So... Here's part 2
The resting place part 2
Melissa Johnson: Stay there. I'm gonna go check it out.
Then she walks over to the do… moreor which was slightly open.
Melissa: This is the police. Come out with yo-
Then she opens the door and a huge rock comes down on her head and crushes her skull. Half of the guests stare, and the other half start screaming. Patrick starts crying.
Philip: ...Holy SHIT...
Quinn: Who put the rock there?
Elvira: And who fired the gun?
Steven lowered his rifle and goes into the room. Philip and Jeff follow. They walk into an empty room. There were no bullet holes and no gun.
Philip: ...Is this paranormal activity or what?
Steven: No. Ghosts don't exist.
Philip: Well, I happen to believe in ghostbusters.
Then Jeff notices a crack in the wall. He walked toward it. He opens it up and see's a gun and a string attached to a timer.
Jeff: GUUUUUUYS?
Philip: What?
Then they walk o… [view original content]
So... Here's part 2
The resting place part 2
Melissa Johnson: Stay there. I'm gonna go check it out.
Then she walks over to the do… moreor which was slightly open.
Melissa: This is the police. Come out with yo-
Then she opens the door and a huge rock comes down on her head and crushes her skull. Half of the guests stare, and the other half start screaming. Patrick starts crying.
Philip: ...Holy SHIT...
Quinn: Who put the rock there?
Elvira: And who fired the gun?
Steven lowered his rifle and goes into the room. Philip and Jeff follow. They walk into an empty room. There were no bullet holes and no gun.
Philip: ...Is this paranormal activity or what?
Steven: No. Ghosts don't exist.
Philip: Well, I happen to believe in ghostbusters.
Then Jeff notices a crack in the wall. He walked toward it. He opens it up and see's a gun and a string attached to a timer.
Jeff: GUUUUUUYS?
Philip: What?
Then they walk o… [view original content]
So... Here's part 2
The resting place part 2
Melissa Johnson: Stay there. I'm gonna go check it out.
Then she walks over to the do… moreor which was slightly open.
Melissa: This is the police. Come out with yo-
Then she opens the door and a huge rock comes down on her head and crushes her skull. Half of the guests stare, and the other half start screaming. Patrick starts crying.
Philip: ...Holy SHIT...
Quinn: Who put the rock there?
Elvira: And who fired the gun?
Steven lowered his rifle and goes into the room. Philip and Jeff follow. They walk into an empty room. There were no bullet holes and no gun.
Philip: ...Is this paranormal activity or what?
Steven: No. Ghosts don't exist.
Philip: Well, I happen to believe in ghostbusters.
Then Jeff notices a crack in the wall. He walked toward it. He opens it up and see's a gun and a string attached to a timer.
Jeff: GUUUUUUYS?
Philip: What?
Then they walk o… [view original content]
Philip: Are you kidding me? We need to get the HELL out of here before anyone else dies by this lunatic sociopath.
Jeff: I agree with Steven.
Philip: Well, I'll call the cops. (Takes out phone) Damn it. No signal.
Jeff: I'll call everybody over here.
They all sit down
Philip: So, everybody. My idiot friend wanted to investigate instead of GTFO.
Elvira: W-w-why couldn't you call the cops?
Philip: No signal, sweetheart. Any way, Jeff would like to speak.
Jeff: We're all here to investigate the murder of Melissa Johnson.
Quinn: And others.
Jeff: You don't know that.
Violet: Then why is the door chained shut?
Steven: It is?
Elvira: Yep.
Jeff: So... We're stuck here until we find a way to get help.
Quinn: Basically.
Then they hear a door open and close.
Philip: Where did that come from?
Steven: Sounds like it came from my quarters. But I lock that...
Jeff does a headcount
Jeff: Everyone's here.
Steven: We should check it out.
Quinn: You go check it out. I'm staying.
Patrick: Me too.
Jeff: So only the adults then. Let's go.
They leave
Quinn: I think this is dumb. You usually don't go toward a noise when you are trapped in a house with a killer.
Then The adults go to the door. Stevens cautiously moves toward the door and unlocks and opens it. There was nothing in there
Stevens: I thought no one could get through me lo-
Then a knife attached to a rope swings down and stabs him in the eye. They all stare. He drops the rifle and falls to the ground. Jeff checks his pulse.
Jeff: He's dead.
Philip: Well who get's the rifle? I'm pretty good with guns.
Jeff: Give the rifle for some one (tell me who, but not the kids) or Not anyone (So you don't give the murderer it)
The resting place part 3
Steven: I think we should investigate.
