Fallout: Commonwealth - Interactive Story (Fan Fiction)

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  • [Stop the beating]

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Chapter 5 [Go north to the large settlement called Lawrence] You make your way to Lawrence, once you arrive you find yourself at a l

  • edited December 2014

    Chapter 6


    ["I'm not going sit aside and watch"]

    You start walking out of the salon, Anubis sits and watches as you exit the salon, he spins his glass around before he takes the last sip, he closes his eyes then starts following you out the door. You continue walking to the gate where they were beating the man. You approach the mayor and grab the pistol in mid swing, George looks at you. "The fuck do you think your doing?!" The mayor shouts, but Anubis gets there just in time and tries his best to keep things calm.

    "He didn't mean by it, just it let go" Anubis said with his deep and raspy voice.

    "He just showed a sign of aggression, he's going to jail...If you don't stand down, you will too!" George yelled.

    "I'm not your dog, if you want him to go to jail your'll have to get past me..." Anubis puts his hand closer to his revolver

    "THAT'S AGGRESSION!" The guard yells out while trying to fire his automatic rifle. Anubis grabs you by the neck of your shirt and pulls you with him as bullets spay the ground the two of you were standing, dust is sent into the air, Anubis pulls you behind a building. "You okay, you aren't shot...Are you?" Anubis asks.

    ["I'm fine, but what are we going to do?"]

    "We'll think of something, just remember to defend yourself, these guys may look like their just following orders, they are...But they won't think twice about killing you, you gotta do the same. Take a quick peck, see how many people we'll facing" Anubis says while pulling out two revolvers from their hostlers.

    You stand at the very edge of the building and quickly peck around the building, you see about 11 people with weapons, you spot the mayor running inside the town hall with two escorts, you look and see you see another man running behind cover, but then a bullet hits the side of the build barely missing you. You quickly back up and behind the cover as more bullets hit the side of the building, Anubis pulls you further away from the edge of the building and pulls out a pair of sunglasses. "here, this will work better. Just use them to see around the corner, make sure they don't get shot up" Anubis hands you the glasses and you take them.

    You hold them to the edge and use the reflection to see some of their locations. You started looking around by moving the glasses around, you see 11 people, most of them were hiding in cover, but about 3 were standing in the open with their guns pointed at the your hiding spot, if you and Anubis jumped out and spitting off, you would take someone them by surprise. You take another look around the corner of the building with the glasses, you see the 3 people approaching, but then the sunglasses are shot and go flying. "Goddammit!" Anubis yells.

    ["There's 3 people coming to are hiding spot, we should jump out and spit off, it will take them by surprise"]

    "Sounds like a plan, I'll go right and your'll go left. Don't get yourself shot" The two of you get ready and jump out, Anubis shoots one of the men who were approaching and he falls to the ground dead. Both of you land on the ground, the other two men fire at you as the two of you take cover. The bullets sends dust into the air, you pull out your pistol and shoot one of the men in the head, the last man stops firing to for a second when he sees the other man falls to the ground, Anubis stands up from his cover and holds both his revolvers out and fire both one at the time, the man is hit in the head both times and falls on the ground, only 9 people were left, they others begin to take action by firing a storm of bullets at you and Anubis.

    You run to Anubis as you run the bullets barely miss you, Anubis pushes you side the building as he fires a shot at someone who stepped out of cover, he kills him and quickly runs inside. You find yourself back inside the salon, Anubis jumps up and slides over the bar then ducks behind it. Nothing happens for a few seconds, then a few more, just silence. Then someone shouts "We done killing each other?" It sounded like a real question.

    "Yeah...I guess so, are you?" Anubis shouted back, Anubis looked over the edge of the bar and looked at you, the two of you hear a noise coming from the back at the same time. Two men run out of the back and point their guns at the two of you, but before they can do anything they are shot by Anubis. "Come on, there's a back door" Anubis says while walking to the back room, you find the door and the two of you quickly exit, only to have 4 men point there guns at your head, the two of you were caught of guard. One of them men yells "Drop the guns, we'll taking you to the mayor" Anubis drops both of his revolvers on to the ground, but you don't.

    "Drop your damn gun, it's the smart thing to do" Anubis mutters.

    [Drop your pistol and surrender]

    [Try to fight your way out]


    Hope you enjoyed the action of this chapter and as all ways if you have any questions or feedback feel free to let me know.

  • [Drop your pistol and surrender]

    Good chapter!

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Chapter 6 ["I'm not going sit aside and watch"] You start walking out of the salon, Anubis sits and watches as you exit the salon, h

  • [Drop the gun and surrender] Excellent Chapter!!!!

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Chapter 6 ["I'm not going sit aside and watch"] You start walking out of the salon, Anubis sits and watches as you exit the salon, h

  • [Drop your pistol and surrender]

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Chapter 6 ["I'm not going sit aside and watch"] You start walking out of the salon, Anubis sits and watches as you exit the salon, h

  • [Drop your pistol and surrender]

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Chapter 6 ["I'm not going sit aside and watch"] You start walking out of the salon, Anubis sits and watches as you exit the salon, h

  • [Try to fight your way out]

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Chapter 6 ["I'm not going sit aside and watch"] You start walking out of the salon, Anubis sits and watches as you exit the salon, h

  • Can I still submit a character?

  • edited December 2014

    Character submission is open until i say otherwise. :)

    Meaning it's open.

    Can I still submit a character?

  • Okay...I think I won't be continuing this story anymore...I just can't handle making a story in the Fallout lore, i might bring it back if i figure out how to make one work.

    But for now consider this story cancelled. Sorry, thank you for understanding.

  • u.u K

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Okay...I think I won't be continuing this story anymore...I just can't handle making a story in the Fallout lore, i might bring it back if i

  • Sorry... :(

    Those are sad news, I really liked the story

  • Those are sad news, I really liked the story :(

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Okay...I think I won't be continuing this story anymore...I just can't handle making a story in the Fallout lore, i might bring it back if i

  • awwww....

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Okay...I think I won't be continuing this story anymore...I just can't handle making a story in the Fallout lore, i might bring it back if i

  • Sad to hear this one has been cancelled :/ I didn't submit a character because I'm not really into Fallout. Do you have any idea when you're gonna continue Raining 2?

  • Soon...

    Very soon...

    finlander posted: »

    Sad to hear this one has been cancelled I didn't submit a character because I'm not really into Fallout. Do you have any idea when you're gonna continue Raining 2?

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