

  • Oh shit.

    Episode 1 Chapter 3 (Middle of the Night) Jake: (snores) Melisa walks in. Jake: ugh, hello? Melisa: Hi. Jake: Hey. Did

  • Oh shit indeed...

    Oh shit.

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