Part 4
Let him in
Eva- Ann! What is is?
Ann- uh,uh, we can't let him go and we can't just kill him. We should let him in.
Roy- a… morere you fucking joking?
Eva- calm down, its the right choice.
Roy- right choice? I'm trying to keep us alive.
Ann- killing innocent people isn't much of living Roy.
Roy-... Fuck you...
Roy walk away.
Eva- so, who are you? And this brother of yours, I don't see him, where is he?
???-u-Uriel. Uriel Perez... My, my brother... He's in the woods, i- I need to go get him...
Eva- dude calm down, were not going to hurt you.
Uriel- I know we just met but can I ask a favor?
Ann- yeah sure.
Uriel- would you come with me to get my brother? I don't want to be alone anymore.
Ann-uh...
Eva- Ann, your going with him.
Ann- why?
Eva- because you voted to let him in and I have work to do.
Ann- fine... I'll go.
Uriel- thank you, we should hurry.
Ann- OK let's go.
Ann and Uriel walk off into the woods.
end of chapter
Sorry no choice this time
Part 4
Let him in
Eva- Ann! What is is?
Ann- uh,uh, we can't let him go and we can't just kill him. We should let him in.
Roy- a… morere you fucking joking?
Eva- calm down, its the right choice.
Roy- right choice? I'm trying to keep us alive.
Ann- killing innocent people isn't much of living Roy.
Roy-... Fuck you...
Roy walk away.
Eva- so, who are you? And this brother of yours, I don't see him, where is he?
???-u-Uriel. Uriel Perez... My, my brother... He's in the woods, i- I need to go get him...
Eva- dude calm down, were not going to hurt you.
Uriel- I know we just met but can I ask a favor?
Ann- yeah sure.
Uriel- would you come with me to get my brother? I don't want to be alone anymore.
Ann-uh...
Eva- Ann, your going with him.
Ann- why?
Eva- because you voted to let him in and I have work to do.
Ann- fine... I'll go.
Uriel- thank you, we should hurry.
Ann- OK let's go.
Ann and Uriel walk off into the woods.
end of chapter
Sorry no choice this time
Ann- so, what's your story? How did you end up here?
Uriel- same as everyone else I suppose, everyone died.
Ann- I'm sorry...
Uriel- no, don't be. It was probably for the best.
Ann- why are you talking like that?
Uriel- because its the truth.
Ann- ... So, how far is your brother?
Uriel- right up here.
Uriel points to a fallen log.
Ann- where is he? I don't see anyone.
Uriel- in the log. Its the safest place I could find.
Ann- how old is he?
Uriel- I don't know exactly, maybe a year?
Ann- and you've just raised him on your own?
Uriel- yes.
Uriel walks up to the log and pulls out the baby wrapped in a blanket.
Uriel- this is hoppas.
Ann- he's so cute! I haven't seen a baby in forever!
Uriel- calm down, you might wake him up.
Ann- sorry, just a little happy.
Uriel- its fine
Ann and Uriel begin to walk back towards camp. As they get closer they notice smoke.
Ann- what the? Don't they know that it's stupid to light a fire during the day?
Uriel- I don't like this.
Uriel and Ann walk closer and notice multiple men standing in the camp.
Ann and Uriel hide behind some bushes.
Ann- shit. What do we do?
???- attention, I know your out there, and I know you killed my friend. Look, if you come out now we can be reasonable. Otherwise, your friends here will bite it.
Some of the men walk into a tent and bring out three blindfolded figures.
Ann- shit they got them. What should we do?
???- you've only got five minutes before I put one of your buddies in the fire here.
Ann and Uriel notice a large fire built to the side of the camp.
Ann- their going to burn them alive? We have to give up.
Uriel- we don't have to, we can run. We can fight. Or we can wait.
Ann- what good will that do? He will kill them!
Uriel- what if that's not them? What if its their own people?
Ann- that's stupid.
Uriel- is it?
Ann- well what good will fighting them do? I only have a knife.
