Viva La Forum Revolution (Interactive Story)

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  • DAMN IT! @Raging_Blades

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    After what Raging said i can't stop laughing when you make that face. XD

  • edited December 2014

    Creeping :P

    Who said they were dead?

  • edited December 2014

    I'm joining!

    Side: Green's Kawaii Imperials

    Gender: Male

    Age: 20

    Class: High/Rich

    Weapon of Choice: Rapier

  • edited December 2014

    Oh Neon had to kill her uncle how SAD oh i wonder what monster could have brought that upon her......>:D

    Oh and darkness welcome i hope you can finnaly sort this goverment up people seem to make it as unstable

    Forces Divided 2-16 Only a few more left... Creeping's POV Creeping stood before the large vault with man telling him to open it..

  • Father actually, your brother.

    You think that the darkness will ignore your home?

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Oh Neon had to kill her uncle how SAD oh i wonder what monster could have brought that upon her......>:D Oh and darkness welcome i hope you can finnaly sort this goverment up people seem to make it as unstable

  • Yes sorry i misstyped since i knew i was her uncle
    .......and yes i know he was my brother.........................how sad............booo hoo.......... Im so evil

    And also why would the darkness attack those how may have it in their hearts.......MAY have it.....

    Father actually, your brother. You think that the darkness will ignore your home?

  • The Darkness doesn't care about having you as an ally, it will force you to make it an ally.

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Yes sorry i misstyped since i knew i was her uncle .......and yes i know he was my brother.........................how sad............booo

  • Then may the cards read as they may...................... I have no fear......

    The Darkness doesn't care about having you as an ally, it will force you to make it an ally.

  • ;P

    It will never be over.

    DAMN IT! @Raging_Blades

  • Forces Divided 2-17

    Wow...The First non-planned death...

    Awesomeo's POV

    The servant starts to untie Awesomeo...

    Servant- So are you going to listen to me?

    Awesomeo-No.

    Servant-What...

    The servant finishes untying Awesomeo but doesn't go to Mustache.

    Servant- I was trying to help.

    A wall blows up behind the servant and he jumps out of it. Awesomeo runs to Mustache and starts to untie him. Soon a handful of guards and Lord EAA come running in.

    EAA- Grab them!

    Awesomeo finishes and then jumps out of the hole in the wall. Mustache gets up and starts running toward the hole. He gets shot in the leg by an arrow but keeps running, he jumps out of the window. Awesomeo and Mustache run across fallen beams of the falling palace and docks. A ship is in harbor firing upon the city and it flys the colors of the Imperials. Soon Mustache slips and falls barely hanging onto the beam. A guard runs out and fires an arrow the goes right through Mustache's head and makes his body fall into the water. Awesomeo keeps running, sick from what he just saw. Awesomeo soon makes it on the ship and looks around to see all sorts of people and then he is knocked out by a large man.


    Kaleion's POV

    Kaleion stands on the wall of Fort Mistern, a mysterious woman standing in front of him. He swings his sword missing and her then disarming him and throwing it over the edge. She knocks him on the ground and laughs.

    ???- More fit than the guards but no more smarter.

    Kaleion struggles to get up but by the time he can the woman is on the side of the tower.

    ???- Nice meeting you, let's hope to meet again!

    She jumps off the edge and Kaleion has lost his only lead...


    No Hope's POV

    No Hope and Bloop stand hiding behind a wall. Hope moves and tries to get a differnet angle only to see that the figure was a dead body. Suddenly Bloop runs out to attack hits the body. Bloop is then hit with an arrow and The Banker jumps out of nowhere and attacks him. Hope jumps into action only to be ambushed by Swaps. The battle rages and Hope takes out both of the swaps but Bloop isn't so lucky. The Banker knocks Bloop out with the butt of his sword. The Banker shows his face to Hope...JewFreeUs. JFU runs out of the building with Bloop in hand with Hope close behind. More swaps ambush Hope and Hope fights them as he sees JFU hop on a boat and start sailing. Hope kills the swaps and watches as the boat sails away...

