The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 2
I got a call from some Agency Spook and something's wrong, They're accusing me o… moref the murder of a former friend and I decided to go to the Embassy and sort this out......
Peter walked into the Embassy doors and receives a phone call
Peter: I'm here.
Male Voice: Didn't think you would show......
Peter: Who are you?
Male Voice: Well, Since you've been so cooperative, My Name is Phil Cunningham.
Peter: Okay Phil, What do you want?
Phil Cunningham: Go to the counter and say your name, Then we'll meet.
Peter slowly walks up to the counter and analyzes everything around him..... Something's off
Peter: Hi I'm Peterson Hunt, I was told that there's some issue that needs to be sorted out.
Secretary: Hello Mr. Hunt , These two men will take you to your "debriefing"
Peter: Hey Big Guy, You supposed to be the Terminator or something?
Guard: Walk.
Peter wal… [view original content]
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The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 2
I got a call from some Agency Spook and something's wrong, They're accusing me o… moref the murder of a former friend and I decided to go to the Embassy and sort this out......
Peter walked into the Embassy doors and receives a phone call
Peter: I'm here.
Male Voice: Didn't think you would show......
Peter: Who are you?
Male Voice: Well, Since you've been so cooperative, My Name is Phil Cunningham.
Peter: Okay Phil, What do you want?
Phil Cunningham: Go to the counter and say your name, Then we'll meet.
Peter slowly walks up to the counter and analyzes everything around him..... Something's off
Peter: Hi I'm Peterson Hunt, I was told that there's some issue that needs to be sorted out.
Secretary: Hello Mr. Hunt , These two men will take you to your "debriefing"
Peter: Hey Big Guy, You supposed to be the Terminator or something?
Guard: Walk.
Peter wal… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 2
I got a call from some Agency Spook and something's wrong, They're accusing me o… moref the murder of a former friend and I decided to go to the Embassy and sort this out......
Peter walked into the Embassy doors and receives a phone call
Peter: I'm here.
Male Voice: Didn't think you would show......
Peter: Who are you?
Male Voice: Well, Since you've been so cooperative, My Name is Phil Cunningham.
Peter: Okay Phil, What do you want?
Phil Cunningham: Go to the counter and say your name, Then we'll meet.
Peter slowly walks up to the counter and analyzes everything around him..... Something's off
Peter: Hi I'm Peterson Hunt, I was told that there's some issue that needs to be sorted out.
Secretary: Hello Mr. Hunt , These two men will take you to your "debriefing"
Peter: Hey Big Guy, You supposed to be the Terminator or something?
Guard: Walk.
Peter wal… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 2
I got a call from some Agency Spook and something's wrong, They're accusing me o… moref the murder of a former friend and I decided to go to the Embassy and sort this out......
Peter walked into the Embassy doors and receives a phone call
Peter: I'm here.
Male Voice: Didn't think you would show......
Peter: Who are you?
Male Voice: Well, Since you've been so cooperative, My Name is Phil Cunningham.
Peter: Okay Phil, What do you want?
Phil Cunningham: Go to the counter and say your name, Then we'll meet.
Peter slowly walks up to the counter and analyzes everything around him..... Something's off
Peter: Hi I'm Peterson Hunt, I was told that there's some issue that needs to be sorted out.
Secretary: Hello Mr. Hunt , These two men will take you to your "debriefing"
Peter: Hey Big Guy, You supposed to be the Terminator or something?
Guard: Walk.
Peter wal… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 3
Peter: Okay, Fine, You Guys win.....
Guard: Turn around.
Peter: No.
Gua… morerd: Thought you said we were doing this the easy way Hunt.
Peter: I lied.
Peter turned around and kicked one across the face knocking him out, Another one charged at Peter but he put him in a choke-hold
Peter: Shoot and he dies
Guards start shooting at Peter and his hostage
Peter: That didn't work.......... 2 down......
Unknown Man: Hold your fire! Cunningham said he was mine........ PETER! DON'T BE SHY, COME ON OUT!!!!
Peter: Who are you!?
Unknown Man: You don't recognize my voice? It's me, Jordan, Jordan Smith, Remember from Mexico?
Damn, Jordan Smith was a former Arms Dealer but I brought down his operation in Mexico about 7 years ago. Haven't heard from him since...
Peter: Cunningham know about you?
