Viva La Forum Revolution (Interactive Story)

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  • at least me and Golden will have more time to escape then :P

    kaleion posted: »

    That was a really good part, stupid rebels though hope saving Hello World gets more than 1 of them killed >:D

  • I never left. :P Just forgot to vote. :D

    Hey, you're back!

  • XD Nice.

    Pipas posted: »

    I never left. :P Just forgot to vote.

  • Forces Divided 2-9

    Hey, I'm back. :P

    Saltlick's POV

    Saltlick runs to Hello World, he swings his great axe with all his might and makes the woman fall before her fatal strike on Hello World. Saltlick then tries to hit her with the great axe. He swings and the woman dodges the swings and kicks Saltlick up against a wall. Saltlick drops his great axe and the woman punches him in the face. The woman keeps punching him and then Hello World jumps up and stabs the woman in the spine. The woman falls to the ground in pain and then Saltlick and Hello World runs down stairs with the group. While they are running Saltlick clutches his leg and sees a small crossbow bolt stuck in it. He pulls it out and keeps running/ limping towards the stairs. Down stairs the group runs outside and then Sagig knocks over a cart with explosives in it towards the tavern. The tavern then explodes in a magnificent display as the group of Rebels run away.

    End of Chapter

  • Cool :)

    Forces Divided 2-9 Hey, I'm back. :P Saltlick's POV Saltlick runs to Hello World, he swings his great axe with all his might and ma

  • Hmm...Awesome chapter! ^-^

    Forces Divided 2-9 Hey, I'm back. :P Saltlick's POV Saltlick runs to Hello World, he swings his great axe with all his might and ma

  • Great chapter!

    Forces Divided 2-9 Hey, I'm back. :P Saltlick's POV Saltlick runs to Hello World, he swings his great axe with all his might and ma

  • I'M ALIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

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    Forces Divided 2-9 Hey, I'm back. :P Saltlick's POV Saltlick runs to Hello World, he swings his great axe with all his might and ma

  • :D

    You have a 80% chance if Saltlick goes back for you...0% if he doesn't...

  • :DDDDD

    Forces Divided 2-9 Hey, I'm back. :P Saltlick's POV Saltlick runs to Hello World, he swings his great axe with all his might and ma

  • In the spine. Ouch. R.I.P

    Forces Divided 2-9 Hey, I'm back. :P Saltlick's POV Saltlick runs to Hello World, he swings his great axe with all his might and ma

  • Ci señor

    In the spine. Ouch. R.I.P

  • I'm going to take a small break from this story.

    Small....

  • OK then.

    I'm going to take a small break from this story. Small....

  • Take your time.

    I'm going to take a small break from this story. Small....

  • I'm doing a Q&A.

  • How much will my character will live?

    I'm doing a Q&A.

  • Sorry, because GoT is coming out tomorrow, this will be postponed a while.

  • Forces Divided 2-10

    Let's get back at this...

    Creeping's POV

    Creeping walked into the creepy hallway, he looked around and saw the skeletons of those who died here..."Why am I here" Creeping thought to himself while walking. Creeping lifted things that were in his path and kept walking down the deserted destroyed hallway. The history this hall must've had ran through his head multiple times. He constantly wondered what happened here...He soon started to hear noises behind him...He put it down to animals or just random fear of this hallway but he got more curious as time went on. He hid behind a collapsed support beam, he saw nothing...No animals nor people. He got up...He still heard the noises but gve up and figured it was just fear. Creeping soon reached a large door...It was wooden but had strange markings on it that faintly glowed...There was dried blood on it and writtings in a different language on the door. He figured this as strange and sowly tried to open the large wooden door...

    Neon's POV

    She still stood before the Grandmaster Assassin Flog.

    Neon-...I wish to room in the Female dorms.

    Flog- As you wish Initate...

    Flog turned to a female assassin standing near her and whispered something into her ear. The female assassin walked down to Neon and told her to follow. Neo did just that, on the way to the dorms the female assassin talked.

    ???- So... You excited?

    Neon- For what...And who are you?

    ???- I am Dojo, and for your initation assassination.

    Neon- Initation assassination?

    Dojo- Yes, to be accepted you must kill a political opponent.

    Neon-...

    Dojo- Don't worry...I was scared too but I got an easy target, you probably will too.

    Neon- Hopefully...

    Dojo escorted Neon to her room which conviently was also Dojo's room. The two were bunk mates.

    Dojo- Welcome to my little abode. I recommend you rest, the test tomorrow will be quite challenging.

    Neon- Thanks.