    End of Chapter

  • Excellent Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Forces Divided 2-17 Wow...The First non-planned death... Awesomeo's POV The servant starts to untie Awesomeo... Servant- So are

  • Glad to see these are back :)

    Forces Divided 2-17 Wow...The First non-planned death... Awesomeo's POV The servant starts to untie Awesomeo... Servant- So are

  • Didn't exactly take a optional break. :P

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Glad to see these are back

  • edited December 2014

    I think maybe I should join, if you'd allow it.

    Faction: Rebels, as you may imagine.b

    Speciality: Is relatively okay with a sword. Also, if you're okay with it, he was a doctor before the rebellion.

    Class Before Rebellion: Middle

    Gender: Male

    Age: 25

  • Oh course you may join!

    This looks good, see you in the war. :P

    I think maybe I should join, if you'd allow it. Faction: Rebels, as you may imagine.b Speciality: Is relatively okay with a sword. Als

  • Well I got knocked down and laughed that, that's pretty much exactly how most of fights go in real life.

    Forces Divided 2-17 Wow...The First non-planned death... Awesomeo's POV The servant starts to untie Awesomeo... Servant- So are

  • Forces Divided 2-18

    The end of an episode...

    Golden's POV

    Golden and Salt ride on horses next to a covered wagon. Golden looks over to the old man steering the cart and horses.

    Golden- Thanks again.

    Man- No problem...You're rebels aren't you?

    Golden- Yes.

    Man- Ugh...That's fine with me. You all were hurt, I couldn't leave yall for dead. Let me guess you were running from RiverPort. Deserters?

    Golden- Not exactly.

    Golden thought to himself to keep the secret that he and his friends here were actually the Rebel High Command. Golden looked towards the back of the wagon.

    Man- Now don't worry about them...They're safe with my son.

    Salt- Will they be okay?

    Man- No clue...Pretty beat up.

    Golden remembers running into them and the man and his son patching up Hello World and Lee. They were resting in the back with the man's son and Sagig watching over them.

    Golden- So...You a merchant?

    Man- Old me? No. He chuckles I'm a farmer...Well my son is.

    Salt- So you just delievering this?

    Man- Yup.

    Soon enough the wagon is stopped by armed Imperials. Golden motions to Salt to be ready, the Imperials walk over and start questioning the old man and one walks over to Golden.

    Imperial- So...What's your business.

    Golden- Nothing but being an armed escort.

    Imperial- What's so important about this?

    Golden- It's transporting goods and wounded civilians to St.Terra Bay.

    Imperial-...So it seems.

    Soon the same man walked over to Salt. After a chat the man pulls his sword and Salt does too. Golden pulls his sword and starts to attack, Golden yells out for Sagig to get eeryone out. Suddenly cannon fire rained upon the group setting the area ablaze.

    Golden- SALT? WHERE ARE YOU BROTHER!

    Salt- OVER HERE!

    Golden runs through the flames to see Salt taking to someone and then being knocked out. He then saw Sagig also being knocked out and a group of people carrying Hello World and Lee. He runs through the flames forgetting the old man and his son just to get to his friends. He gets out and comes face to face with a man in giant armor.

    Golden-...Hello?

    The man knocks Golden out...Later he wakes out in a room, it felt like it was moving. He gets up only to have two men suited in what looked like Imperial Navy outfits come in and restrain him.

    Sailor- Sir, please relax.

    Golden fought them off with all of his might and ran outside. He noticed he was on large flagship in the middle of a large fleet in the middle of the ocean. The two men catch up and tackle Golden. A man in a Imperial Navy Captian outfit calls them off. The two men help Golden up.

    ???- Sorry for the...Problems.

    Golden- Who are you? Where are my friends? Where are we?

    ???- Oh yes...I'm Captain Fallandir of the Imperial Armada...The now Rebel Armada.

    Golden-...What?

    Fallandir- I'm on your side, I had to help you and your friends out. Here, I'll get them for you.

    Fallandir leads Golden downstairs to where Salt and Awesomeo were getting refreshments and food. Golden runs and hugs them both. Golden then notices Hello World, Sagig, and Lee all being taken care of by trained doctors.