Part 5
Ann and Uriel are walking in the woods
Ann- so, what's your story? How did you end up here?
Uriel- same as everyone else I … moresuppose, everyone died.
Ann- I'm sorry...
Uriel- no, don't be. It was probably for the best.
Ann- why are you talking like that?
Uriel- because its the truth.
Ann- ... So, how far is your brother?
Uriel- right up here.
Uriel points to a fallen log.
Ann- where is he? I don't see anyone.
Uriel- in the log. Its the safest place I could find.
Ann- how old is he?
Uriel- I don't know exactly, maybe a year?
Ann- and you've just raised him on your own?
Uriel- yes.
Uriel walks up to the log and pulls out the baby wrapped in a blanket.
Uriel- this is hoppas.
Ann- he's so cute! I haven't seen a baby in forever!
Uriel- calm down, you might wake him up.
Ann- sorry, just a little happy.
Uriel- its fine
Ann and Uriel begin to walk back towards camp. As they get… [view original content]
Part 5
Ann and Uriel are walking in the woods
Ann- so, what's your story? How did you end up here?
Uriel- same as everyone else I … moresuppose, everyone died.
Ann- I'm sorry...
Uriel- no, don't be. It was probably for the best.
Ann- why are you talking like that?
Uriel- because its the truth.
Ann- ... So, how far is your brother?
Uriel- right up here.
Uriel points to a fallen log.
Ann- where is he? I don't see anyone.
Uriel- in the log. Its the safest place I could find.
Ann- how old is he?
Uriel- I don't know exactly, maybe a year?
Ann- and you've just raised him on your own?
Uriel- yes.
Uriel walks up to the log and pulls out the baby wrapped in a blanket.
Uriel- this is hoppas.
Ann- he's so cute! I haven't seen a baby in forever!
Uriel- calm down, you might wake him up.
Ann- sorry, just a little happy.
Uriel- its fine
Ann and Uriel begin to walk back towards camp. As they get… [view original content]
Part 5
Ann and Uriel are walking in the woods
Ann- so, what's your story? How did you end up here?
Uriel- same as everyone else I … moresuppose, everyone died.
Ann- I'm sorry...
Uriel- no, don't be. It was probably for the best.
Ann- why are you talking like that?
Uriel- because its the truth.
Ann- ... So, how far is your brother?
Uriel- right up here.
Uriel points to a fallen log.
Ann- where is he? I don't see anyone.
Uriel- in the log. Its the safest place I could find.
Ann- how old is he?
Uriel- I don't know exactly, maybe a year?
Ann- and you've just raised him on your own?
Uriel- yes.
Uriel walks up to the log and pulls out the baby wrapped in a blanket.
Uriel- this is hoppas.
Ann- he's so cute! I haven't seen a baby in forever!
Uriel- calm down, you might wake him up.
Ann- sorry, just a little happy.
Uriel- its fine
Ann and Uriel begin to walk back towards camp. As they get… [view original content]
Waiting them out won't do any good... Neither would run away... If i'm remember right the guy they killed was going kill her... So i don't think there friendly. So right now i think the best thing to do is to fight them. anyway awesome part!
Part 5
Ann and Uriel are walking in the woods
Ann- so, what's your story? How did you end up here?
Uriel- same as everyone else I … moresuppose, everyone died.
Ann- I'm sorry...
Uriel- no, don't be. It was probably for the best.
Ann- why are you talking like that?
Uriel- because its the truth.
Ann- ... So, how far is your brother?
Uriel- right up here.
Uriel points to a fallen log.
Ann- where is he? I don't see anyone.
Uriel- in the log. Its the safest place I could find.
Ann- how old is he?
Uriel- I don't know exactly, maybe a year?
Ann- and you've just raised him on your own?
Uriel- yes.
Uriel walks up to the log and pulls out the baby wrapped in a blanket.
Uriel- this is hoppas.
Ann- he's so cute! I haven't seen a baby in forever!
