the dead's redemption: forum story

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  • I'll try harder to put him in.

    supersagig posted: »

    It´s okay , just is like he disappered xd

  • Awesome chapter!

    mr.quality posted: »

    Part 7 [Go to airfield] Ann- let's head to that airfield to see if their there. Uriel- OK, just follow me, its not far. Ann and

  • Thanks!

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Awesome chapter!

  • No problem!

    mr.quality posted: »

    Thanks!

  • Keep up the good work mate!

    mr.quality posted: »

    Part 7 [Go to airfield] Ann- let's head to that airfield to see if their there. Uriel- OK, just follow me, its not far. Ann and

  • Thanks. I don't know if I can get a new chapter up today. I'm feeling pretty bad.

    finlander posted: »

    Keep up the good work mate!

  • New part coming out tonight. Not right now though. Just sit tight.

  • edited November 2014

    Part 8

    Ann and Uriel are still standing on the terminal when a Humvee rounds the corner and stops in front of them, three people including Tex jump out.

    Tex- this is the team. Me, Sora, and York.

    Tex points them out. The man driving is York, the passenger is Sora.

    Sora- the armory's close. We should get there by tomorrow morning.

    York- nice to meet you, our people when missing and as I understand so did yours?

    Ann- yes, a few of them. We were going to go with you to check out the armory if that's OK?

    York- were gonna need all the hands we can get. You got any weapons?

    Ann- we just have knifes, for protection.

    York- that won't do. Tex, grab them a few M16's and mags would ya?

    Tex walks over to the Humvee and pulls out two guns he hands them to Uriel and Ann.

    Tex- y'all know how the gun works right?

    Uriel- I'm not stupid.

    Uriel accidentally pulls the trigger and sends a round into the tarmac. Hoppas begins to cry.

    Sora- shit! You have a baby! I didn't even notice. You shouldn't bring him to the armory it'll be to dangerous. I'll stay here with him, and you can go.

    Uriel- I'm not sure. I don't know if I can trust you. Especially with my brothers life.

    York- were marines. If you couldn't trust us you'd be dead already.

    choice

    [Take hoppas]

    [Give hoppas to sora]

    Part 8.5

    Eva, Roy and Zack are in a room with two other survivors. There's a banging on the door.

    ???- Hey, let us in! We'll make it quick.

    Zack- Fuck you! Fuck there going to get in!

    Roy- let's push some of these crates against the doors.

    Roy and the two unknown people push some crates.

    Roy- I didn't catch your names.

    ????- its Dan, this is hopeless.

    Roy- well, its been nice to know you. Any moment now these bandits are gonna bust in here and rip us to shreads.

    Eva- shut up! There going to come back!

    Roy- who? Ann and Uriel? The bandits already got them. Didn't you see the fire?

    Dan- maybe our people are looking for us. They couldn't have just forgot.

    Roy- you keep believing.

    ???- motherfucker! Open the damn door!

    Hopeless- this is an armory right?

    Zach- yeah, its was. What's your point?

    Hopeless points to a safe.

    Hopeless- if we have any hope, its in there.

    Zack- well is it open?

    Hopeless- I don't know.

    Hopeless walks over to the safe and pulls on the handle. It doesn't budge.

    Eva- here let me try.

    End chapter.

  • [Give hoppas to sora]

    mr.quality posted: »

    Part 8 Ann and Uriel are still standing on the terminal when a Humvee rounds the corner and stops in front of them, three people includin

  • Thanks, what do you think so far?

    supersagig posted: »

    [Give hoppas to sora]

  • edited November 2014

    [Give Hoppas to Sora]

    I pretty sure we can trust her. I'm glad to see my character join the story! :D

    mr.quality posted: »

    Part 8 Ann and Uriel are still standing on the terminal when a Humvee rounds the corner and stops in front of them, three people includin

  • Yeah, I think I have everyone in the story now. Thanks for the characters.

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    [Give Hoppas to Sora] I pretty sure we can trust her. I'm glad to see my character join the story!

  • Thank you for the awesome story!

    mr.quality posted: »

    Yeah, I think I have everyone in the story now. Thanks for the characters.

  • Thanks for reading it!

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Thank you for the awesome story!

  • Amazing

    mr.quality posted: »

    Thanks, what do you think so far?

  • Thanks!

    supersagig posted: »

    Amazing

  • Part 9

    [Give hoppas to sora]

    Uriel- um, sure. I guess I trust you. But if anything happens to him, I'll end you.

    Sora- don't worry about him, he'll be fine. We won't leave the tower.