    Golden-...How...How can I repay you.

    Fallandir- By winning this war, Green sent us on a mission only to try and kill us with an ambush. We are your soldiers now, what's our mission.

    Golden-...

    End of Episode 2

  • So I've been gone for a few parts WTF happened?

    Forces Divided 2-18 The end of an episode... Golden's POV Golden and Salt ride on horses next to a covered wagon. Golden looks over

  • Stuff...You should go read. :P

    So I've been gone for a few parts WTF happened?

  • Reading is for nerds like @fallandir.

    Stuff...You should go read. :P

  • Good Job! :D

    Forces Divided 2-18 The end of an episode... Golden's POV Golden and Salt ride on horses next to a covered wagon. Golden looks over

  • Great Chapter!!!!

    Forces Divided 2-18 The end of an episode... Golden's POV Golden and Salt ride on horses next to a covered wagon. Golden looks over

  • Awesome chapter!!!!!

    Forces Divided 2-18 The end of an episode... Golden's POV Golden and Salt ride on horses next to a covered wagon. Golden looks over

  • edited December 2014

    Reading is for nerds like @fallandir.


    nerds like @fallandir.

    Alt text

    Who dares to call me nerd?! I'll rip your throat out, you bas--

    Oh wait, is this bunch of new posts I sense? Need to read that all. Sorry CC, your throat's gonna wait.

    reads angrily through the story

    Ha!

    Captain Fallandir

    See, Creeping, get your facts straight. "Nerds like Captian Fallandir".

    Nice, I'm in. Thanks Golden for including me, hope we're gonna plunder, burn and kill all the bad guys.

    Reading is for nerds like @fallandir.

  • edited January 2015

    A Blast From The Past 3-1

    The Imperial Palace is dead quiet as General Gustav and Raging walk down the long hall. The Royal guards look at Raging...Who only has one arm. What replaces that is now an empty space representing what the Rebels took. The two enter the Grand Hall and approach Empress Green.

    Green-So...You failed and ruined yourself in the process.

    Raging- I Will get revenge.

    Green- I don't want your revenge...You failed me and made yourself worthless.

    Raging- What are you saying?

    Gustav steps away from Raging and guards surround her. Archers on the upper walkway aim at Raging.

    Green- You are a very dangerous woman Blade...Just like what your compainions turned into.

    Raging- My...Blades?...Did you...Fucking kill them?

    Green- I had to.

    Raging knocks down the front guards and charge at Green, arrows are shot in both of her legs before she does. Raging falls onto the steps and looks up to see the archers aiming for her head now...Green didn't move a muscle.

    Green-They...Changed. Your brother and sisters didn't exist anymore and we killed them.

    Raging- YOU MURDERED THE ORDER!

    Green- I had to.

    Raging- I WILL fucking kill you.

    Green- No...I will see you executed tomorrow morning.

    Raging- To see the order finally die...Was this your plan? Send me after the Rebel leader...You either win the war or I die...

    Green- Guards...Take the Blade away.

    Guards pick up Raging and move her out of the room to the cells. Green looks over to Gustav.

    Green- That was a failure.

    Gustav- Yes...Yes it was.

    Green- Clean yourself up and then report back to me.

    Gustav walks out of the room and a new person wrapped up in all black and green wearing a hood walks in.

    Green- Perfect you arrived.

    ???- Hello my Empress.

    Green- Listen you will be replacing Golden as my spymaster and ambassador. Is that understood Liquid of the Broken Isles?

    Liquid- Yes, My Empress.

    Green- Good, you arrived at a bad time.

    Green and Liquid walk into a hallway which leads to Green's War Room usually occupied by Gustav and not the Empress herself.

    Green- I have bad news...A seal has been broken.

    End of Chapter

  • Awesome Chapter!!!!

    A Blast From The Past 3-1 The Imperial Palace is dead quiet as General Gustav and Raging walk down the long hall. The Royal guards look a

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    A Blast From The Past 3-1 The Imperial Palace is dead quiet as General Gustav and Raging walk down the long hall. The Royal guards look a

  • No...I will see you executed tomorrow morning.