Philip: Are you kidding me? We need to get the HELL out of here before… more anyone else dies by this lunatic sociopath.
Jeff: I agree with Steven.
Philip: Well, I'll call the cops. (Takes out phone) Damn it. No signal.
Jeff: I'll call everybody over here.
They all sit down
Philip: So, everybody. My idiot friend wanted to investigate instead of GTFO.
Elvira: W-w-why couldn't you call the cops?
Philip: No signal, sweetheart. Any way, Jeff would like to speak.
Jeff: We're all here to investigate the murder of Melissa Johnson.
Quinn: And others.
Jeff: You don't know that.
Violet: Then why is the door chained shut?
Steven: It is?
Elvira: Yep.
Jeff: So... We're stuck here until we find a way to get help.
Quinn: Basically.
Then they hear a door open and close.
Philip: Where did that come from?
Steven: Sounds like it came from my qua… [view original content]
The resting place part 3
Steven: I think we should investigate.
Philip: Are you kidding me? We need to get the HELL out of here before… more anyone else dies by this lunatic sociopath.
Jeff: I agree with Steven.
Philip: Well, I'll call the cops. (Takes out phone) Damn it. No signal.
Jeff: I'll call everybody over here.
They all sit down
Philip: So, everybody. My idiot friend wanted to investigate instead of GTFO.
Elvira: W-w-why couldn't you call the cops?
Philip: No signal, sweetheart. Any way, Jeff would like to speak.
Jeff: We're all here to investigate the murder of Melissa Johnson.
Quinn: And others.
Jeff: You don't know that.
Violet: Then why is the door chained shut?
Steven: It is?
Elvira: Yep.
Jeff: So... We're stuck here until we find a way to get help.
Quinn: Basically.
Then they hear a door open and close.
Philip: Where did that come from?
Steven: Sounds like it came from my qua… [view original content]
The resting place part 3
Steven: I think we should investigate.
Philip: Are you kidding me? We need to get the HELL out of here before… more anyone else dies by this lunatic sociopath.
Jeff: I agree with Steven.
Philip: Well, I'll call the cops. (Takes out phone) Damn it. No signal.
Jeff: I'll call everybody over here.
They all sit down
Philip: So, everybody. My idiot friend wanted to investigate instead of GTFO.
Elvira: W-w-why couldn't you call the cops?
Philip: No signal, sweetheart. Any way, Jeff would like to speak.
Jeff: We're all here to investigate the murder of Melissa Johnson.
Quinn: And others.
Jeff: You don't know that.
Violet: Then why is the door chained shut?
Steven: It is?
Elvira: Yep.
Jeff: So... We're stuck here until we find a way to get help.
Quinn: Basically.
Then they hear a door open and close.
Philip: Where did that come from?
Steven: Sounds like it came from my qua… [view original content]
The resting place part 4
Jeff: I guess I'll hold onto the rifle.
Philip: You know how to use it?
Jeff: ...Yeah. I think so. Let's g… moreo back to the room.
Then they walk back. Philip and Jeff start talking.
Philip: So... Now what?
Jeff: We need a plan.
Philip: And quick. We've been here an hour and 2 people are dead. And we're trapped inside with that killer.
Jeff: Yeah... We could have everyone stay inside this room and whoever leaves we decide is the killer.
Philip: That could work... What's the back op plan?
Jeff: We use the rifle or We run and hide.
So 8 people left! Tell me what you guys think
The resting place part 4
Jeff: I guess I'll hold onto the rifle.
Philip: You know how to use it?
Jeff: ...Yeah. I think so. Let's g… moreo back to the room.
Then they walk back. Philip and Jeff start talking.
Philip: So... Now what?
Jeff: We need a plan.
Philip: And quick. We've been here an hour and 2 people are dead. And we're trapped inside with that killer.
Jeff: Yeah... We could have everyone stay inside this room and whoever leaves we decide is the killer.
Philip: That could work... What's the back op plan?
Jeff: We use the rifle or We run and hide.
So 8 people left! Tell me what you guys think
The resting place part 4
Jeff: I guess I'll hold onto the rifle.
Philip: You know how to use it?
Jeff: ...Yeah. I think so. Let's g… moreo back to the room.
Then they walk back. Philip and Jeff start talking.
Philip: So... Now what?
Jeff: We need a plan.
Philip: And quick. We've been here an hour and 2 people are dead. And we're trapped inside with that killer.
Jeff: Yeah... We could have everyone stay inside this room and whoever leaves we decide is the killer.