Jordan Smith: No
Peter: What about these guys? They yours?
Jorda… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 3
Peter: Okay, Fine, You Guys win.....
Guard: Turn around.
Peter: No.
Gua… morerd: Thought you said we were doing this the easy way Hunt.
Peter: I lied.
Peter turned around and kicked one across the face knocking him out, Another one charged at Peter but he put him in a choke-hold
Peter: Shoot and he dies
Guards start shooting at Peter and his hostage
Peter: That didn't work.......... 2 down......
Unknown Man: Hold your fire! Cunningham said he was mine........ PETER! DON'T BE SHY, COME ON OUT!!!!
Peter: Who are you!?
Unknown Man: You don't recognize my voice? It's me, Jordan, Jordan Smith, Remember from Mexico?
Damn, Jordan Smith was a former Arms Dealer but I brought down his operation in Mexico about 7 years ago. Haven't heard from him since...
Peter: Cunningham know about you?
Jordan Smith: No
Peter: What about these guys? They yours?
Jorda… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 3
Peter: Okay, Fine, You Guys win.....
Guard: Turn around.
Peter: No.
Guard: Thought you said we were doing this the easy way Hunt.
Peter: I lied.
Peter turned around and kicked one across the face knocking him out, Another one charged at Peter but he put him in a choke-hold
Peter: Shoot and he dies
Guards start shooting at Peter and his hostage
Peter: That didn't work.......... 2 down......
Unknown Man: Hold your fire! Cunningham said he was mine........ PETER! DON'T BE SHY, COME ON OUT!!!!
Peter: Who are you!?
Unknown Man: You don't recognize my voice? It's me, Jordan, Jordan Smith, Remember from Mexico?
Damn, Jordan Smith was a former Arms Dealer but I brought down his operation in Mexico about 7 years ago. Haven't heard from him since...
Peter: Cunningham know about you?
Jordan Smith: No
Peter: What about these guys? They yours?
Jordan Smith: Yep Fires Shot
Peter: You missed
Jordan Smith: It was a warning shot, C'mon jackass, We're gonna go for a ride
After walking out of the interrogation room, The guards were pointing their guns at me in a hallway, I now see a window the other way, I could go with Jordan who might kill me or I could try and escape.....
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 3
Peter: Okay, Fine, You Guys win.....
Guard: Turn around.
Peter: No.
Gua… morerd: Thought you said we were doing this the easy way Hunt.
Peter: I lied.
Peter turned around and kicked one across the face knocking him out, Another one charged at Peter but he put him in a choke-hold
Peter: Shoot and he dies
Guards start shooting at Peter and his hostage
Peter: That didn't work.......... 2 down......
Unknown Man: Hold your fire! Cunningham said he was mine........ PETER! DON'T BE SHY, COME ON OUT!!!!
Peter: Who are you!?
Unknown Man: You don't recognize my voice? It's me, Jordan, Jordan Smith, Remember from Mexico?
Damn, Jordan Smith was a former Arms Dealer but I brought down his operation in Mexico about 7 years ago. Haven't heard from him since...
Peter: Cunningham know about you?
Jordan Smith: No
Peter: What about these guys? They yours?
Jorda… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 3
Peter: Okay, Fine, You Guys win.....
Guard: Turn around.
Peter: No.
Gua… morerd: Thought you said we were doing this the easy way Hunt.
Peter: I lied.
Peter turned around and kicked one across the face knocking him out, Another one charged at Peter but he put him in a choke-hold
Peter: Shoot and he dies
Guards start shooting at Peter and his hostage
Peter: That didn't work.......... 2 down......
Unknown Man: Hold your fire! Cunningham said he was mine........ PETER! DON'T BE SHY, COME ON OUT!!!!
Peter: Who are you!?
Unknown Man: You don't recognize my voice? It's me, Jordan, Jordan Smith, Remember from Mexico?
Damn, Jordan Smith was a former Arms Dealer but I brought down his operation in Mexico about 7 years ago. Haven't heard from him since...
Peter: Cunningham know about you?
Jordan Smith: No
Peter: What about these guys? They yours?
Jorda… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 4
Peter: There a third option?
Jordan: Nope Fires Another Shot
I saw a windo… morew behind me from the side of my eye, With luck I could run out it, I decided it's better than going with a guy who has it out for me...