Uriel- calm down, you might wake him up.
Ann- sorry, just a little happy.
Uriel- its fine
Ann and Uriel begin to walk back towards camp. As they get… [view original content]
[Fight them]
Waiting them out won't do any good... Neither would run away... If i'm remember right the guy they killed was going kill her… more... So i don't think there friendly. So right now i think the best thing to do is to fight them. anyway awesome part!
Part 5
Ann and Uriel are walking in the woods
Ann- so, what's your story? How did you end up here?
Uriel- same as everyone else I … moresuppose, everyone died.
Ann- I'm sorry...
Uriel- no, don't be. It was probably for the best.
Ann- why are you talking like that?
Uriel- because its the truth.
Ann- ... So, how far is your brother?
Uriel- right up here.
Uriel points to a fallen log.
Ann- where is he? I don't see anyone.
Uriel- in the log. Its the safest place I could find.
Ann- how old is he?
Uriel- I don't know exactly, maybe a year?
Ann- and you've just raised him on your own?
Uriel- yes.
Uriel walks up to the log and pulls out the baby wrapped in a blanket.
Uriel- this is hoppas.
Ann- he's so cute! I haven't seen a baby in forever!
Uriel- calm down, you might wake him up.
Ann- sorry, just a little happy.
Uriel- its fine
Ann and Uriel begin to walk back towards camp. As they get… [view original content]
Part 5
Ann and Uriel are walking in the woods
Ann- so, what's your story? How did you end up here?
Uriel- same as everyone else I … moresuppose, everyone died.
Ann- I'm sorry...
Uriel- no, don't be. It was probably for the best.
Ann- why are you talking like that?
Uriel- because its the truth.
Ann- ... So, how far is your brother?
Uriel- right up here.
Uriel points to a fallen log.
Ann- where is he? I don't see anyone.
Uriel- in the log. Its the safest place I could find.
Ann- how old is he?
Uriel- I don't know exactly, maybe a year?
Ann- and you've just raised him on your own?
Uriel- yes.
Uriel walks up to the log and pulls out the baby wrapped in a blanket.
Uriel- this is hoppas.
Ann- he's so cute! I haven't seen a baby in forever!
Uriel- calm down, you might wake him up.
Ann- sorry, just a little happy.
Uriel- its fine
Ann and Uriel begin to walk back towards camp. As they get… [view original content]
Part 5
Ann and Uriel are walking in the woods
Ann- so, what's your story? How did you end up here?
Uriel- same as everyone else I … moresuppose, everyone died.
Ann- I'm sorry...
Uriel- no, don't be. It was probably for the best.
Ann- why are you talking like that?
Uriel- because its the truth.
Ann- ... So, how far is your brother?
Uriel- right up here.
Uriel points to a fallen log.
Ann- where is he? I don't see anyone.
Uriel- in the log. Its the safest place I could find.
Ann- how old is he?
Uriel- I don't know exactly, maybe a year?
Ann- and you've just raised him on your own?
Uriel- yes.
Uriel walks up to the log and pulls out the baby wrapped in a blanket.
Uriel- this is hoppas.
Ann- he's so cute! I haven't seen a baby in forever!
Uriel- calm down, you might wake him up.
Ann- sorry, just a little happy.
Uriel- its fine
Ann and Uriel begin to walk back towards camp. As they get… [view original content]
Part 5
Ann and Uriel are walking in the woods
Ann- so, what's your story? How did you end up here?
Uriel- same as everyone else I … moresuppose, everyone died.
Ann- I'm sorry...
Uriel- no, don't be. It was probably for the best.
Ann- why are you talking like that?
Uriel- because its the truth.
Ann- ... So, how far is your brother?
Uriel- right up here.
Uriel points to a fallen log.
Ann- where is he? I don't see anyone.
Uriel- in the log. Its the safest place I could find.
Ann- how old is he?
Uriel- I don't know exactly, maybe a year?
Ann- and you've just raised him on your own?
Uriel- yes.
