The Walking Dead: No Safety is over.

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  • [Stay with Her] Die for the Love , bitches Xd. Great Chapter!!!!

    Chapter 3: Everywhere. Episode 4: Traitor Jake: So, How do you Four Know each other? Samuel: It was... Before This group... We were al

  • Thanks! I'm trying to improve on the story, I guess it might be paying off.

    supersagig posted: »

    [Stay with Her] Die for the Love , bitches Xd. Great Chapter!!!!

  • ...it is, isn't it.

    Yeah, I'm going to make it take a little brighter turn, but don't get too comfortable... The episode IS Called "Traitor" after all...

  • Yep... (Evil Laughter)

    mr.quality posted: »

    ...it is, isn't it.

  • If Samuel goes down, stay, but if he doesn't, then leave.

    He hasn't said that he murdered James. I don't entirely trust him yet.

    Chapter 3: Everywhere. Episode 4: Traitor Jake: So, How do you Four Know each other? Samuel: It was... Before This group... We were al

  • [Stay]- I have no idea why, just feel like it...

    Chapter 3: Everywhere. Episode 4: Traitor Jake: So, How do you Four Know each other? Samuel: It was... Before This group... We were al

  • VOTING CLOSED!

    [Stay with Her]

  • Chapter 3. Episode 4.

    [Stay with her]

    Jake: Yeah, Okay... Dad, I'm staying down here.

    David: Got it Kiddo.

    Jake: (Wraps His arm around Melisa) I don't ever wanna lose you, Y'know that? Just, uh, Losing people, It brings out, Bad things... Not a day goes by, where losing myself... Is a worse possibility

    Melisa: What do you mean?

    Jake: It's... When something like that happens, when it's so, sudden. When someone you love is ripped away from you... It, Changes People, And when you change in the apocalypse... You're too far gone.

    Melisa: I don't wanna lose who you are. Please... Don't leave.

    Jake: Ha, I wont. You wont need to worry about that. I wont ever leave you.

    Melisa: (Kisses Jake) I know.

    (Meanwhile)

    David: Well, What do we do?

    Samuel: We wait. Watch... See what happens.

    David: Okay.

    (Later)

    Jake: Got any Twos?

    Mina: Nope.

    Wilson: Nah.

    Dallas: Aw, shit. Yep. That a bad thing?

    (Meanwhile)

    Eva: Do you know how to do this?

    David: Melisa taught me. I mean, 70% was her telling me i did it wrong, But, you know.

    Eva: Well, that's great.

    (Richard stands on watch)

    Richard: Uh, Sam?!

    Samuel: Yeah...

    Richard: They're Coming From Behind the RV!

    Samuel: Shit! Everyone Brace! Jacob! Drive!

    Jacob: No shit! Where?!

    Samuel: Through the Herd In front!

    David: Are you out of your fucking mind?!

    Samuel: THERE'S AN OPENING! DRIVE!

    (Jacob drives through)

    Samuel: Shit! Watch the road boy!

    Jacob: I AM!

    Jacob: SHIT!

    (They spin and crash)

    (The group wakes up)

    Wilson: WAKE UP! JARROD! WAKE UP!

    Jake: Dammit! Come on everyone!

    Mina: HELP ME! (Her leg is stuck)

    Samuel: Fuck! I think He's Dead! I THINK HE'S DEAD! JACOB! COME ON!

    Jake: Help Me close the fucking door! There's snow and walkers everywhere!

    Who should Dallas Help? Who should David help? Who should Richard Help?

    [Help Jake] [Help Mina] [Help Samuel] [Help Wilson]

    Chapter End!

    I loved writing this one! Thank you guys for support! I wrote this in the middle of a snow storm, so it kinda made my plot work!

  • @supersagig @NoHopeLeft @UCAAV29784 and @mr.quality THE NEW CHAPTER IS HERE!

    Chapter 3. Episode 4. [Stay with her] Jake: Yeah, Okay... Dad, I'm staying down here. David: Got it Kiddo. Jake: (Wraps His arm

  • [Help Mina]

    Awesome chapter!!!