Jordan: C'mon
Peter: Screw this Starts Running
Jordan: Shoot him you idiots!!!!!
Guard: What?
Peter runs through window and lands on top of a car driving on the streets
Jordan: You're fucking useless!! Shoots Guard
Guard: Sir?
Jordan: You didn't do shit either Skrub Shoots other guard For the rest of you, Find him and kill him....
Phil Cunningham: What the hell happened, I heard gun shots
Jordan: He got away
Phil Cunningham: God Dammit, Now I have to tell 123 about this, There goes that "Promotion" you wanted Jordan..... Walks Away
Jordan: I'm not even part of your shit agency, And soon enough you'll be dead......
Male Voice: Peterso… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 4
Peter: There a third option?
Jordan: Nope Fires Another Shot
I saw a windo… morew behind me from the side of my eye, With luck I could run out it, I decided it's better than going with a guy who has it out for me...
Jordan: C'mon
Peter: Screw this Starts Running
Jordan: Shoot him you idiots!!!!!
Guard: What?
Peter runs through window and lands on top of a car driving on the streets
Jordan: You're fucking useless!! Shoots Guard
Guard: Sir?
Jordan: You didn't do shit either Skrub Shoots other guard For the rest of you, Find him and kill him....
Phil Cunningham: What the hell happened, I heard gun shots
Jordan: He got away
Phil Cunningham: God Dammit, Now I have to tell 123 about this, There goes that "Promotion" you wanted Jordan..... Walks Away
Jordan: I'm not even part of your shit agency, And soon enough you'll be dead......
Male Voice: Peterso… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 4
Peter: There a third option?
Jordan: Nope Fires Another Shot
I saw a windo… morew behind me from the side of my eye, With luck I could run out it, I decided it's better than going with a guy who has it out for me...
Jordan: C'mon
Peter: Screw this Starts Running
Jordan: Shoot him you idiots!!!!!
Guard: What?
Peter runs through window and lands on top of a car driving on the streets
Jordan: You're fucking useless!! Shoots Guard
Guard: Sir?
Jordan: You didn't do shit either Skrub Shoots other guard For the rest of you, Find him and kill him....
Phil Cunningham: What the hell happened, I heard gun shots
Jordan: He got away
Phil Cunningham: God Dammit, Now I have to tell 123 about this, There goes that "Promotion" you wanted Jordan..... Walks Away
Jordan: I'm not even part of your shit agency, And soon enough you'll be dead......
Male Voice: Peterso… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 4
Peter: There a third option?
Jordan: Nope Fires Another Shot
I saw a windo… morew behind me from the side of my eye, With luck I could run out it, I decided it's better than going with a guy who has it out for me...
Jordan: C'mon
Peter: Screw this Starts Running
Jordan: Shoot him you idiots!!!!!
Guard: What?
Peter runs through window and lands on top of a car driving on the streets
Jordan: You're fucking useless!! Shoots Guard
Guard: Sir?
Jordan: You didn't do shit either Skrub Shoots other guard For the rest of you, Find him and kill him....
Phil Cunningham: What the hell happened, I heard gun shots
Jordan: He got away
Phil Cunningham: God Dammit, Now I have to tell 123 about this, There goes that "Promotion" you wanted Jordan..... Walks Away
Jordan: I'm not even part of your shit agency, And soon enough you'll be dead......
Male Voice: Peterso… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 4
Peter: There a third option?
Jordan: Nope Fires Another Shot
I saw a windo… morew behind me from the side of my eye, With luck I could run out it, I decided it's better than going with a guy who has it out for me...
Jordan: C'mon
Peter: Screw this Starts Running
Jordan: Shoot him you idiots!!!!!
Guard: What?
Peter runs through window and lands on top of a car driving on the streets
Jordan: You're fucking useless!! Shoots Guard
Guard: Sir?
Jordan: You didn't do shit either Skrub Shoots other guard For the rest of you, Find him and kill him....
Phil Cunningham: What the hell happened, I heard gun shots
Jordan: He got away
Phil Cunningham: God Dammit, Now I have to tell 123 about this, There goes that "Promotion" you wanted Jordan..... Walks Away
Jordan: I'm not even part of your shit agency, And soon enough you'll be dead......
Male Voice: Peterso… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 4
Peter: There a third option?
Jordan: Nope Fires Another Shot
I saw a windo… morew behind me from the side of my eye, With luck I could run out it, I decided it's better than going with a guy who has it out for me...