Uriel walks up to the log and pulls out the baby wrapped in a blanket.
Uriel- this is hoppas.
Ann- he's so cute! I haven't seen a baby in forever!
Uriel- calm down, you might wake him up.
Ann- sorry, just a little happy.
Uriel- its fine
Ann and Uriel begin to walk back towards camp. As they get… [view original content]
Part 6
Choice [wait them out]
Ann- lets just wait, we don't know if those even are our people.
Uriel- whatever you say.
???- you… more've got one minute!
One of the blindfolded figures speakes- cut the shit will, they ain't coming.
Will- fuck, we almost had em!
???- does that mean we can take the blindfolds off now?
Will- yeah, sure.
The figures take off the blindfolds and stand.
Will- hey, come here. We need to talk.
Will and one of the figure walk over to the fire.
Ann- you were right, they weren't even our people.
Uriel- what now?
Ann- we have to find them... But where would they have gone?
Uriel- theirs a small airport a few miles from here. That would be our best bet.
???- no!no! Will please don't!
Ann and Uriel look back towards the bandits, will is holding one of them over the fire.
Will- fuck you.
Will throws the figure into the fire, the figure tries to get out but is thrown back in.… [view original content]
Part 6
Choice [wait them out]
Ann- lets just wait, we don't know if those even are our people.
Uriel- whatever you say.
???- you… more've got one minute!
One of the blindfolded figures speakes- cut the shit will, they ain't coming.
Will- fuck, we almost had em!
???- does that mean we can take the blindfolds off now?
Will- yeah, sure.
The figures take off the blindfolds and stand.
Will- hey, come here. We need to talk.
Will and one of the figure walk over to the fire.
Ann- you were right, they weren't even our people.
Uriel- what now?
Ann- we have to find them... But where would they have gone?
Uriel- theirs a small airport a few miles from here. That would be our best bet.
???- no!no! Will please don't!
Ann and Uriel look back towards the bandits, will is holding one of them over the fire.
Will- fuck you.
Will throws the figure into the fire, the figure tries to get out but is thrown back in.… [view original content]
Part 6
Choice [wait them out]
Ann- lets just wait, we don't know if those even are our people.
Uriel- whatever you say.
???- you… more've got one minute!
One of the blindfolded figures speakes- cut the shit will, they ain't coming.
Will- fuck, we almost had em!
???- does that mean we can take the blindfolds off now?
Will- yeah, sure.
The figures take off the blindfolds and stand.
Will- hey, come here. We need to talk.
Will and one of the figure walk over to the fire.
Ann- you were right, they weren't even our people.
Uriel- what now?
Ann- we have to find them... But where would they have gone?
Uriel- theirs a small airport a few miles from here. That would be our best bet.
???- no!no! Will please don't!
Ann and Uriel look back towards the bandits, will is holding one of them over the fire.
Will- fuck you.
Will throws the figure into the fire, the figure tries to get out but is thrown back in.… [view original content]
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Part 6
Choice [wait them out]
Ann- lets just wait, we don't know if those even are our people.
Uriel- whatever you say.
???- you… more've got one minute!
One of the blindfolded figures speakes- cut the shit will, they ain't coming.
Will- fuck, we almost had em!
???- does that mean we can take the blindfolds off now?
Will- yeah, sure.
The figures take off the blindfolds and stand.
Will- hey, come here. We need to talk.
Will and one of the figure walk over to the fire.
Ann- you were right, they weren't even our people.
Uriel- what now?
Ann- we have to find them... But where would they have gone?
Uriel- theirs a small airport a few miles from here. That would be our best bet.
???- no!no! Will please don't!
Ann and Uriel look back towards the bandits, will is holding one of them over the fire.
Will- fuck you.
Will throws the figure into the fire, the figure tries to get out but is thrown back in.… [view original content]
Part 7
[Go to airfield]
Ann- let's head to that airfield to see if their there.
Uriel- OK, just follow me, its not far.
Ann and … moreUriel walk off into the woods.