    Chapter 3. Episode 4. [Stay with her] Jake: Yeah, Okay... Dad, I'm staying down here. David: Got it Kiddo. Jake: (Wraps His arm

  • Dallas for Mina

    David for Jake

    Richard for Wilson.

    Bye, bye Samuel ;D

    Chapter 3. Episode 4. [Stay with her] Jake: Yeah, Okay... Dad, I'm staying down here. David: Got it Kiddo. Jake: (Wraps His arm

  • edited December 2014

    Dallas should help Mina. David and Richard should help Wilson

    Awesome Chapter!!!

    Chapter 3. Episode 4. [Stay with her] Jake: Yeah, Okay... Dad, I'm staying down here. David: Got it Kiddo. Jake: (Wraps His arm

  • Dallas helps Mina

    David helps Jake

    Richard helps Wilson.

    Chapter 3. Episode 4. [Stay with her] Jake: Yeah, Okay... Dad, I'm staying down here. David: Got it Kiddo. Jake: (Wraps His arm

  • VOTING CLOSED!

    Dallas will help Mina

    Richard Will Help Jake

    David: Will help wilson

  • Chapter 4 Episode 4

    Richard: Shit! Jake, hang on!

    Jake: COME ON! UGH! THE WIND IS TOO STRONG!

    Mina: Thank you Dallas!

    Dallas: Okay, Okay, we're gonna get you out, I promise.

    Mina: Ugh! (Mina is free)

    David: Hang on Wilson, What's wrong with him?!

    Wilson: He just wont wake up!

    David: Okay, Hang on... One, Two, Three, Four, Five, Six, Come on Jarrod, COME ON!

    Jarrod: (Breathes) Agh, Shit! My leg!

    Samuel: Dammit! JACOB! NO! He's stopped breathing...

    Jake: COME ON EVERYONE! THE DOOR WONT CLOSE! LET'S GO!

    Samuel: I'm sorry kid... (Shoots Jacob) Let's go!

    (The group runs through the highway)

    Samuel: Come on! Let's go!

    (Wilson begins panicking and can't hear anything as walkers are everywhere)

    Samuel: WILSON! MOVE!

    (Jake takcles wilson and covers his head)

    (Samuel shoots a car engine)

    Samuel: RUN!

    (The group leaves the highway)

    Eva: Can anyone tell me how the fuck that happened?

    (Melisa is sobbing)

    Jake: Shh, Shh, It's okay... Can we rest?

    Samuel: We need to find a city.

    Jake: Fuck that, She needs to rest goddammit.

    Melisa: (Sniffles) Jake, I-I'm fine.

    Jake: Are you sure?

    Melisa: Yeah, I'm just a little Shaken up. That's all.

    Dan: Wilson, Are you okay man? You kinda blanked out back there...

    Wilson: I, I don't know how to answer that.

    Dan: It's okay, You just need to calm down.

    Samuel: Look, there's a big semi over there. We can camp out there.

    Eva: Okay, let's go everyone.

    CHAPTER END! thing's will get interesting, don't worry... ;)

  • @supersagig @NoHopeLeft @UCAAV29784 and @mr.quality THE NEW CHAPTER IS HERE!

    Chapter 4 Episode 4 Richard: Shit! Jake, hang on! Jake: COME ON! UGH! THE WIND IS TOO STRONG! Mina: Thank you Dallas! Dallas: Ok

  • Awesome chapter!!!!!!!!

    Chapter 4 Episode 4 Richard: Shit! Jake, hang on! Jake: COME ON! UGH! THE WIND IS TOO STRONG! Mina: Thank you Dallas! Dallas: Ok

  • Awesome Chapter!!!!!

    Chapter 4 Episode 4 Richard: Shit! Jake, hang on! Jake: COME ON! UGH! THE WIND IS TOO STRONG! Mina: Thank you Dallas! Dallas: Ok

  • Chapter 5 Episode 4

    (Samuel is sharpening a knife)

    Samuel: (Dan grunts) It's okay Kiddo.

    Ryan: I'm still not sure we can trust you. What, What happened, Before?

    Samuel: Some... Some serious shit...

