Thank you, you have no idea how much your review means to me ;_; And yep I'll be sure to let you know when it's ready. I'm not sure if I'll post stories directly on here though. I prefer sometimes not to have too many copies of a fic out there in case I need to edit [otherwise I'd have to go through ALL the versions to correct them and deviantart has really tortured me for that.]
But I got really sad writing about Nick's death and him getting bitten. Funny though that If I'd known Kenny was going to come back, it might've been him that I'd of written in Nick's place, with everything playing out much differently [oh hell yeah that would've been a boat put somewhere in there lol]. Regardless i'm glad I wrote Nick. After him becoming a determined character, I'm worried he'll get killed off in a really horrible way later down the road. And I'm at least glad I got to write something to say goodbye to that adorable dork.
Nicky on the other hand...er...don't hate me now, but in the earlier versions I was really planning for that baby to get munched by walkers. It was to do with this whole thing where Clementine was going to trick Carver into thinking she'd run off with the baby when he showed up, but she was only holding blankets and had actually hidden the baby somewhere else, and it pissed Carver off [and again Luke came in to help her] but when they went back to where Clementine hid the baby, a walker was feasting on Nicky who was already long dead by then and Luke wouldn't let a distraught Clem see what was left of her o_o
But yeah, I went through a couple versions before I finally settled on what I did. I just felt the baby's death needed to be something that they couldn't control, and sort of less gory in death and more in terms of natural causes. That's why the flashback thing was so long, I seperated all the themes instead of trying to cram them all into one crazy ass sequence that just really didn't work and felt rushed, especially when at one point i'd tried to include to Nick in the whole thing with Carver.
Anyway thanks for all the kinds words and support. You've really made my week :P
Right finished the review I edited my review and added it on. Thanks for writing and make sure comment here and remind me when part 3 is out… more CANT WAIT. Also write any story here if you want or just read storys on the thread there all awesome anyway thanks
No problem and no thank you for sharing such a quality story. Mean just leave a comment here just saying next part is done then I'll review it so I know anyway need read next part of this masterpiece so excited. This story deserved decent review thanks for sharing
I'm taking a break from writing for a while but have contributed 4 story's to the thread to read while your waiting lol
The Last Of Us/The Walking Dead crossover in OP
Clem Practice chapter top of page 3
The Dark Knight/Walking Dead Cross over bottom of page 3
The Wolf Among/ The Walking Dead Cross over middle of page 6
If want read them any feedback will be appreciated thank you
So over to the Users looking forward to lots of great stories coming up and as always anyone can write story here or share a link promise decent review and thumb thanks for reading
Insanity: Burnin' and Lootin'. Chapter 2 I need to get some sleep, but I would feel like shit if I didn't post up this story before I did.
… more After a little applied pressure, the door swung open, and hit against the wall. Asim brought his crowbar back to a defensive position, ready to swing at any walking corpses that dared to go near him, but just as he expected: nothing inside. He let out a sigh and scanned the room. It was a small motel room, a white tiled bathroom in the back, covered in pieces of trash from the nearby tipped over trashcan, and a bed. Asim got down in a prone position and checked under the bed, nothing but a towel. “Maybe there’s a mini-fridge, somewhere.” He said to himself as he started to lose faith that this room contained any useful supplies. He looked over his shoulder at a wooden paneled closet, and slowly brought his firefighter ax out, without moving his vision away from the closet. Asim gently touched the small … [view original content]
You'll come back and write me story one day on this thread Blades won't you your so talented and now you have your brilliant thread probably forgotten about it miss your awesome story's here we you return one day Blades?
You'll come back and write me story one day on this thread Blades won't you your so talented and now you have your brilliant thread probably forgotten about it miss your awesome story's here we you return one day Blades?
Ok no concentrate on your awesome thread not in a bad way come back one day whenever month etc don't mind but one day if bored with freetime make a story know where to post it bro your doing brilliant job I'm a big fan of your thread btw also can just back every now and again and read the awesome new story's lol
Ok no concentrate on your awesome thread not in a bad way come back one day whenever month etc don't mind but one day if bored with freetime… more make a story know where to post it bro your doing brilliant job I'm a big fan of your thread btw also can just back every now and again and read the awesome new story's lol
Say wait for the full story so I can get the full experience all at once so won't forget parts helps also see how pacing is with the story helps with reviews thanks delighted no pressure btw take your time
Okay . Would you like me to release all chapters at same time or one by one?