Ann- how far is it?
Uriel- not that far.
Ann- how do you know it was there?
Uriel- I passed it on the way here. I didn't want to go in.
Ann- did you see anyone?
Uriel- no, its small. All I saw was a control tower and one aircraft hangar.
Ann- was it military?
Uriel- no its to small, just a civilian airport.
Uriel and Ann walk into a clearing that over looks a valley.
Uriel- there it is. Let's go.
Ann- right behind you.
Ann and Uriel walk out onto the runway.
Uriel- we should check the hanger first.
Ann- yeah, sure.
Ann and Uriel walk over to the hangar. Its old and has holes in the ceiling.
Uriel- may as well go in huh?
Uriel walks in through the partially opened door.
Uriel- holy...
Ann- what is it?
Uriel- come in … [view original content]
Comments
Good part!!!
Explain me why he left a BABY alone in the woods
Eh, plot...
I need to sleep.
Nice part!
Thanks!
Part 5
Ann and Uriel are walking in the woods
Ann- so, what's your story? How did you end up here?
Uriel- same as everyone else I suppose, everyone died.
Ann- I'm sorry...
Uriel- no, don't be. It was probably for the best.
Ann- why are you talking like that?
Uriel- because its the truth.
Ann- ... So, how far is your brother?
Uriel- right up here.
Uriel points to a fallen log.
Ann- where is he? I don't see anyone.
Uriel- in the log. Its the safest place I could find.
Ann- how old is he?
Uriel- I don't know exactly, maybe a year?
Ann- and you've just raised him on your own?
Uriel- yes.
Uriel walks up to the log and pulls out the baby wrapped in a blanket.
Uriel- this is hoppas.
Ann- he's so cute! I haven't seen a baby in forever!
Uriel- calm down, you might wake him up.
Ann- sorry, just a little happy.
Uriel- its fine
Ann and Uriel begin to walk back towards camp. As they get closer they notice smoke.
Ann- what the? Don't they know that it's stupid to light a fire during the day?
Uriel- I don't like this.
Uriel and Ann walk closer and notice multiple men standing in the camp.
Ann and Uriel hide behind some bushes.
Ann- shit. What do we do?
???- attention, I know your out there, and I know you killed my friend. Look, if you come out now we can be reasonable. Otherwise, your friends here will bite it.
Some of the men walk into a tent and bring out three blindfolded figures.
Ann- shit they got them. What should we do?
???- you've only got five minutes before I put one of your buddies in the fire here.
Ann and Uriel notice a large fire built to the side of the camp.
Ann- their going to burn them alive? We have to give up.
Uriel- we don't have to, we can run. We can fight. Or we can wait.
Ann- what good will that do? He will kill them!
Uriel- what if that's not them? What if its their own people?
Ann- that's stupid.
Uriel- is it?
Ann- well what good will fighting them do? I only have a knife.
Uriel- I have one to.
Ann- I need a second
???- three minutes!
Uriel- you don't have a second.
Choice
[Give up]
[Run away]
[Fight them]
[Wait them out]
[Give up]
[Wait them out]
Hard choice! Good part.
[Wait them out]
Fight is suicide, I think it's probably their people or at least good people, so running is bad. Giving up is risky.
[Fight them]
Waiting them out won't do any good... Neither would run away... If i'm remember right the guy they killed was going kill her... So i don't think there friendly. So right now i think the best thing to do is to fight them. anyway awesome part!
Thanks, I can't wait to see the outcome of this choice... I have ideas.
Also great episode!!!
Thanks.
I'm finally starting to feel better so maybe I will do better.
Thank you for doing this amazing story!!
[Give up]
Awesome work dude!
[Wait them out]
Thank you for reading it.
Thanks!
There's a two way tie between give up and wait them out.
i change my vote to wait them out
Thanks, I think I'll get a new part up later today.
Part 6
Choice [wait them out]
Ann- lets just wait, we don't know if those even are our people.
Uriel- whatever you say.
