The Multiverse: Prime

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  • [I was practing a scene from a school play]

    this would've been my pick too, feels fitting here

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    I was practicing a scene from a school play I feel like this might bring out the response that will make me feel not as bad... Called Charlie just to make sure

  • edited August 2016

    Helena reminds me a bit of Kiki, just a tiny bit, but still

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Eden McCoy ..........called Charlie. I just needed to make sure that i wasn't breaking my promise to him. I dialed his number. Charl

  • Have you read any of my previous replies to your comments?

  • Morsensville

    is this the name of where the school is?

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Charles Sparks "Yeah yeah were cool. Thanks for calling" "Oh thats a relief well nice talking to you, bye" "Bye" I turned off. The

  • It's the town. I got tired of having the location nameless and stateless. Now it's just nameless.

    joriandrake posted: »

    Morsensville is this the name of where the school is?

  • I think you found your style at this Emma scene

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Emma Archer Oh no hes going to kill her. Not after so long. Please no, no please.... "Umm...Emma?" "NOOOOOOOOO!!...................

  • lol Pierce

    also being immune to fear doesn't mean doesn't feel it, and even if yes, a person can still rationally know when a rescue is needed

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Mike.....Just Mike Then i got a miracle. ".......i was just practicing a scene from a school play" The whole thing changed. She sto

  • lol Pierce x2 !!!

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Eden MCcoy I thought about it and decided that sis deserved better. So i went down stairs and started cooking. Valentino Drake "D

  • The game is supposed to be filled with bad logic and glitches.

    joriandrake posted: »

    lol Pierce also being immune to fear doesn't mean doesn't feel it, and even if yes, a person can still rationally know when a rescue is needed

  • I so want my girl elf sneak up on Ellie in the future

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Nick Archer Today was the day. The day i was going to see my sister again. After all these years i would finally be with her. Sure i saw

  • damn, seems it would've been more interesting to make students at the early stage, I like how the story takes place at same time from all perspectives

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Emma Archer I walked to the meeting room. I had to stop 2 or 3 times to make sure that Lylain was still following me. Why was he so slow?

  • Helena Macnion ... hmmm

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Valentino Drake I ended up choosing to call Sadie and to spoil the ending for the game (since lets face it it probably wasn't good) thoug

  • Thanks. It really took time to memorize a time period considering how long it was between Parts.

    joriandrake posted: »

    damn, seems it would've been more interesting to make students at the early stage, I like how the story takes place at same time from all perspectives

  • edited August 2016

    Emma is the highlight, Marlone reminds me a bit of a certain Stargate Atlantis scientist

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Emma Archer It took me a while.....but i decided i should....trust him......lying probably would have been easier......... "Well......

  • oh God, Marlone as tour guide with Lucius present XD

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Nick Archer I had punched him straight in the face. I only had a short time to react. I decided i could use my skill and explain without

  • I think Max may have 'fun' with Samuel's tormenters, either that or hire them

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Zack Sheen It took me a while but i finally realised i was crying. T-this was it, my life was over. Now mom and dad would kick me out of

  • hm, too much of a Joker

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Samuel.....Just Samuel.....Tempting Fate "It's going to Beta" i answered. I was risking everything, but i just couldn't. I tried my best

  • Do you mean that as good or bad?

    Regardless, that was exactly what i was going for so thanks :).

    joriandrake posted: »

    hm, too much of a Joker

  • I noticed you wrote 'buss' since the start of story, why not bus?

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Gus Menton Well, i was standing 'round, waiting for Adam to call me. Poor fella always seemed paranoid about this trip. My guess was the

  • Egads, Marlone will BURN if arguing with Lucius XD

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Kevan Marlone I walked by the halls of the building with confidence. Looking at the beautifully colored walls i would one day call mine.

  • edited August 2016

    ...........That is one grammar mistake i didn't know i was making till 3 months ago. I'm sorry, English is my second language and i was 15 when i started this. I triple check everything now.

    joriandrake posted: »

    I noticed you wrote 'buss' since the start of story, why not bus?

