The Nights of the Past (Interactive Story)

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  • Why?

    supersagig posted: »

    [I'll pass on the message and I'll put in a good word] Let´s play little bitch Desmond :P Awesome Chapter!!

  • why not? Also i am pretty sure no else is going to vote for this option :P

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Why?

  • [I'll pass the message on but I'm not praising you]

    Haven 2-2 Desmond- We will transport the guns. Sydney- Alright. Leave me a big one. Henry and Desmond run over and pick up multiple

  • [I'll pass the message on but I'm not praising you]

    Haven 2-2 Desmond- We will transport the guns. Sydney- Alright. Leave me a big one. Henry and Desmond run over and pick up multiple

  • [I'll pass the message on but I'm not praising you]

    Great chapter! I thought people were about to die..

    Haven 2-2 Desmond- We will transport the guns. Sydney- Alright. Leave me a big one. Henry and Desmond run over and pick up multiple

  • Fair point

    supersagig posted: »

    why not? Also i am pretty sure no else is going to vote for this option :P

  • Haven 2-3

    Desmond- I'll pass on the message but I'm not praising you. I don't know your intentions so I rather not lead my people into a trap.

    Connor- That's all I truly wanted. Thank you. Just so you know, my intentions are honestly good, what you think you know of us is truly wrong. If anything, I would be looking toward your "leader"...and his bodyguard. You don't truly know these people. However, it sounds like I'm trying to mislead you so I'll stop. Now, I can have my guards escort you to where you need to go.

    Desmond- I'm fine.

    Connor- Thank you again. Have a good night...Friend.

    Connor and his two body guards walk away. Desmond looks up at the sky to see the sun slowly setting and he runs to catch back up with Henry. He soon finds Henry near a dead Crier.

    Desmond- Shit, you okay?

    Henry- I'm fine. Fucker jumped me...

    Henry laughs and turns around and pats Desmond on the shoulder.

    Henry- But he won't be jumping no more. I'm glad you're okay, Connor didn't touch you right?

    Desmond- No. I do need to talk with Leon when we get back.

    Henry- I understand. Come on, let's hurry.

    Henry and Desmond run to a small street where three heavily armored trucks are located. Henry and Desmond throw most of the guns into the back of one and then get in position. Soon they see James, Sydney, and Shouna running down the street followed by three Criers. Henry and Desmond open fire killing the Criers and allowing the three to get behind the make shift concrete walls.

    Sydney- Things got messy guys! Violet got hurt and trapped. They tried to get her out but her leg was broken and underneath whatever fell on her. They cut off her leg off...The alarm also got off. Michael is carrying Violet. We have to get these vans ready!

    Henry gets up and Shouna gets where he was crouching. Henry gets in one van and starts it up while Sydney gets in the other. James gets on top of the third van and lays down with his rifle.

    Desmond- When they get here...I'm getting in the third van and driving.

    Shouna- You don't know how to drive.

    Desmond- Hasn't stopped me before.

    Suddenly they see the group running towards the vans. Violet on Michael's back as he runs in front. Steve running right behind Michael blasting any Criers in the front. Katherine and John run in the back blasting behind them to stop the crowd of around thirty Criers behind them. Desmond and Shouna open fire while Desmond also jumps up and gets inside the van James is on and starts it up. Desmond watches as John is grabbed by a Crier in the back. James lets out one shot and blows the Crier's head off and John wrestles free of the falling body. As the group approches, Shouna jumps up and gets inside one of the vans and opens it. Michael arrives first and throws Violet in and climbs in and opens fire. Steve arrives next and gets inside the other van pulling Katherine in barely. John gets to Desmond's van and they three van drives off. James soon climbs into the back of the van through the hatch at the top.

    James- Hahah, that was fucking great! Do you feel your adrenaline pumping?

    John- Pumping right to my head. I have a headache. Also, remind me why the kid is driving?

    Desmond- Because the "Kid" can drive.

    John- Don't get an attitude with me.

    Desmond- Let's just get back to the Safe Zone.

    End of Chapter

  • Awesome part bro :)

    Haven 2-3 Desmond- I'll pass on the message but I'm not praising you. I don't know your intentions so I rather not lead my people into a

  • I could use some more characters for a few upcoming things.

  • Listen here, I'm writing Cotc right now and this is an introduction period. Not every character will appear immediately.

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Hmmmm...........i don't know. I made like 6 for Cotc and none of them have even appeared.

  • Hmmmm...........i don't know. I made like 6 for Cotc and none of them have even appeared.

    I could use some more characters for a few upcoming things.

  • yeah i know and i really don't care im just not sure wether to make more

    Listen here, I'm writing Cotc right now and this is an introduction period. Not every character will appear immediately.

  • I need more for this story but I can always make them up myself if I need to.

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    yeah i know and i really don't care im just not sure wether to make more

  • hmm maybe

    I need more for this story but I can always make them up myself if I need to.