    (Ryan Frowns)

    Samuel: I met, A little girl. Her name was Amy, She was alone. I saved her from a herd, Thought i could leave her behind after, Heh, Nope. Damn girl clung on to me. And, I guess,
    I needed her too. We were together... Everytime I saw her, Everytime she hugged me, When she called me... Daddy. I was so happy. She changed me. Didn't last long.
    We were attacked... I Tried to help her, I got grabbed, She helped me out, she got grabbed and bit. I tried to go back, And the last thing i ever heard her say was, "Daddy, Run."
    I ran, And in two days, Found myself no where. I was gonna kill myself, I heard a yell, It was james... I apoligized... Said i'd take care of Danny and Becca.

    Ryan: It's okay old man, You and me, We'll keep them safe. Let's get some sleep.

    (The next morning)

    Dan: Sam! Wake up! Something's going on!

    Ryan: Shut Up! We can handle this without shouting!

    David: You need to chill the fuck out!

    Eva: I'm running this group!

    David: Yeah, Right into the ground!

    Melisa: Shut Up! Both of you! Laura's Sleeping!

    Clem: You're Both acting like fucking children!

    AJ: Clem, Calm Dow--

    Clem: STAY OUTTA THIS!

    Kenny: Dammit! Calm down!

    David: Shut up asshole!

    Dan: Hurry!

    Jarrod: CALM DOWN! YELLING ABOUT THIS WILL JUST GET US KILLED!

    Melisa: Tell Clementine and Eva That!

    Clem: SHUT UP NOW!

    Samuel: What's Going On?

    Melisa: Shut. The fuck up!

    (Clementine pulls out a gun and aims at Melisa)

    Kenny: CLEM! NO!

    BANG!

    (Kenny pushed Melisa and Laura out of the way and was shot)

    (Clem's eyes widen)

    David: Clem, CLEM NO!

    (Clem shoots herself)

    Melisa: Oh my god...

    JANUARY 2016. 1 MONTH LATER...

    CHAPTER END!

    So yeah, I kinda wanted this one to be a shock, yes, it really sucked. But i really thought that clem and ken's characters were underused, and didn't belong there. sorry.

  • @supersagig @NoHopeLeft @UCAAV29784 and @mr.quality THE NEW CHAPTER IS HERE!

    Chapter 5 Episode 4 (Samuel is sharpening a knife) Samuel: (Dan grunts) It's okay Kiddo. Ryan: I'm still not sure we can trust you.

  • Ya know, Samuel is actually Ryan's age......

    Chapter 5 Episode 4 (Samuel is sharpening a knife) Samuel: (Dan grunts) It's okay Kiddo. Ryan: I'm still not sure we can trust you.

  • Fuuuuu....

    Good chapter.

    Chapter 5 Episode 4 (Samuel is sharpening a knife) Samuel: (Dan grunts) It's okay Kiddo. Ryan: I'm still not sure we can trust you.

  • Good Chapter!!!

    Chapter 5 Episode 4 (Samuel is sharpening a knife) Samuel: (Dan grunts) It's okay Kiddo. Ryan: I'm still not sure we can trust you.

  • Chapter 6 Episode 4

    January.

    Wilson: How much further to the camp? I'm freeazing my ass off.

    Becca: I don't know. Hopefully soon.

    Richard: Hey you two, Keep up!

    Wilson: Did you hear Samuel Going off at ryan last night?

    Becca: It Doesn't bother me. I'm more scared for Dan, He keeps trying to stop them, Get in the middle of it. it scares me...

    Wilson: Yeah, No shit. What buisness does he think he has doing that? if they're angry, let em fight!

    Becca: He isn't like that... He wants to help... Anyway he can, and I'm scared he's gonna get hurt.

    Richard: We're here.

    Ryan: You got the supplies?

    Wilson: Yeah...

    Ryan: Good, She might need them in this weather.

    (Meanwhile)

    Dan: Hey jake... How's Melisa Holding up?

    Jake: Good, I hope. She was sick to her god damn stomache a week ago, Now she's so tired and in pain she can't move. I'm worried.

    Dan: We all are. And we'll help you through buddy.

    Jake: Thanks.

    Ryan: They got the Meds.

    Jake: Oh thank god.

    Melisa: (Coughs) Jake... Wh-where are you?