  • Indeed. Incredible how the circumstances lead to this.

    joriandrake posted: »

    Egads, Marlone will BURN if arguing with Lucius XD

  • what should I say? then again I know it would be WAY late to try vote now

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Just a tiny bit.

  • lol. I'm just going to wait for the guy who comes after you to react to this.

    joriandrake posted: »

    what should I say? then again I know it would be WAY late to try vote now

  • one day, Riley may remember this as one of her happier memories, depending on the journey to follow

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Charles Sparks I was still waiting for the buss. I looked at my phone. 5 more minutes till it was late. I began to worry he had taken the

  • second chances?

    Zack didn't do anything to this guy tho, as such no reason for him not to attempt offering at least one chance

    [Follow Saddie's Advice] Shockingly, I'm not the kind of person to give second chances, at least not unless there is a really good reason

  • I might make a character with mismatched eyes which can shoot lasers, just to ask Zoey if she can too XD

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Zoey Smith I woke up to the sound of my alarm clock. I tried ignoring the sound but it was just impossible. Dammit, i should have set it

  • Indeed. This was merely a preview of the horror that will come.

    joriandrake posted: »

    one day, Riley may remember this as one of her happier memories, depending on the journey to follow

  • XD.

    joriandrake posted: »

    I might make a character with mismatched eyes which can shoot lasers, just to ask Zoey if she can too XD

  • Wonder how a brawl with Zoey, Kiki, and Max would look, altho I guess Max wouldn't want to fight the girls

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Zoey Smith I woke up to the sound of my alarm clock. I tried ignoring the sound but it was just impossible. Dammit, i should have set it

  • so many gangs, so many streets for Max to conquer

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Eden McCoy I just finished baking the pancakes when Alex woke up. She had Summer with her, who instantly ran up to me. I was always surpr

  • no wonder the story only has 12 pages

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Ok guys here's an update. I have recently gotten back into writting. However it's not Prime yet (since i'm afraid my writting won't be as go

  • Then, as if one cue, she immediately jumped on top of me. That was two times today.

    She must really love him

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Casey Miller It was 8:00 when i woke up by the sound of the alarm clock. Originally it was supposed to be set to 6:00 but let's just say

  • no way that Riley, Samuel, Zack's etc problems won't be noticed by Lucius, at least the most obvious issues like signs of combat

    Woah, the bus is like a gathering place for a dozen or so criminal scenes

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Charles Sparks "I'll do it" i said staring him right in the face. "You just lost that fancy necklace" "Are you serious?!" Sadie said b

  • Your guys really won't help that.

    joriandrake posted: »

    no way that Riley, Samuel, Zack's etc problems won't be noticed by Lucius, at least the most obvious issues like signs of combat Woah, the bus is like a gathering place for a dozen or so criminal scenes

  • [Accept the necklace] - i would've voted this, but only to give it back after a week and tell him it was stupid to make bets about family heirlooms and girls you love

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Charles Sparks "I'll do it" i said staring him right in the face. "You just lost that fancy necklace" "Are you serious?!" Sadie said b

  • Thank you for the compliment, that is much appreciated :) I like making detailed characters, though to be honest, my character creation skills have advanced a lot in the past year and I can proudly say that my more recently submitted characters are even more detailed.

    joriandrake posted: »

    now that I dare read this thread too after finishing chars, yours are as I see among the most detailed ones

  • ah right, the 'sandwitch' stuff was in the past one of my weaknesses too :)

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Sorry, it's fixed now. I had a lot of these in older parts and had to fix them. You're just lucky you didn't see my which witch is whitch problem. That one was embarrassingly common.

  • Wish you luck with this plan

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    I know. It's seriously shameful to me. But like I've said repeatedly, that is over from now on. One part weekly is the minimum.

  • Wow, you went to Atlantis

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Santoriny did. It's the place they think it was. Funny you mentioned it since i DID go there, but the main trip was Grece and Italy.

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