  • Hey Golden bro sorry if i was a jerk. ill post a character or two

    I need more for this story but I can always make them up myself if I need to.

  • Thank you kindly.

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Hey Golden bro sorry if i was a jerk. ill post a character or two

  • ok sry

    Thank you kindly.

  • Im really sorry golden bro

    Thank you kindly.

  • Still i fell bad for it

    I'm fine. I don't really care, you weren't rude.

  • I'm fine. I don't really care, you weren't rude.

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Im really sorry golden bro

  • Are you looking for something specific i should make or do i just make 'normal' characters

    I could use some more characters for a few upcoming things.

  • I'll get to it after school.

    I could use some more characters for a few upcoming things.

  • Awesome Chapter!

    Haven 2-3 Desmond- I'll pass on the message but I'm not praising you. I don't know your intentions so I rather not lead my people into a

  • Normal.

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Are you looking for something specific i should make or do i just make 'normal' characters

  • ok i will

    Normal.

  • Wait good or bad?

    Normal.

  • More good but remember it's the apocalypse.

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Wait good or bad?

  • Ok i will (but i will probs care more about Jess that any of these guys/gals)

    More good but remember it's the apocalypse.

  • Golden just a heads up you should update the CHARACTER CHARTS

  • I should.

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Golden just a heads up you should update the CHARACTER CHARTS

  • yep

    I should.

  • I will tonight.

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    yep

  • ok ill wait

    I will tonight.

  • Number 1 (Or 2 i guess)

    Name: Norman Tooms

    Age: 29

    Gender: Male

    Occupation: Metalworker and Blacksmith

    Skills: Metal working, Hand to hand combat, Bullet Casting

    Backstory: He was a highly skilled worker who got payed alot for his job. However his attitude cost him his marrige and almost cost him his freedom since he almost killed a man by pushing him into molten iron. He is mostly hated but is absolute in his skill. He is the main metalworker and blacksmith of the safe zone.

    Morals/Personality: Is a jerk to anyone that offends him and a good man to those he likes. His morality is questionable and normaly goes towards what benefits him the most

    Appearance: Light brown eyes and brown beard. Phisicaly unattractive.

  • Thanks.

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Number 1 (Or 2 i guess) Name: Norman Tooms Age: 29 Gender: Male Occupation: Metalworker and Blacksmith Skills: Metal working,

  • No probs Golden do what ever you want with this guy

    Thanks.

  • Name: Riley Peterson

    Age: 29

    Gender: Female

    Occupation: Nurse

    Backstory: Riley came from a middle class working family, She worked hard through school and made good grades, eventually ending up as a nurse.

    Skills: Medical skills

    Personality: Friendly, trusting, open, wants to help

    Appearance: Green eyes, blonde hair, tall


    If you need more, just ask.

  • Awesome, I actually wanted a nurse, thanks!

    I could use some more.

    mr.quality posted: »

    Name: Riley Peterson Age: 29 Gender: Female Occupation: Nurse Backstory: Riley came from a middle class working family, She work

  • Yay! I did something right! If more is what you wish, more I what I give...

    Name: Max Moore

    Age:34

    Occupation: US veteran (Honorably discharged)

    Skills: Works well with most firearms, ranging from sidearms to light machineguns.

    Backstory: Max was just following in the footsteps of his deceased father when he joined the army. Little did he know at that time what was in store for him. Early into his third tour of duty, His convoy hit an IED killing and injuring multiple people, and leaving shrapnel in his leg. To make matters worse, they had lost contact with base and they were deep into hostile territory. They clashed all through the night and into the next afternoon before a search party arrived and rescued them. Max was left with a limp in his left leg and horrible PTSD from the fight.

    Personality: Silent, Has flashbacks to the war, can turn violent, comes off as rude and unkind although he doesn't mean it.

    Appearance: Brown eyes, black hair, average height, muscular, various scars cover his body.


    Name: Abbey White

    Age: 21

    Gender: Female

    Occupation: (Backstory)

    Backstory: Abbey was fiercely independent from a young age and constantly disagreed with her parents. At her first chance, she left home. Soon afterwards, she ended up broke, lost, and scared on the streets. One day when she was just wondering around looking for free money, she met a man who offered her a meal. She accepted the offer and went to eat, unaware of what she had gotten herself into. Over lunch, the man told her all about how he could give her a new life, and lots of money. She accepted his offer, once again. But all she got out of the deal was a drug addiction and a life selling her body for money.

    Skills: Not many

    Appearance: Blue eyes, long brown hair, average height


    Is that all you need, or do you need more?

    Awesome, I actually wanted a nurse, thanks! I could use some more.

  • If you don't mind, just like three more then I'm good.

    mr.quality posted: »

    Yay! I did something right! If more is what you wish, more I what I give... Name: Max Moore Age:34 Occupation: US veteran (Honorabl

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