It doesn't really matter to me but I prefer all at once so you can review.
I want to write a story too! I'm not that great though... What happened at Savannah (because I got dam lucky isn't a real explanation) warning, it's as told by Kenny.
If you saved Ben (might write other version latter if I have time and if this one turns out ok.)
And then I tried to save that shirt bird Ben. What a mistake that was. Walkers from every direction closing in on me, no way I was getting out of that ally, in ether direction, no way to climb up ether. the walkers behind me jumped on the kid, used my last bullet to shot him too. But at least he distracted them, guess he was finally useful for something.
Clem: There's no way you could have gotten out of that/how did you get out?/you shouldn't talk about Ben that way/...
Kenny: (Sorry Clem, I know you liked Ben but that kid brought us nothing but trouble, anyway) it's funny, you know what they say about your life flashing before your eyes? We'll for some darn reason all I could think about was the time lee got himself trapped in an ally with walkers, remember that? Then it hit me, couldn't go left, couldn't go right, sure as hell couldn't get back up, but what about down? Must have been dam lucky, if you can call anything lucky anymore, cause there was a grate right where I needed it to be. Didn't have much time but when a mans cornered like that, I tore that grate off like a wild man. Used one of the poles from the railing that had broken off, and leapt down. Managed to make my way to the edge of savannah through those sewers, took a while though, got completely lost. You don't know how many times I wished for that map of lees, hell I'd have appreciated Vernon by that point, after I'd whacked him a few times anyway. Don't get me wrong it was bad down there not nearly as bad as the streets but still, that pole came in handy more than once I can tell you. But the important part is that I made it out. The only thing I'm ashamed of is not going back for you darlin, but between the time It took me to get out and all I had seen... I just... I'm so sorry hon. Forgive Kenny/don't forgive Kenny.
This is very good use a title make couple of more chapters have excellent story there thanks for the share then give you a full review. Don't worry none of us are professional writers just for a bit of fun but you have talent there don't worry
I want to write a story too! I'm not that great though...
What happened at Savannah (because I got dam lucky isn't a real explanation) warn… moreing, it's as told by Kenny.
If you saved Ben (might write other version latter if I have time and if this one turns out ok.)
And then I tried to save that shirt bird Ben. What a mistake that was. Walkers from every direction closing in on me, no way I was getting out of that ally, in ether direction, no way to climb up ether. the walkers behind me jumped on the kid, used my last bullet to shot him too. But at least he distracted them, guess he was finally useful for something.
Clem: There's no way you could have gotten out of that/how did you get out?/you shouldn't talk about Ben that way/...
Kenny: (Sorry Clem, I know you liked Ben but that kid brought us nothing but trouble, anyway) it's funny, you know what they say about your life flashing before your eyes? We'll for some darn reason all I c… [view original content]
Thank you, for the positive review! I'm going to try and get started on my next segment after I'm done with my next Battle Royale. One question though, should the name of this episode be "Memories" or "Burnin' and Lootin'"?
So, I see that a lot of Fan-fic people are making threads for their stories. Do you think I should make one for Insanity? I'd still post my stories on here, too, even if I had a thread.
Thank you, for the positive review! I'm going to try and get started on my next segment after I'm done with my next Battle Royale. One question though, should the name of this episode be "Memories" or "Burnin' and Lootin'"?
So, I see that a lot of Fan-fic people are making threads for their stories. Do you think I should make one for Insanity? I'd still post my stories on here, too, even if I had a thread.