    Jake: Shh, I'm right here. We have some medicine for you...

    Melisa: Thank you... I feel more awake now. Can Dr. Richard tell me whats wrong?

    Richard: Hmm? Oh. Yeah Sure. Leave please, I don't need an audience.

    Jake: I'm staying.

    Richard: Okay.

    (Meanwhile)

    Eva: Zzzzz

    (David wakes up)

    David: Ugh... Hmm? (David smiles at Eva)

    (David leaves the tent)

    Samuel: Good, You're awake. Rich is taking a look at Melisa Now.

    David: Okay...

    Samuel: David.

    David: Yep?

    Samuel: How did it get this bad?

    David: Your guess is as good as mine.

    Jake: What?! Seriously?!

    David: Hmm?

    (The two walk in.)

    Richard: Yep, She is.

    Jake: (Smiles)

    David: Huh? What the...?

    Melisa: Mr. Hark. I'm pregnant.

    David: What?

    Jake: This is amazing! I need to find supplies!

    David: I...

    Samuel: looks like you're a grandad.

    Melisa: Okay, Calm down Jake, Haha.

    David: (Smiles)

    CHAPTER END.

    Idk, I was bored, My xbox broke, But i have a REAL good plot coming up guys.

  • @supersagig @NoHopeLeft @UCAAV29784 and @mr.quality THE NEW CHAPTER IS HERE!

    Chapter 6 Episode 4 January. Wilson: How much further to the camp? I'm freeazing my ass off. Becca: I don't know. Hopefully soon.

  • THE BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!!!

    Chapter 6 Episode 4 January. Wilson: How much further to the camp? I'm freeazing my ass off. Becca: I don't know. Hopefully soon.

  • Lol. I thought you made an error with the grandad thing. Then I realized the situation. Nice chapter.

    Chapter 6 Episode 4 January. Wilson: How much further to the camp? I'm freeazing my ass off. Becca: I don't know. Hopefully soon.

  • Really? I thought it was pretty lazy.

    supersagig posted: »

    THE BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!!!

  • Great chapter!!!!!!

    Chapter 6 Episode 4 January. Wilson: How much further to the camp? I'm freeazing my ass off. Becca: I don't know. Hopefully soon.

  • Chapter 7 Episode 4 ------ FINAL CHAPTER

    1 MONTH LATER

    Eva: Hang on Kiddo, We'll get you somewhere to rest.

    Melisa: N-no, I'm fine.

    David: No, It's okay, There's a gas station just up the way.

    Wilson: So, What City are we going to?

    David: Chicago. It's about 20 More miles away. The gas station is just 2.

    Jake: Hey guys, I'm back. Hon, I got you and everyone else some food.

    Melisa: Thank you... But we need to keep moving.

    Jake: Okay.

    Samuel: So david, When are we getting there?

    David: By tomorrow, I hope.

    (They arrive at the gas station)

    Samuel: Hang on, I'll check it out.

    Dan: I'll come too.

    Samuel: Hello?

    Bandit: Don't move.

    Dan: Help...

    Samuel: Hey, Look man, I know it's hard out here. but you don't wanna shoot an innocent boy, You could shoot me, But will killing either us get you anywhere?

    Bandit: Shut up, Please. Just go.

    Samuel: Okay man, I'll leave. Just... Give me the boy.

    Bandit: No, I don't wanna be alone here.

    (Samuel moves towards him)

    Samuel: Then take me, I'll help you, Just... Don't do anything stupid.

    (The bandit let's dan go outside)

    Samuel: Good, Good, Now, Give me your gun, so nothing happens.

    Bandit: No, You're a liar.

    (The bandit gut shots Samuel)

    Dan: NO! (Dan shoots the bandit in the chest and stabs him over and over again)

    Ryan: Shit! Come on Sam! Sam, You gotta fuckin' pull through! COME ON SAM! I wont let you die samuel! Fuck! Get up! Someone! Help!

    (Samuel's Eyes Fade as he hears faintly) Ryan: PLEASE! NO!

    Episode end... Mid Season Finale coming soon.

  • @supersagig @NoHopeLeft @UCAAV29784 and @mr.quality THE NEW CHAPTER IS HERE!