    Neon said that with a smile and she soon got comfortable in her new bed. Sitting there she felt welcomed but remembered her mission.

    Coming's POV

    Coming and X1H2 stand in the large grand hallway waiting thier next move.

    Coming- I say we go to the Prison...

    X1H2- Why?

    Coming- Possiblity of people.

    X1H2- No one would have survived this long...

    Coming just stared at X1H2 and then started walking to a large spiral staircase leading down, X1H2 soon followed. The two walk down to the Prison area where it was mostly empty...The cells had skeletons in them and many rats were running around.

    X1H2- We will need to clean up here...

    Coming- If we decide it safe enough.

    The two keep walking till they hear a noise and see a cloaked figure inside a cell.

    X1H2- HEY! YOU!

    Coming quickly covers his mouth and the figure runs.

    Coming- Shit...You fucking made them run.

    X1H2- Well...Let's get them!

    Rebel Choice

    [Chase after them]

    [Cut them off upstairs while X1H2 runs after them]

  • [Cut them off upstairs while X1H2 runs after them]

    Forces Divided 2-10 Let's get back at this... Creeping's POV Creeping walked into the creepy hallway, he looked around and saw the

  • [Chase after them]

    Fantastic Chapter!!!!!

    Forces Divided 2-10 Let's get back at this... Creeping's POV Creeping walked into the creepy hallway, he looked around and saw the

  • Thanks!

    supersagig posted: »

    [Chase after them] Fantastic Chapter!!!!!

  • Finally back! Yay!

    Forces Divided 2-10 Let's get back at this... Creeping's POV Creeping walked into the creepy hallway, he looked around and saw the

  • Nice! [Cut them off upstairs while X1H2 runs after them]

    Forces Divided 2-10 Let's get back at this... Creeping's POV Creeping walked into the creepy hallway, he looked around and saw the

  • I do enjoy writing. :P

    mr.quality posted: »

    Finally back! Yay!

  • Ok Golden do you need any character that could help with the story ( villain or hero)

  • Just you...What army do you want to be in and what gender are you?

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Ok Golden do you need any character that could help with the story ( villain or hero)

  • Male and im not sure do have any advice

    Just you...What army do you want to be in and what gender are you?

  • ...Well...

    Are you loyal to the great Imperial Kingdom controlled by the Empress Green which controls most of the nation OR are you loyal to the Rebels fighting for freedom and justice against Green's wrongdoings as Empress trying to overthrow her and reclaim the nation for the people...Led by me.

    Honestly it's up to you, both sound good.

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Male and im not sure do have any advice

  • Man this is one of those times i wish i was 2 people

    Soo hard to chose

    ...Well... Are you loyal to the great Imperial Kingdom controlled by the Empress Green which controls most of the nation OR are you loyal

  • It will matter so pick carefully.

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Man this is one of those times i wish i was 2 people Soo hard to chose

  • edited December 2014

    I am excited to announce soon a name and map of our world!

    For right now I want to announce a few new parts coming out tonight...Also new characters coming next Episode...To get you hyped I'm going to give you sneak peaks about them...

    "But when his drinking and lusting and his hunger for power became known to more and more people, the demands to do something about this outrageous man became louder and louder." -Someone about the Ghost of the North.

    "I was suppose to die...I guess Green demanded it...But...I came back." -Captain of the Kingdom Fall

    "I fell...But I stand strong once more...We were the kings of promise and we still are!" -Unknown

    @Lord_EAA BTW you still haven't picked your army.

  • Well he is a "Lord" so... :P

    About everything else: YAY :p

    I am excited to announce soon a name and map of our world! For right now I want to announce a few new parts coming out tonight...Also new

  • Yes he is but he can be a Rebel lord or a Loyal Imperial Lord.

    supersagig posted: »

    Well he is a "Lord" so... :P About everything else: YAY

  • I just had a great idea..... i can be that really powerfull evil lord who acts like hes neutral but plays both sides

    Yes he is but he can be a Rebel lord or a Loyal Imperial Lord.

  • ...I have an idea what to make you then...However...I need to make you Imperial to do it.

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    I just had a great idea..... i can be that really powerfull evil lord who acts like hes neutral but plays both sides

  • okay just make sure that i am unpredictable and im fine :)

    ...I have an idea what to make you then...However...I need to make you Imperial to do it.

  • Will do.

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    okay just make sure that i am unpredictable and im fine

  • Edit on that map...I suck at drawing...No Map. :(

  • NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

    Get someone to draw it we NEED a map

    Edit on that map...I suck at drawing...No Map.

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