Philip: That could work... What's the back op plan?
Jeff: We use the rifle or We run and hide.
So 8 people left! Tell me what you guys think
The resting place part 5
Jeff: We run and hide.
Philip: Sound good.
Then they get to the room and everyone sits down.
Quinn: Whe… morere's Steven?
Trevor: Dead with a knife in his eye.
Quinn: Oh. OK.
Jeff: So, we have a plan. We stay in this room and whoever leaves without permission is the killer.
Trevor: What good will that do? The killer set up traps before hand. We saw it twice!
Jeff: We... Um... Run and hide.
Trevor: When you have a goddamn rifle right in your hand.
Jeff: Look just follow the plan and we'll be fine.
Philip: Yep.
Then a gun goes off and the bullet hits Trevor in the face.
Philip: HOLY SHIT!
Take out rifle and turn around, Turn around or Do headcount.
The resting place part 5
Jeff: We run and hide.
Philip: Sound good.
Then they get to the room and everyone sits down.
Quinn: Whe… morere's Steven?
Trevor: Dead with a knife in his eye.
Quinn: Oh. OK.
Jeff: So, we have a plan. We stay in this room and whoever leaves without permission is the killer.
Trevor: What good will that do? The killer set up traps before hand. We saw it twice!
Jeff: We... Um... Run and hide.
Trevor: When you have a goddamn rifle right in your hand.
Jeff: Look just follow the plan and we'll be fine.
Philip: Yep.
Then a gun goes off and the bullet hits Trevor in the face.
Philip: HOLY SHIT!
Take out rifle and turn around, Turn around or Do headcount.
The resting place part 6
Jeff: 1, 2, 3... They're all here.
Quinn: Because no one's behind you.
Then he turns around and the gun fr… moreom the timer was smoking.
Jeff: I thought the gun was full of blanks?
Philip: It was. I swear!
Jeff: Where did anyone get ammo?
Quinn: Someone could have brought ammo.
Elvira: Or stole some from Steven's room.
Then Philip walks over to the gun and picks it up.
Philip: Can I hold on to this?
Jeff: I guess you can.
Violet: Now what?
Elvira: I'm kind of hungry.
Violet: Ok. I'll go get some food. Can I go?
Jeff: Yeah. I'll make sure no one leaves.
Then Violet leaves. She opens the refrigerator and a knife gets launches at her. It gets her in the shoulder and she screams.
Quinn: OH Crap!
Philip: We have to help her!
Quinn: But last time you went toward a noise you lost the last authority member here!
Run to the scream or Stay there
Tell me what you guys thi… [view original content]
The resting place part 6
Jeff: 1, 2, 3... They're all here.
Quinn: Because no one's behind you.
Then he turns around and the gun fr… moreom the timer was smoking.
Jeff: I thought the gun was full of blanks?
Philip: It was. I swear!
Jeff: Where did anyone get ammo?
Quinn: Someone could have brought ammo.
Elvira: Or stole some from Steven's room.
Then Philip walks over to the gun and picks it up.
Philip: Can I hold on to this?
Jeff: I guess you can.
Violet: Now what?
Elvira: I'm kind of hungry.
Violet: Ok. I'll go get some food. Can I go?
Jeff: Yeah. I'll make sure no one leaves.
Then Violet leaves. She opens the refrigerator and a knife gets launches at her. It gets her in the shoulder and she screams.
Quinn: OH Crap!
Philip: We have to help her!
Quinn: But last time you went toward a noise you lost the last authority member here!
Run to the scream or Stay there
Tell me what you guys thi… [view original content]
The resting place part 6
Jeff: 1, 2, 3... They're all here.
Quinn: Because no one's behind you.
Then he turns around and the gun fr… moreom the timer was smoking.
Jeff: I thought the gun was full of blanks?
Philip: It was. I swear!
Jeff: Where did anyone get ammo?
Quinn: Someone could have brought ammo.
Elvira: Or stole some from Steven's room.
Then Philip walks over to the gun and picks it up.
Philip: Can I hold on to this?
Jeff: I guess you can.
Violet: Now what?
Elvira: I'm kind of hungry.
Violet: Ok. I'll go get some food. Can I go?
Jeff: Yeah. I'll make sure no one leaves.
Then Violet leaves. She opens the refrigerator and a knife gets launches at her. It gets her in the shoulder and she screams.
Quinn: OH Crap!
Philip: We have to help her!
Quinn: But last time you went toward a noise you lost the last authority member here!