    Chapter 7 Episode 4 ------ FINAL CHAPTER 1 MONTH LATER Eva: Hang on Kiddo, We'll get you somewhere to rest. Melisa: N-no, I'm fine.

  • I prefer the previous chapter!!!!

    Chapter 7 Episode 4 ------ FINAL CHAPTER 1 MONTH LATER Eva: Hang on Kiddo, We'll get you somewhere to rest. Melisa: N-no, I'm fine.

  • Me too, but it's the ZA, Shit's gonna go down.

    supersagig posted: »

    I prefer the previous chapter!!!!

  • If Samuel dies, he needs to confess to killing James. In he doesn't, he should snap more.

    Chapter 7 Episode 4 ------ FINAL CHAPTER 1 MONTH LATER Eva: Hang on Kiddo, We'll get you somewhere to rest. Melisa: N-no, I'm fine.

  • In your story he did, not my version. Sorry man, Sam is (Kind of) a good guy now. I apoligize if you don't agree. but you did tell me once that your story is "Based" Off of mine. I REALLY don't wanna sound mean, I'm not angry. According to my side of the story, He is (Kinda) a changed man, He might do some crazy stuff down the road though. He killed james to put him out of his misery. and he did confess to that.

    UCAAV29784 posted: »

    If Samuel dies, he needs to confess to killing James. In he doesn't, he should snap more.

  • Leaving James behind? He did im UCAAV29784

    In your story he did, not my version. Sorry man, Sam is (Kind of) a good guy now. I apoligize if you don't agree. but you did tell me once t

  • What if he had bi-polar disorder? One moment he's content with James' death, and the next he's grieving. It does make sense.

    In your story he did, not my version. Sorry man, Sam is (Kind of) a good guy now. I apoligize if you don't agree. but you did tell me once t

  • XD thanks a lot! I'm busy writing the mid finale and now i have to add that in, good plan man.

    UCAAV29784 posted: »

    What if he had bi-polar disorder? One moment he's content with James' death, and the next he's grieving. It does make sense.

  • Previously On The Walking Dead: No Safety...

    Melisa: AHHHHH!!!

    Trey: Don't worry, We've got ya.

    (Later)

    James: AHHHHH!!!

    Wilson: Shit...

    (Later)

    Wilson: Don't worry James. I'll keep Dan and Becca Safe...

    (Later)

    BOOM!

    Felix: I've got Laura! Wilson! Get over here!

    (Later)

    Jake: Oh my god... Trey...

    (Later)

    Ryan: SAMUEL! NO!

    (Later)

    Clara: Wilson!

    Wilson: Cl-Clara?!

    (Later)

    David: CLEM, NO!

    (Later)

    Bandit: You're a Liar...

    BANG!


    This is an Interactive series, The story Varys to the choices you and your group make.

    Episode 5... Ask not for whom the Bell Tolls...

    (The next few things are from Sam's POV as he struggles to live)

    (A car starts)

    Dallas: I got it running!

    Clara: Good! I got sam! Everyone, In!

    (Bandits shoot as they drive away)

    Richard: Come on Jake, apply pressure to the god damn wound!

    ......

    David: A church! Get him in, NOW!

    Melisa: AHHHHH!!

    Jake: Shit! She's In Pain! Come on! Let's get in!

    (12 Hours Later)

    Samuel: (Gasps) Ghhk, Agh!

    Clara: Shh, It'll be fine. You're In shock. You were shot.

    Samuel: Dan?! Becca?! Ryan?! Where are they?!

    Clara: Hey, Calm down, They're all okay.

    (Sam flops and lies back down)

    Samuel: I'm sorry.

    Clara: Shut up, Don't be sorry. You were trying to protect us.

    Samuel: Yeah... Hasn't always been like that with me.

    Clara: So I've Heard...

    [CHAPTER END]

  • @supersagig @NoHopeLeft @UCAAV29784 and @mr.quality Chapter 1, Of the Mid Season finale is here...

    Previously On The Walking Dead: No Safety... Melisa: AHHHHH!!! Trey: Don't worry, We've got ya. (Later) James: AHHHHH!!! Wils

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