Jordan: C'mon
Peter: Screw this Starts Running
Jordan: Shoot him you idiots!!!!!
Guard: What?
Peter runs through window and lands on top of a car driving on the streets
Jordan: You're fucking useless!! Shoots Guard
Guard: Sir?
Jordan: You didn't do shit either Skrub Shoots other guard For the rest of you, Find him and kill him....
Phil Cunningham: What the hell happened, I heard gun shots
Jordan: He got away
Phil Cunningham: God Dammit, Now I have to tell 123 about this, There goes that "Promotion" you wanted Jordan..... Walks Away
Jordan: I'm not even part of your shit agency, And soon enough you'll be dead......
Male Voice: Peterso… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 5
After running out a window, I landed on some guys car and caused a small dent...................I decided to pay him for the SMALL damages
Peter: Okay, Okay, Here you go
Car Driver: Want to go to the hospital? I think you should go
Peter: No I'm fine
Car Driver: Now you aren't Grabs Gun and Shoots Peter in the shoulder
Peter: AHHH!!!, Who are you? One of Jordan's Guys?
Car Driver: Nope, Maybe you know me by the name of the Snake
Peter: Aw Shit......
Angus "Snake" Carnegie, Damn, He's the best for hire mercenary out there, Every few weeks he changes his appearance, He's a master of disguise and a damn fine sharpshooter, This is my first time personally meeting hum but a few friends of mine tried to grab him and ended up coming home in body-bags....
The Snake: Thanks for the money by the way, And this car was stolen so it's not my problem but according to the police, You've stolen this car, By the way, You wanna know how she died? Your Friend, What was her name Shannon Clare? I walked up to her looking like you and she was so delighted to see you after so long, then I stabbed her and watched her look go from happiness to terror and confusion...
Peter: Son of a bitch.....You'll never get away with this...
The Snake: I already have.......... and Rambo says Hi
Cars Drive up to them
Phil Cunningham: Who are you?
The Snake: I'm just a car driver, then this guy jumped on my car and I turned over, I then shot him in self defense and called the police
Phil Cunningham: Well you can go on your way now...
The Snake: Thanks Smiles as he gets into his car
Peter: Don't let him get away, He's not who he says he is...
Phil Cunningham: I don't care, You've stolen a car, committed murder and Treason
Peter: Treason?
Phil Cunningham: You know what you did with the Serum
Peter: Listen, I've been framed
Phil Cunningham: Expect me to believe you? You're going to the Limbo, the Tomb whatever you want to call it for a Long Time...................
Peter:No, No, No, I deserve a fair trial, I'm an American citizen
Phil Cunningham: For a guy like you? You would probably kill everyone in the court room, That's it, You don't exist now.................
END OF PART 1
(No choice this chapter because it was mostly set up for the next part)
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 5
After running out a window, I landed on some guys car and caused a small dent...… more................I decided to pay him for the SMALL damages
Peter: Okay, Okay, Here you go
Car Driver: Want to go to the hospital? I think you should go
Peter: No I'm fine
Car Driver: Now you aren't Grabs Gun and Shoots Peter in the shoulder
Peter: AHHH!!!, Who are you? One of Jordan's Guys?
Car Driver: Nope, Maybe you know me by the name of the Snake
Peter: Aw Shit......
Angus "Snake" Carnegie, Damn, He's the best for hire mercenary out there, Every few weeks he changes his appearance, He's a master of disguise and a damn fine sharpshooter, This is my first time personally meeting hum but a few friends of mine tried to grab him and ended up coming home in body-bags....
The Snake: Thanks for the money by the way, And this car was stolen so it's not my problem but according to the… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 5
After running out a window, I landed on some guys car and caused a small dent...… more................I decided to pay him for the SMALL damages
Peter: Okay, Okay, Here you go
Car Driver: Want to go to the hospital? I think you should go
Peter: No I'm fine
Car Driver: Now you aren't Grabs Gun and Shoots Peter in the shoulder
Peter: AHHH!!!, Who are you? One of Jordan's Guys?
Car Driver: Nope, Maybe you know me by the name of the Snake
Peter: Aw Shit......
Angus "Snake" Carnegie, Damn, He's the best for hire mercenary out there, Every few weeks he changes his appearance, He's a master of disguise and a damn fine sharpshooter, This is my first time personally meeting hum but a few friends of mine tried to grab him and ended up coming home in body-bags....