Run to the scream or Stay there
Tell me what you guys thi… [view original content]
The resting place part 7
We heard Violet scream, so we decided to run to the scream. We found her in a pool of blood.
Jeff: Oh my god!… more
Quinn: MOM!
Then she starts crying.
Violet: M... Make sure nothing happens... To Quinn... (Dies)
Jeff: I'm... Sorry for your loss, Quinn.
Philip: Now what?
Christine: I could try for a signal on the balcony.
Jeff: But, you might die.
Christine: Well, I'm gonna die in this craphole anyway. I might as well try.
Jeff: Just go.
Then Christine leaves. A little after she leaves, Jeff notices one other person missing. Christine made it upstairs and is looking for a signal. She get's one.
Christine: YES!
She starts to dial 911, but someone comes up behind her.
Philip: You should really listen to Jeff more.
Then he shoots her 3 times and crushes the phone. Then he heads downstairs.
Patrick: What do we do?
Jeff: Stay there, I'll get him. or Go. Hide.
The resting place part 7
We heard Violet scream, so we decided to run to the scream. We found her in a pool of blood.
Jeff: Oh my god!… more
Quinn: MOM!
Then she starts crying.
Violet: M... Make sure nothing happens... To Quinn... (Dies)
Jeff: I'm... Sorry for your loss, Quinn.
Philip: Now what?
Christine: I could try for a signal on the balcony.
Jeff: But, you might die.
Christine: Well, I'm gonna die in this craphole anyway. I might as well try.
Jeff: Just go.
Then Christine leaves. A little after she leaves, Jeff notices one other person missing. Christine made it upstairs and is looking for a signal. She get's one.
Christine: YES!
She starts to dial 911, but someone comes up behind her.
Philip: You should really listen to Jeff more.
Then he shoots her 3 times and crushes the phone. Then he heads downstairs.
Patrick: What do we do?
Jeff: Stay there, I'll get him. or Go. Hide.
We heard Violet scream, so we decided to run to the scream. We found her in a pool of blood.
Jeff: Oh my god!
Quinn: MOM!
Then she starts crying.
Violet: M... Make sure nothing happens... To Quinn... (Dies)
Jeff: I'm... Sorry for your loss, Quinn.
Philip: Now what?
Christine: I could try for a signal on the balcony.
Jeff: But, you might die.
Christine: Well, I'm gonna die in this craphole anyway. I might as well try.
Jeff: Just go.
Then Christine leaves. A little after she leaves, Jeff notices one other person missing. Christine made it upstairs and is looking for a signal. She get's one.
Christine: YES!
She starts to dial 911, but someone comes up behind her.
Philip: You should really listen to Jeff more.
Then he shoots her 3 times and crushes the phone. Then he heads downstairs.
Comments
Get the hell out of here - It's time to GTFO!
No idea, no idea. ;P
Investigate further I feel like Jeff is next.... idk why....
Yep
Maybe he is... But I'll never tell. I plan to release another part today. And we need a tie breaker.
Investigate
Thanks!
http://www.strawpoll.me/3245630, http://www.strawpoll.me/3245648, http://www.strawpoll.me/3245668 and http://www.strawpoll.me/3245686
Interesting...
The resting place part 3
Steven: I think we should investigate.
Philip: Are you kidding me? We need to get the HELL out of here before anyone else dies by this lunatic sociopath.
Jeff: I agree with Steven.
Philip: Well, I'll call the cops. (Takes out phone) Damn it. No signal.
Jeff: I'll call everybody over here.
They all sit down
Philip: So, everybody. My idiot friend wanted to investigate instead of GTFO.
Elvira: W-w-why couldn't you call the cops?
Philip: No signal, sweetheart. Any way, Jeff would like to speak.
Jeff: We're all here to investigate the murder of Melissa Johnson.
Quinn: And others.
Jeff: You don't know that.
Violet: Then why is the door chained shut?
Steven: It is?
Elvira: Yep.
Jeff: So... We're stuck here until we find a way to get help.
Quinn: Basically.
Then they hear a door open and close.
Philip: Where did that come from?
Steven: Sounds like it came from my quarters. But I lock that...
Jeff does a headcount
Jeff: Everyone's here.
Steven: We should check it out.
Quinn: You go check it out. I'm staying.
Patrick: Me too.
Jeff: So only the adults then. Let's go.
They leave
Quinn: I think this is dumb. You usually don't go toward a noise when you are trapped in a house with a killer.