As promised to Tobi TWD and TWAU crossover
Chapter 1 The Walking Bigby
Bigby arrived in Cranes office he was in clear distress shaking… more "Bigby I need you to investigate urgently" Crane said. "Why" Bigby responded. Crane looked at Bigby with fear in his eyes " There's been outbreak of a mundy virus affecting fables you see because of our immune system we become a zombie only for a limited time when infected till we recover to normal again. But if a fable when in zombie state during that short period bites a human it creates a supervirus making the human a fable zombie and because the virus is more powerful more brain is kept in use making the zombies able to use their fable powers. But most horrifying of all humans don't have the same immune system as us so it creates a permanent fable zombie. It's spreading quickly Bigby if you don't go out and stop the spread by time the fable zombies reach Fabletown we will have no chance and most cert… [view original content]
Recommend reading on thread when your not busy not copy and paste might sound stupid but I think the visual of the pictures sets the tone for each chapter and adds to the overall experience plus get to see awesome picture at the end of each chapter lol
As promised to Tobi TWD and TWAU crossover
Chapter 1 The Walking Bigby
Bigby arrived in Cranes office he was in clear distress shaking… more "Bigby I need you to investigate urgently" Crane said. "Why" Bigby responded. Crane looked at Bigby with fear in his eyes " There's been outbreak of a mundy virus affecting fables you see because of our immune system we become a zombie only for a limited time when infected till we recover to normal again. But if a fable when in zombie state during that short period bites a human it creates a supervirus making the human a fable zombie and because the virus is more powerful more brain is kept in use making the zombies able to use their fable powers. But most horrifying of all humans don't have the same immune system as us so it creates a permanent fable zombie. It's spreading quickly Bigby if you don't go out and stop the spread by time the fable zombies reach Fabletown we will have no chance and most cert… [view original content]
The following is a preview of my not fully completed storyboard, in the storyboard itself, you are given choices, but for the sake of this p… morereview, I chose the voice options and choices the character would be making throughout the game. Main character, for reference sake, is my profile picture, art done by JonGon. If anyone leaves any constructive criticism, I would be much obliged. Enjoy!
“We were hungry! It was an act of desperation! Please, you have to believe me!” “Shut the fuck up!” Asim yelled as he hit the man’s face with the blunt edge of his crowbar. “An act of desperation?! Raping two teenagers is an act of desperation!? Tying men to a tree and leaving them for the freaks is an act of desperation!? You and your friends are monsters!” The bandit coughed up blood from where he sat, tied to a lawn chair, and it slowly poured from his mouth and onto his dark blue jacket. Asim waited for him to be finished, then aggressively took off … [view original content]
This thread I made packed full of quality stories but if mean Clay pg 8
But next part of Clay on p8 one of the best or Blades or myself(l… moreol I try)(but to many to chose)
But most recently probably one of the best ever read on this thread(just perfection)
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10181591/1/Growing-Pains
Ps: Always welcome to write story here anytime you want seen your drawings your so talented be cool to have story by you here.
Yeah sorry mate, i've been super busy the last couple of days and i've been getting next to no sleep and working almost non stop, a lot of stress. This is my lazy catching up on sleep day, i'm going to pick up where I left off tomorrow.
I apologised to SaltLick, I don't know if he read it or not but I explained to him that I was under a lot of stress working too much and not getting enough sleep. I actually felt really bad about the stuff I said once I had got some sleep and was no longer borderline delirious.
lol ok take your time as for other issue you apologized and it's resolved respect you for that like me a lot every now and again say something random and get myself in trouble which don't mean believe me I've said much worse stuff here lol but thanks can't wait for the story
Yeah sorry mate, i've been super busy the last couple of days and i've been getting next to no sleep and working almost non stop, a lot of s… moretress. This is my lazy catching up on sleep day, i'm going to pick up where I left off tomorrow.
I apologised to SaltLick, I don't know if he read it or not but I explained to him that I was under a lot of stress working too much and not getting enough sleep. I actually felt really bad about the stuff I said once I had got some sleep and was no longer borderline delirious.
Ah come on your very talented look I'm not that great myself yet I have 4 stories on this thread it's more about trying something creative come on be fun and I'll review and thumb it
Wow 10 likes and 3.2K views just take the time to thank all the storytellers for making this thread what is it and can't wait for more story's in the future Thank you
Wow 10 likes and 3.2K views just take the time to thank all the storytellers for making this thread what is it and can't wait for more story's in the future Thank you
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Awesome already so the ending is destined to be good as well. As your waiting for free time recommend reading my stories for inspiration lol
Thanks Ben
Thank you, you have no idea how much your review means to me ;_; And yep I'll be sure to let you know when it's ready. I'm not sure if I'll post stories directly on here though. I prefer sometimes not to have too many copies of a fic out there in case I need to edit [otherwise I'd have to go through ALL the versions to correct them and deviantart has really tortured me for that.]