The Snake: Thanks for the money by the way, And this car was stolen so it's not my problem but according to the… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 5
After running out a window, I landed on some guys car and caused a small dent...… more................I decided to pay him for the SMALL damages
Peter: Okay, Okay, Here you go
Car Driver: Want to go to the hospital? I think you should go
Peter: No I'm fine
Car Driver: Now you aren't Grabs Gun and Shoots Peter in the shoulder
Peter: AHHH!!!, Who are you? One of Jordan's Guys?
Car Driver: Nope, Maybe you know me by the name of the Snake
Peter: Aw Shit......
Angus "Snake" Carnegie, Damn, He's the best for hire mercenary out there, Every few weeks he changes his appearance, He's a master of disguise and a damn fine sharpshooter, This is my first time personally meeting hum but a few friends of mine tried to grab him and ended up coming home in body-bags....
The Snake: Thanks for the money by the way, And this car was stolen so it's not my problem but according to the… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 5
After running out a window, I landed on some guys car and caused a small dent...… more................I decided to pay him for the SMALL damages
Peter: Okay, Okay, Here you go
Car Driver: Want to go to the hospital? I think you should go
Peter: No I'm fine
Car Driver: Now you aren't Grabs Gun and Shoots Peter in the shoulder
Peter: AHHH!!!, Who are you? One of Jordan's Guys?
Car Driver: Nope, Maybe you know me by the name of the Snake
Peter: Aw Shit......
Angus "Snake" Carnegie, Damn, He's the best for hire mercenary out there, Every few weeks he changes his appearance, He's a master of disguise and a damn fine sharpshooter, This is my first time personally meeting hum but a few friends of mine tried to grab him and ended up coming home in body-bags....
The Snake: Thanks for the money by the way, And this car was stolen so it's not my problem but according to the… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 5
After running out a window, I landed on some guys car and caused a small dent...… more................I decided to pay him for the SMALL damages
Peter: Okay, Okay, Here you go
Car Driver: Want to go to the hospital? I think you should go
Peter: No I'm fine
Car Driver: Now you aren't Grabs Gun and Shoots Peter in the shoulder
Peter: AHHH!!!, Who are you? One of Jordan's Guys?
Car Driver: Nope, Maybe you know me by the name of the Snake
Peter: Aw Shit......
Angus "Snake" Carnegie, Damn, He's the best for hire mercenary out there, Every few weeks he changes his appearance, He's a master of disguise and a damn fine sharpshooter, This is my first time personally meeting hum but a few friends of mine tried to grab him and ended up coming home in body-bags....
The Snake: Thanks for the money by the way, And this car was stolen so it's not my problem but according to the… [view original content]
Tomorrow a Shadow of November chapter will be released but here's some questions...
Who's your favorite character? (I was gonna say Prota… moregonists and Antagonists but there's not many Pros yet so just in general...)
What do you like so far?
What do you dislike so far?
What do you think will happen next?
Would you look forward to any more Salt123 made Fan Fics in the future?
Tomorrow a Shadow of November chapter will be released but here's some questions...
Who's your favorite character? (I was gonna say Prota… moregonists and Antagonists but there's not many Pros yet so just in general...)
What do you like so far?
What do you dislike so far?
What do you think will happen next?
Would you look forward to any more Salt123 made Fan Fics in the future?
Tomorrow a Shadow of November chapter will be released but here's some questions...
Who's your favorite character? (I was gonna say Prota… moregonists and Antagonists but there's not many Pros yet so just in general...)
What do you like so far?
What do you dislike so far?
What do you think will happen next?
Would you look forward to any more Salt123 made Fan Fics in the future?
1. Hard to say. Peter as the hero is really likeable, Rambo is a great villain, as are Snake and Jordan, Cunningham is an asshole but seems to be well-intentioned. I think I like them all, probably Peter and Cunningham a bit more than the rest.
2. The story and the characters (especially the versatile cast of villains)
3. Some of the parts could be a bit longer. The shorter parts are making the wait more difficult
4. Maybe we'll see the mysterious Limbo. Episode 2 is named "The Tomb" after all.
Tomorrow a Shadow of November chapter will be released but here's some questions...