Then The adults go to the door. Stevens cautiously moves toward the door and unlocks and opens it. There was nothing in there
Stevens: I thought no one could get through me lo-
Then a knife attached to a rope swings down and stabs him in the eye. They all stare. He drops the rifle and falls to the ground. Jeff checks his pulse.
Jeff: He's dead.
Philip: Well who get's the rifle? I'm pretty good with guns.
Jeff: Give the rifle for some one (tell me who, but not the kids) or Not anyone (So you don't give the murderer it)
Give the rifle to Philip >:3
Everyone's dropping like fly's XD
Give the rifle to Jeff
Yep. XD
Nice choice!
I feel like he'll die next but Give the rifle to Jeff
Thanks!
The resting place part 4
Jeff: I guess I'll hold onto the rifle.
Philip: You know how to use it?
Jeff: ...Yeah. I think so. Let's go back to the room.
Then they walk back. Philip and Jeff start talking.
Philip: So... Now what?
Jeff: We need a plan.
Philip: And quick. We've been here an hour and 2 people are dead. And we're trapped inside with that killer.
Jeff: Yeah... We could have everyone stay inside this room and whoever leaves we decide is the killer.
Philip: That could work... What's the back op plan?
Jeff: We use the rifle or We run and hide.
So 8 people left! Tell me what you guys think
We run and hide.
Great Chapter!!!!!!
We run and hide
Thanks!
Good Job So Far
We run and hide
Thanks!
The resting place part 5
Jeff: We run and hide.
Philip: Sound good.
Then they get to the room and everyone sits down.
Quinn: Where's Steven?
Trevor: Dead with a knife in his eye.
Quinn: Oh. OK.
Jeff: So, we have a plan. We stay in this room and whoever leaves without permission is the killer.
Trevor: What good will that do? The killer set up traps before hand. We saw it twice!
Jeff: We... Um... Run and hide.
Trevor: When you have a goddamn rifle right in your hand.
Jeff: Look just follow the plan and we'll be fine.
Philip: Yep.
Then a gun goes off and the bullet hits Trevor in the face.
Philip: HOLY SHIT!
Take out rifle and turn around, Turn around or Do headcount.
Do headcount.
Do Headcount Things are getting intense...
Yep.
The resting place part 6
Jeff: 1, 2, 3... They're all here.
Quinn: Because no one's behind you.
Then he turns around and the gun from the timer was smoking.
Jeff: I thought the gun was full of blanks?
Philip: It was. I swear!
Jeff: Where did anyone get ammo?
Quinn: Someone could have brought ammo.
Elvira: Or stole some from Steven's room.
Then Philip walks over to the gun and picks it up.
Philip: Can I hold on to this?
Jeff: I guess you can.
Violet: Now what?
Elvira: I'm kind of hungry.
Violet: Ok. I'll go get some food. Can I go?
Jeff: Yeah. I'll make sure no one leaves.
Then Violet leaves. She opens the refrigerator and a knife gets launches at her. It gets her in the shoulder and she screams.
Quinn: OH Crap!
Philip: We have to help her!
Quinn: But last time you went toward a noise you lost the last authority member here!
Run to the scream or Stay there
Tell me what you guys think! Next part you find out who the killer is
. I won't be having another part until Dec 27th.
Run to the scream DIE DIE XD
Great Chapter!!!!!
Good Job! And i'll say Stay There Merry Christmas!
Merry Christasm!!!
Thanks! XD
Thanks and merry christmas to you as well!
SuperSagig I can't find your comment but Merry Christmas to you as well!
Merry Christmas!
Run to the scream
Thanks!
o.o WTF
Go. Hide.
Awesome Chapter!!!
Phillip........ Go.Hide
The resting place part 7
We heard Violet scream, so we decided to run to the scream. We found her in a pool of blood.
Jeff: Oh my god!
Quinn: MOM!
Then she starts crying.
Violet: M... Make sure nothing happens... To Quinn... (Dies)
Jeff: I'm... Sorry for your loss, Quinn.
Philip: Now what?
Christine: I could try for a signal on the balcony.
Jeff: But, you might die.
Christine: Well, I'm gonna die in this craphole anyway. I might as well try.
Jeff: Just go.
Then Christine leaves. A little after she leaves, Jeff notices one other person missing. Christine made it upstairs and is looking for a signal. She get's one.
Christine: YES!
She starts to dial 911, but someone comes up behind her.
Philip: You should really listen to Jeff more.
Then he shoots her 3 times and crushes the phone. Then he heads downstairs.
Patrick: What do we do?
Jeff: Stay there, I'll get him. or Go. Hide.
Thanks! Shit's gonna go down.