But I got really sad writing about Nick's death and him getting bitten. Funny though that If I'd known Kenny was going to come back, it might've been him that I'd of written in Nick's place, with everything playing out much differently [oh hell yeah that would've been a boat put somewhere in there lol]. Regardless i'm glad I wrote Nick. After him becoming a determined character, I'm worried he'll get killed off in a really horrible way later down the road. And I'm at least glad I got to write something to say goodbye to that adorable dork.
Nicky on the other hand...er...don't hate me now, but in the earlier versions I was really planning for that baby to get munched by walkers. It was to do with this whole thing where Clementine was going to trick Carver into thinking she'd run off with the baby when he showed up, but she was only holding blankets and had actually hidden the baby somewhere else, and it pissed Carver off [and again Luke came in to help her] but when they went back to where Clementine hid the baby, a walker was feasting on Nicky who was already long dead by then and Luke wouldn't let a distraught Clem see what was left of her o_o
But yeah, I went through a couple versions before I finally settled on what I did. I just felt the baby's death needed to be something that they couldn't control, and sort of less gory in death and more in terms of natural causes. That's why the flashback thing was so long, I seperated all the themes instead of trying to cram them all into one crazy ass sequence that just really didn't work and felt rushed, especially when at one point i'd tried to include to Nick in the whole thing with Carver.
Anyway thanks for all the kinds words and support. You've really made my week :P
Your review was like a big cookie! Thanks Mark.
No problem and no thank you for sharing such a quality story. Mean just leave a comment here just saying next part is done then I'll review it so I know anyway need read next part of this masterpiece so excited. This story deserved decent review thanks for sharing
I'm taking a break from writing for a while but have contributed 4 story's to the thread to read while your waiting lol
The Last Of Us/The Walking Dead crossover in OP
Clem Practice chapter top of page 3
The Dark Knight/Walking Dead Cross over bottom of page 3
The Wolf Among/ The Walking Dead Cross over middle of page 6
If want read them any feedback will be appreciated thank you
So over to the Users looking forward to lots of great stories coming up and as always anyone can write story here or share a link promise decent review and thumb thanks for reading
You'll come back and write me story one day on this thread Blades won't you your so talented and now you have your brilliant thread probably forgotten about it miss your awesome story's here we you return one day Blades?
One day. But this word explains it all soon.
I'm so sorry bro! I'm trying my best
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Ok no concentrate on your awesome thread not in a bad way come back one day whenever month etc don't mind but one day if bored with freetime make a story know where to post it bro your doing brilliant job I'm a big fan of your thread btw also can just back every now and again and read the awesome new story's lol
Okay
. Would you like me to release all chapters at same time or one by one?
It doesn't really matter to me but I prefer all at once so you can review.
Say wait for the full story so I can get the full experience all at once so won't forget parts helps also see how pacing is with the story helps with reviews thanks delighted no pressure btw take your time
I want to write a story too! I'm not that great though...
What happened at Savannah (because I got dam lucky isn't a real explanation) warning, it's as told by Kenny.
If you saved Ben (might write other version latter if I have time and if this one turns out ok.)
And then I tried to save that shirt bird Ben. What a mistake that was. Walkers from every direction closing in on me, no way I was getting out of that ally, in ether direction, no way to climb up ether. the walkers behind me jumped on the kid, used my last bullet to shot him too. But at least he distracted them, guess he was finally useful for something.
Clem: There's no way you could have gotten out of that/how did you get out?/you shouldn't talk about Ben that way/...