Who's your favorite character? (I was gonna say Prota… moregonists and Antagonists but there's not many Pros yet so just in general...)
What do you like so far?
What do you dislike so far?
What do you think will happen next?
Would you look forward to any more Salt123 made Fan Fics in the future?
I've been set up........................................... An old friend was murdered, I tried to go to the embassy and sort things out but some old rivals tried to get me, I was set up by the Snake..........They're on the inside and there's no one I can trust............
Phil Cunningham: This is where you'll spend the rest of your days Peterson, You've probably locked some people in here yourself, It's called by many names like the Limbo, the Tomb, the Gallows, Death Watch, or my favorite, Hell on earth, Hoe you enjoy it.
As Phil, Me and a few guards were walking by some of the cells I saw one with marker on it: SPARKER
Phil Cunningham: Oh, I see you've noticed the cell reserved for Sparker, He's just some fucked up clown but he's done some damage so he has to be put away, Who knows you might meet him! Try to loosen up I'm the agent in charge here so your "stay" can go the easy way or the hard way
Peter: Think I need a friend?
Phil Cunningham: Everyone needs friends eventually, Or at least you do, Remember, there's no law here, I can do whatever I want to you, when I want, You don't exist. Phil Cunningham walks away
I saw a bunch of different type of cells, And I recognized a few faces in there but I tried to ignore them.....
Peter: What now?
Guard: Bedtime Princess Puts bag over Peter's head
I woke up in a cell in the center of all the rest, It seemed like Bullet proof glass and Guard armed with AK-47s watching, This is gonna be tough to get out of.........I can see why this is the most secure prison in the world....I heard by Cell Door open.....
Guard: Lunch Time.
I followed the Guard to a cafeteria like area, Damn these guard are serious, They have a weapon pointed at every prisoner from above....
Prisoner: HEY HUNT!!!!!
Peter: Oh Hey Man, It's been a while
Prisoner: Fucking Fag!!!! Throws Punch
Peter: Dodges and returns a punch
Prisoner: Aw Shiat, You're fucking dead, Guards start Tazing them both
Peter: Nice one dumbass. Guard start dragging Prisoner away
Prisoner NOOOOOOOOO AHH NOOOOOOO
Another Prisoner: You okay?
Peter: Yeah, These guards don't joke around, do they?
Another Prisoner: Nope, they sure don't, What's your name?
Peter: My name's Peter, Yours?
Another Prisoner: Pines, Why are you locked away?
Peter: Does it matter?
Pines: I guess not.
Peter: What about you?
Pines: I'm not trying to be a pussy but the Government screwed me over, set me up, and then locked me away here.
Peter: Sounds Familiar.
Pines: Happens too often to too many Damn good people. I've been trying to break out but every chance just turns out to be a test from the big guys....
Peter: I think I could help you get out of here
Pines: I doubt it, But what do you want to do now?
The Shadow of November Part 2: The Tomb Chapter 1
I've been set up........................................... An old friend was murdered,… more I tried to go to the embassy and sort things out but some old rivals tried to get me, I was set up by the Snake..........They're on the inside and there's no one I can trust............
Phil Cunningham: This is where you'll spend the rest of your days Peterson, You've probably locked some people in here yourself, It's called by many names like the Limbo, the Tomb, the Gallows, Death Watch, or my favorite, Hell on earth, Hoe you enjoy it.
As Phil, Me and a few guards were walking by some of the cells I saw one with marker on it: SPARKER
Phil Cunningham: Oh, I see you've noticed the cell reserved for Sparker, He's just some fucked up clown but he's done some damage so he has to be put away, Who knows you might meet him! Try to loosen up I'm the agent in charge here so your "stay" can go the easy … [view original content]
Comments
Give up
Awesome I missed your story's the best thing about the forum :'D
Fight
BRING IT YES violence I need it you must fight for what you believe in live for nothing or die for something B}
Mark your back
Fight
Yep great to see you bro
fight and also when will my characters show up?
Fight
One will show either next part or in 2 parts
BROS FORVER
(seriously great to have you back)
Fight
When will the part 2 will arrive?
Update to let you know
, I have a plan for him. Expect him in Part 2 
And he might not die xD
Sounds cool.
Run out the window - Nope!
Run out window
Jordan Danger XD
Great Chapter!!!!
When will arrive the new chapter of JP?
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 3
Peter: Okay, Fine, You Guys win.....