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    A Blast From The Past 3-1 The Imperial Palace is dead quiet as General Gustav and Raging walk down the long hall. The Royal guards look a

  • Great chapter!!!

    A Blast From The Past 3-1 The Imperial Palace is dead quiet as General Gustav and Raging walk down the long hall. The Royal guards look a

  • And I'm in! Really great chapter!

    A Blast From The Past 3-1 The Imperial Palace is dead quiet as General Gustav and Raging walk down the long hall. The Royal guards look a

  • A Blast From The Past 3-2

    Raging sits in her cell, waiting for the early sun to rise and for her death. In the middle of the night guards came to her cell inside the Imperial Palace. They opened the cell and dragged hr out.

    Raging- So...You getting me the luxery cell?

    Imperial Guard- No, we are suppose to move you to the Imperial Citadel for your execution tomorrow morning.

    Raging is escorted out and onto a wagon with a built in cell. Raging passes through the forests outside of The Imperial City and through many Imperial Checkpoints...The sun starts to rise...Time almost out. The wagon stops at one of the last checkpoints and there are surprisingly zero guards. The wagon slowly passes through and upon entering the other side arrows and people jump/fly out and kill the guards. Raging grabs one with the chain and strangles them. A man in a hood walks out...

    ???- Hello Blade.

    Raging- Who are you?

    Raging still sits in the cell with the arrows now facing her.

    ???- I'm VERY important and I came to offer you a way out...To rebuild your order...To get Revenge.

    Raging- I'm listening...

    The hooded man flips his hood back and reveals himself as Pipas, the Information Broker.

    Pipas- I came offering news of an...Alliance. A very important Imperial noble wishes to...Add a third challenger to this war. We would love to have you be apart of this and...We could replace your arm.

    Raging- And if I refuse?

    Pipas- You can stay and die.

    Raging-...Deal.

    The soldiers let Raging out and they all run off into the forest...

    End of the Chapter

  • Damnnn Pipas

    Awesome Chapter!!!!!!!

    A Blast From The Past 3-2 Raging sits in her cell, waiting for the early sun to rise and for her death. In the middle of the night guards

  • I have a drastic turn coming up in the story...NEXT chapter.

    Anyone want a hint?

    To get it you have to answer a riddle...You have two coins (American)...They add up to 16 cents and ONE of them is NOT a penny.

    What are the two coins?

  • So like Skyrim, Pipas is Alduin, and I'm the Dragonborn. He saves me from execution but in the end I'll kill him. :3

    A Blast From The Past 3-2 Raging sits in her cell, waiting for the early sun to rise and for her death. In the middle of the night guards

  • Then who is the noble?

    So like Skyrim, Pipas is Alduin, and I'm the Dragonborn. He saves me from execution but in the end I'll kill him.

  • Well Green sentenced me to death so Green is General Tullius, and Golden is Ulfric Stormcloak but he wasn't with me, it's not exactly the same I was just making a small comparison :P.

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Then who is the noble?

  • NO i meant Pipas boss is an imperial noble so in this comparison who is he....Miraak?

    Well Green sentenced me to death so Green is General Tullius, and Golden is Ulfric Stormcloak but he wasn't with me, it's not exactly the same I was just making a small comparison :P.

  • This doesn't make any sense, does...Not...Compute...

    [Dies]

    I have a drastic turn coming up in the story...NEXT chapter. Anyone want a hint? To get it you have to answer a riddle...You have two coins (American)...They add up to 16 cents and ONE of them is NOT a penny. What are the two coins?

  • To be honest im a riddle expert and i have no idea

    But i have mi suspicions as to who pipas boss is.......

    I have a drastic turn coming up in the story...NEXT chapter. Anyone want a hint? To get it you have to answer a riddle...You have two coins (American)...They add up to 16 cents and ONE of them is NOT a penny. What are the two coins?

  • I guess you all aren't getting the hint...Here's a hint for the Riddle.

    ONE

    @NoHopeLeft

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    To be honest im a riddle expert and i have no idea But i have mi suspicions as to who pipas boss is.......

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