    Uriel- thank you.

    Uriel gives Hoppas to Sora

    York- OK then, we need to get on the road. Let's move.

    Everyone gets into the Humvee. And York begins to pull out onto the road.

    York- so, how many people did you say you lost?

    Ann- three, I think. I wasn't with them for long.

    Tex- well don't worry, if their at the armory we'll get them and if not we'll find them.

    Ann- thanks.

    The Humvee passes a road sign

    York- ten minutes until were there. Are you ready?

    Ann- yeah, as long as Uriel doesn't swing his gun around again.

    Uriel- shut up.

    Everyone laughs a little.

    York- here it is.

    The Humvee turns left onto a gravel road that leads into the woods. York slowly drives forward until the armory is in view. York stops about seven yards from the armory.

    York-well, I guess this is it.

    York opens the door and gets out. He begins to approach the door. Suddenly a gunshot goes off and York falls to the ground.

    Tex- shit! Where did that shot come from?

    Uriel- I think it came from inside.

    Ann- what are we going to do?

    Tex- we got the .50 cal.

    Uriel- wait. We can't just shoot them. We don't know who they are, they could be our people.

    Tex- what does it matter? They killed York!

    ???- don't shoot! I'm coming out!

    A man walks out the armory door.

    Ann- that's Zack!

    Ann gets out of the Humvee

    Ann- Zack! Thank goodness your alive! Where's everyone else?

    Zack- holy shit! Ann its you! I told them not to shoot.

    Ann- the man you shot was York. He was coming to help us.

    York- D-Don't... Just stand there... A little... Help maybe?

    Ann- York! Your alive?

    York- yeah, I'm alive. Only the good die young.

    Uriel and Tex come and join Ann.

    Tex- York. Just stay there. I've got some medical supplies in the Humvee.

    Tex goes back to the Humvee.

    Uriel- so, where is everyone else?

    End

  • Great Part!

    mr.quality posted: »

    Part 9 [Give hoppas to sora] Uriel- um, sure. I guess I trust you. But if anything happens to him, I'll end you. Sora- don't worry

  • Thanks, my apologies for the delay, I have a severe bacterial infection.

    supersagig posted: »

    Great Part!

  • Part 10

    Zack- their in there. Most of them. Roy tried to run. He didn't get far before bandits got him.

    Ann- where are the bandits?

    Zack- dead. All of them.

    Ann- how?

    Zack- Eva was able to open the gun safe, that's all we needed.

    Uriel- so, are we ready to go?

    Zack- yeah, let me get the others out here.

    Zack walks back into the armory.

    Tex- Damnit! Shit!

    Ann and Uriel turn to the Humvee. Tex is standing facing away from them.

    Ann-what happened?

    Tex- D-Don't come over here!

    Uriel- we can't help you if you don't tell us what happened.

    Tex- ... I'm bit...

    Ann- how? When?

    Tex- York. He just... Turned and then he, he bit me.

    Uriel- where are you bit?

    Tex- right forearm.

    Ann- we can help.

    Tex- how? You gonna cut my arm off?

    Ann- well, that's as good a plan as any.

    Uriel- didn't you say you had medical supplies?

    Tex- yes, a first aid kit.

    Uriel- that's good, that will help. But its to risky out here. Let's go inside.

    Tex- do you think it will work.

    Uriel- we have to try.

    Uriel rips off a sleeve from his shirt

    Tex- what are you doing?

    Uriel- were going to need a tourniquet.

    Uriel wraps the sleeve around Tex's arm.

    Ann- come on, let's get inside.

    Everyone walks inside the armory. Ann closes the door.

    Zack- why did you come in here?

    Uriel- Tex here got bit. So we got to cut the arm off, its safer in here.

    Tex lays down on a table and Uriel finds a saw.

    Uriel- it looks clean...

    Uriel gathers around the table with everyone else.

    Uriel- this is going to suck... Anyone want to do this?

    Uriel looks around the room.

    choice

    Choose someone to cut Tex's arm off.

  • edited November 2014

    Hopeless XD
    Awesome chapter!!!

    mr.quality posted: »

    Part 10 Zack- their in there. Most of them. Roy tried to run. He didn't get far before bandits got him. Ann- where are the bandits?

  • edited November 2014

    Edit: Ann, i'll choose Ann :P

    mr.quality posted: »

    Part 10 Zack- their in there. Most of them. Roy tried to run. He didn't get far before bandits got him. Ann- where are the bandits?

  • But Roy is dead.