Guard: Turn around.
Peter: No.
Guard: Thought you said we were doing this the easy way Hunt.
Peter: I lied.
Peter turned around and kicked one across the face knocking him out, Another one charged at Peter but he put him in a choke-hold
Peter: Shoot and he dies
Guards start shooting at Peter and his hostage
Peter: That didn't work.......... 2 down......
Unknown Man: Hold your fire! Cunningham said he was mine........ PETER! DON'T BE SHY, COME ON OUT!!!!
Peter: Who are you!?
Unknown Man: You don't recognize my voice? It's me, Jordan, Jordan Smith, Remember from Mexico?
Damn, Jordan Smith was a former Arms Dealer but I brought down his operation in Mexico about 7 years ago. Haven't heard from him since...
Peter: Cunningham know about you?
Jordan Smith: No
Peter: What about these guys? They yours?
Jordan Smith: Yep Fires Shot
Peter: You missed
Jordan Smith: It was a warning shot, C'mon jackass, We're gonna go for a ride
After walking out of the interrogation room, The guards were pointing their guns at me in a hallway, I now see a window the other way, I could go with Jordan who might kill me or I could try and escape.....
Run out window OR Take a "Ride" with Jordan
Take a "ride" with Jordan
I wanna see what happens
Run out window
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 4
Peter: There a third option?
Jordan: Nope Fires Another Shot
I saw a window behind me from the side of my eye, With luck I could run out it, I decided it's better than going with a guy who has it out for me...
Jordan: C'mon
Peter: Screw this Starts Running
Jordan: Shoot him you idiots!!!!!
Guard: What?
Peter runs through window and lands on top of a car driving on the streets
Jordan: You're fucking useless!! Shoots Guard
Guard: Sir?
Jordan: You didn't do shit either Skrub Shoots other guard For the rest of you, Find him and kill him....
Phil Cunningham: What the hell happened, I heard gun shots
Jordan: He got away
Phil Cunningham: God Dammit, Now I have to tell 123 about this, There goes that "Promotion" you wanted Jordan..... Walks Away
Jordan: I'm not even part of your shit agency, And soon enough you'll be dead......
Male Voice: Peterson is the one, we're gonna take out....
Jordan: Where the fuck were you Rambo?
Rambo: Lighting some fireworks...... Peterson got away didn't he? You need to get the basics down first kid..........
Jordan: Whatever.....
Back to Peterson
Car Driver: Who are you!? Get off my Car!!
Peterson: Pull over!
Car Driver pulls over
Peterson: Thanks, I'll be going now
Car Driver: You just put a dent in my car, You're gonna have to pay up
Peterson: You can barley see it
Car Driver shakes head
Pay Car Driver OR You're making this up, I have places to go
**Pay Car Driver ** Why not? He could help you later :P
Amazing Chapter!!!!!!
PAY
Pay car driver
Pay cool chapter!
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Pay Car Driver
The Shadow of November Part 1: Nothing is Over Chapter 5
After running out a window, I landed on some guys car and caused a small dent...................I decided to pay him for the SMALL damages
Peter: Okay, Okay, Here you go
Car Driver: Want to go to the hospital? I think you should go
Peter: No I'm fine
Car Driver: Now you aren't Grabs Gun and Shoots Peter in the shoulder
Peter: AHHH!!!, Who are you? One of Jordan's Guys?
Car Driver: Nope, Maybe you know me by the name of the Snake
Peter: Aw Shit......
Angus "Snake" Carnegie, Damn, He's the best for hire mercenary out there, Every few weeks he changes his appearance, He's a master of disguise and a damn fine sharpshooter, This is my first time personally meeting hum but a few friends of mine tried to grab him and ended up coming home in body-bags....
The Snake: Thanks for the money by the way, And this car was stolen so it's not my problem but according to the police, You've stolen this car, By the way, You wanna know how she died? Your Friend, What was her name Shannon Clare? I walked up to her looking like you and she was so delighted to see you after so long, then I stabbed her and watched her look go from happiness to terror and confusion...
Peter: Son of a bitch.....You'll never get away with this...
The Snake: I already have.......... and Rambo says Hi
Cars Drive up to them
Phil Cunningham: Who are you?
The Snake: I'm just a car driver, then this guy jumped on my car and I turned over, I then shot him in self defense and called the police
Phil Cunningham: Well you can go on your way now...