Kenny: (Sorry Clem, I know you liked Ben but that kid brought us nothing but trouble, anyway) it's funny, you know what they say about your life flashing before your eyes? We'll for some darn reason all I could think about was the time lee got himself trapped in an ally with walkers, remember that? Then it hit me, couldn't go left, couldn't go right, sure as hell couldn't get back up, but what about down? Must have been dam lucky, if you can call anything lucky anymore, cause there was a grate right where I needed it to be. Didn't have much time but when a mans cornered like that, I tore that grate off like a wild man. Used one of the poles from the railing that had broken off, and leapt down. Managed to make my way to the edge of savannah through those sewers, took a while though, got completely lost. You don't know how many times I wished for that map of lees, hell I'd have appreciated Vernon by that point, after I'd whacked him a few times anyway. Don't get me wrong it was bad down there not nearly as bad as the streets but still, that pole came in handy more than once I can tell you. But the important part is that I made it out. The only thing I'm ashamed of is not going back for you darlin, but between the time It took me to get out and all I had seen... I just... I'm so sorry hon.
Forgive Kenny/don't forgive Kenny.
This is very good use a title make couple of more chapters have excellent story there thanks for the share then give you a full review. Don't worry none of us are professional writers just for a bit of fun but you have talent there don't worry
Thank you!
SPOILERS
This isn't exactly a fan-fic, but a parody - a short animated gag I made based on my experience and scenes from S02E02. Check it out and enjoy...
SPOILERS
Thank you, for the positive review! I'm going to try and get started on my next segment after I'm done with my next Battle Royale. One question though, should the name of this episode be "Memories" or "Burnin' and Lootin'"?
So, I see that a lot of Fan-fic people are making threads for their stories. Do you think I should make one for Insanity? I'd still post my stories on here, too, even if I had a thread.
No prob for sharing such quality story and maybe Memories just like it so deep lol
yes why hell not in my opinion it's a quality story that should be shared love the ambition go for it
I copied it so I can read it when not so busy.
Tobi reading my story ^
No prob Tobi whenever not busy read it you'll enjoy it's as insane as my usually stories but you will love it lol
lol slightly disturbing but funny want stories but that was funny thanks for share
BABY PARROTS
HELL YES
Welcome Azlyn first visit to my story thread nice lol
Recommend reading on thread when your not busy not copy and paste might sound stupid but I think the visual of the pictures sets the tone for each chapter and adds to the overall experience plus get to see awesome picture at the end of each chapter lol
lmao
Adored this crossover such exciting read and well written good job
Thanks very much glad you enjoyed it MrT
Matt I demand you finish this masterpiece whenever you have the time of course
Just found this story and I just have to say, I'm honored to have helped a talented writer as yourself. Great fucking story man!
He wrote the sequel on pg8 I recommend reading it's class as well
Is this the first part or am I missing more quality stories?
This thread I made packed full of quality stories but if mean Clay pg 8
But next part of Clay on p8 one of the best or Blades or myself(lol I try)(but to many to chose)
But most recently probably one of the best ever read on this thread(just perfection)
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10181591/1/Growing-Pains
Ps: Always welcome to write story here anytime you want seen your drawings your so talented be cool to have story by you here.
I can't write a story to save my own life lol.
Yeah sorry mate, i've been super busy the last couple of days and i've been getting next to no sleep and working almost non stop, a lot of stress. This is my lazy catching up on sleep day, i'm going to pick up where I left off tomorrow.
I apologised to SaltLick, I don't know if he read it or not but I explained to him that I was under a lot of stress working too much and not getting enough sleep. I actually felt really bad about the stuff I said once I had got some sleep and was no longer borderline delirious.
lol ok take your time as for other issue you apologized and it's resolved respect you for that like me a lot every now and again say something random and get myself in trouble which don't mean believe me I've said much worse stuff here lol but thanks can't wait for the story
Ah come on your very talented look I'm not that great myself yet I have 4 stories on this thread it's more about trying something creative come on be fun and I'll review and thumb it
Wow 10 likes and 3.2K views just take the time to thank all the storytellers for making this thread what is it and can't wait for more story's in the future Thank you
It's ok Mark, likes don't matter, nobody likes me
lol know but nothing to do with the fact I can't just say bump so always say something that looks good
Matt thats not true what I learned since joining this forum is they learn to hate you less each day believe me lol