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Edit: Ann, i'll choose Ann :P

  • Thanks, Roy's dead though...

    supersagig posted: »

    Hopeless XD Awesome chapter!!!

  • When that happened?

    mr.quality posted: »

    But Roy is dead.

  • Dammit... XD

    mr.quality posted: »

    But Roy is dead.

  • Then Hopeless

    mr.quality posted: »

    But Roy is dead.

  • Zack- their in there. Most of them. Roy tried to run. He didn't get far before bandits got him.
    

    That's when it happened

    supersagig posted: »

    When that happened?

  • Thanks, I guess I could have written it better.

    supersagig posted: »

    Then Hopeless

  • Lol, thanks.

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Edit: Ann, i'll choose Ann :P

  • Fuck, Roy died :D Let's say Hopeless

    mr.quality posted: »

    Part 10 Zack- their in there. Most of them. Roy tried to run. He didn't get far before bandits got him. Ann- where are the bandits?

  • Thanks. :)

    finlander posted: »

    Fuck, Roy died Let's say Hopeless

  • Waiting...............................................

  • name Father Jordan Monroe

    age 36

    appearance blonde short heddle hair , blue eyes , caucasian , 4,8 feet tall

    personality Crazy , Maniac , Insane

    weapons anything

    other qualitys pray

    background He had an hallucination where God told him that Satan create the walkers and that he need to make the good people get out of the hell in earth , by killing them.

    occupation Father

  • [Hopeless will cut off the arm]

    Part 11

    Everyone stands around the table Tex is laying on. Uriel holds a bone saw.

    Uriel- no volunteers. Damn.

    Uriel give everyone a quick look and shoves the saw into hopeless' arms

    Hopeless- what? Why?

    Uriel- fuck if I know. Just start cutting.

    Tex- please don't fuck up.

    Hopeless- I won't.

    Tex- should we count?

    Hopeless- sure?

    Uriel- 3...2...1...0

    a few minutes later

    Tex's arm is on the floor, blood is everywhere. Hopeless isn't looking to good.

    Hopeless- that's... A lot... Of.. Blood.

    Ann- are you alright?

    Hopeless- yeah... Just...

    Hopeless falls face first out the floor.

    Uriel- damn it! What do we do?

    Zack- just wait here a minute. Get hopeless off the floor, and stop that bleeding.

    Uriel and Ann lift hopeless' body and lay her on a table. Zack and Eva go to changing the bandage on Tex's arm.

    Zack- maybe a few more minutes and then we can move.

    Uriel- yeah, we'll be better off when we get to the air field.

    Ann- so um, who's going to drive? I'm not any good so probably not me.

    Tex- (raises her one arm) not... It...

    Uriel- its good to see you still got a sense of humor.

    [Pick someone to drive]

    ** at the air field**

    Sora sits in the top level of the control tower with hoppas.

    Sora- you are so cute, your just gonna be a little heart breaker when you grow up, aren't you?

    Sora look out Tue window of the control tower towards the runway. A truck is coming towards the control tower. Sora can tell it isn't York and Tex. The truck pulls to a stop outside the tower and three men jump out. Sora can tell they are armed. Sora quickly runs over to the stairwell door and tries to lock it. The lock is busted. There is little protection in the tower. Sora looks down at hoppas who is sleeping in her arms then back at her gun which was laying in the corner.

    Sora- don't worry baby, I ain't gonna let anything happen to you. All you need to do is stay silent.

    ???- their up here! They have to be! They fucking messed with us for the last time!

    Sora hears the sound of foot steps climbing the stairs, getting louder and louder. Then they stop at the stairwell door. The door slowly creaks open.

    [End of chapter]

  • Wait no longer!

    supersagig posted: »

    Waiting...............................................

  • Eva is going to drive
    Great chapter!!!!

    mr.quality posted: »

    [Hopeless will cut off the arm] Part 11 Everyone stands around the table Tex is laying on. Uriel holds a bone saw. Uriel- no volunt

  • Awesome I think I have an idea for him. Thanks!

    supersagig posted: »

    name Father Jordan Monroe age 36 appearance blonde short heddle hair , blue eyes , caucasian , 4,8 feet tall personality Crazy , Ma

  • Thanks, sorry for the wait. I've been sick and its just recently letting up a little.

    supersagig posted: »

    Eva is going to drive Great chapter!!!!

  • Uriel is who i chose to drive

    Amazing chapter!

    mr.quality posted: »

    [Hopeless will cut off the arm] Part 11 Everyone stands around the table Tex is laying on. Uriel holds a bone saw. Uriel- no volunt

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