???- you've got one minute!
One of the blindfolded figures speakes- cut the shit will, they ain't coming.
Will- fuck, we almost had em!
???- does that mean we can take the blindfolds off now?
Will- yeah, sure.
The figures take off the blindfolds and stand.
Will- hey, come here. We need to talk.
Will and one of the figure walk over to the fire.
Ann- you were right, they weren't even our people.
Uriel- what now?
Ann- we have to find them... But where would they have gone?
Uriel- theirs a small airport a few miles from here. That would be our best bet.
???- no!no! Will please don't!
Ann and Uriel look back towards the bandits, will is holding one of them over the fire.
Will- fuck you.
Will throws the figure into the fire, the figure tries to get out but is thrown back in.
Will- this isn't tolerated, you don't question my orders! Now move! We've got some ground to cover if we want to reach that armory.
The bandits begin to pack up and leave.
Ann- there's an armory? Could they have gone there?
Uriel- yes, very likely. The bandits are heading there bit I know how we could get there quicker.
Choice
[Stay ]
[Go to airfield]
[Go to armory]
[Go to airfield]
[Stay ] the safer choice
[Go to the airfield]
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Thanks man!
Yeah, really liking your story.
New part is up.
[Go to airfield]
needed
A few new characters:
Military
Name: York Roberts Age: 32. Personality: Brave , Dumb , Loyal Gender: Male. Sexuality: bi
Name: Sora Farell Age: 31. Gender: Female Personality: Authority , hateful , Careless , Strong. Sexuality: straight
Name: Texas Ryans
Age: 27
Personality: Brave, strong, ruthless, loyal
Gender: Female
Weapons: Assault Rifle
Thanks! These should help.
Thanks, I like it. This should be enough.
Part 7
[Go to airfield]
Ann- let's head to that airfield to see if their there.
Uriel- OK, just follow me, its not far.
Ann and Uriel walk off into the woods.
Ann- how far is it?
Uriel- not that far.
Ann- how do you know it was there?
Uriel- I passed it on the way here. I didn't want to go in.
Ann- did you see anyone?
Uriel- no, its small. All I saw was a control tower and one aircraft hangar.
Ann- was it military?
Uriel- no its to small, just a civilian airport.
Uriel and Ann walk into a clearing that over looks a valley.
Uriel- there it is. Let's go.
Ann- right behind you.
Ann and Uriel walk out onto the runway.
Uriel- we should check the hanger first.
Ann- yeah, sure.
Ann and Uriel walk over to the hangar. Its old and has holes in the ceiling.
Uriel- may as well go in huh?
Uriel walks in through the partially opened door.
Uriel- holy...
Ann- what is it?
Uriel- come in here!
Ann goes into the hangar. She look around but sees nothing.
Ann- what is it?
Uriel pulls out a flash light and shines it on an object.
Ann- is that a plane?
Uriel- sure is. This is a military plane. How did it yet here?
???- that would be mine. Put your hands where I can see em and turn around slowly.
Ann and Uriel turn and see a figure standing in the doorway.
Ann- we don't want any trouble were just looking for some of our people.
???- good I don't want y trouble either. Come out here into the sun so I can see you.
Ann and Uriel walk out of the hangar and on to the runway.
???- my name is Texas, the others are in the tower. Some f our people went missing too.
Uriel- maybe we can help each other. We can go check out that armory that's up the road.
Tex- yeah, I'll talk it through with sora and York. I'm sure they'll want to get some of that stuff out of that armory before we take off.
Ann- you mean that plane works?
Tex- yeah! Its cool right? Just wait here, I'll go get the rest and we'll drive out there in the Humvee.
Texas walks back into the control tower.
Uriel- can we trust them?
Ann- I don't know, let's just get out to the armory and see if we can find the rest.
End chapter
Where´s Hoppas during all these? xd Anyway Great Episode!!
With Uriel, I should make a better job of incorporating him into the story, I just find it hard.
It´s okay , just is like he disappered xd