The Snake: Thanks Smiles as he gets into his car
Peter: Don't let him get away, He's not who he says he is...
Phil Cunningham: I don't care, You've stolen a car, committed murder and Treason
Peter: Treason?
Phil Cunningham: You know what you did with the Serum
Peter: Listen, I've been framed
Phil Cunningham: Expect me to believe you? You're going to the Limbo, the Tomb whatever you want to call it for a Long Time...................
Peter:No, No, No, I deserve a fair trial, I'm an American citizen
Phil Cunningham: For a guy like you? You would probably kill everyone in the court room, That's it, You don't exist now.................
END OF PART 1
(No choice this chapter because it was mostly set up for the next part)
Please Tell me what you guys think!
Excellent Chapter!!!!
I did not see that twist coming
Very excited for the next part!
So they think Peter is Count Hypno........o god....
Awesome part!
Great chapter!
Tomorrow a Shadow of November chapter will be released but here's some questions...
Who's your favorite character? (I was gonna say Protagonists and Antagonists but there's not many Pros yet so just in general...)
What do you like so far?
What do you dislike so far?
What do you think will happen next?
Would you look forward to any more Salt123 made Fan Fics in the future?
Right now its too soon to telll
Everithing
Nothing ( that was not intentinally a refrence)
I cant tell its all just a BIG mystery
Yes always saltbro
1. Hard to say. Peter as the hero is really likeable, Rambo is a great villain, as are Snake and Jordan, Cunningham is an asshole but seems to be well-intentioned. I think I like them all, probably Peter and Cunningham a bit more than the rest.
2. The story and the characters (especially the versatile cast of villains)
3. Some of the parts could be a bit longer. The shorter parts are making the wait more difficult
4. Maybe we'll see the mysterious Limbo. Episode 2 is named "The Tomb" after all.
5. Absolutely!
The Shadow of November Part 2: The Tomb Chapter 1
I've been set up........................................... An old friend was murdered, I tried to go to the embassy and sort things out but some old rivals tried to get me, I was set up by the Snake..........They're on the inside and there's no one I can trust............
Phil Cunningham: This is where you'll spend the rest of your days Peterson, You've probably locked some people in here yourself, It's called by many names like the Limbo, the Tomb, the Gallows, Death Watch, or my favorite, Hell on earth, Hoe you enjoy it.
As Phil, Me and a few guards were walking by some of the cells I saw one with marker on it: SPARKER
Phil Cunningham: Oh, I see you've noticed the cell reserved for Sparker, He's just some fucked up clown but he's done some damage so he has to be put away, Who knows you might meet him! Try to loosen up I'm the agent in charge here so your "stay" can go the easy way or the hard way
Peter: Think I need a friend?
Phil Cunningham: Everyone needs friends eventually, Or at least you do, Remember, there's no law here, I can do whatever I want to you, when I want, You don't exist. Phil Cunningham walks away
I saw a bunch of different type of cells, And I recognized a few faces in there but I tried to ignore them.....
Peter: What now?
Guard: Bedtime Princess Puts bag over Peter's head
I woke up in a cell in the center of all the rest, It seemed like Bullet proof glass and Guard armed with AK-47s watching, This is gonna be tough to get out of.........I can see why this is the most secure prison in the world....I heard by Cell Door open.....
Guard: Lunch Time.
I followed the Guard to a cafeteria like area, Damn these guard are serious, They have a weapon pointed at every prisoner from above....
Prisoner: HEY HUNT!!!!!
Peter: Oh Hey Man, It's been a while
Prisoner: Fucking Fag!!!! Throws Punch
Peter: Dodges and returns a punch
Prisoner: Aw Shiat, You're fucking dead, Guards start Tazing them both
Peter: Nice one dumbass. Guard start dragging Prisoner away
Prisoner NOOOOOOOOO AHH NOOOOOOO
Another Prisoner: You okay?
Peter: Yeah, These guards don't joke around, do they?
Another Prisoner: Nope, they sure don't, What's your name?
Peter: My name's Peter, Yours?
Another Prisoner: Pines, Why are you locked away?
Peter: Does it matter?
Pines: I guess not.
Peter: What about you?
Pines: I'm not trying to be a pussy but the Government screwed me over, set me up, and then locked me away here.
Peter: Sounds Familiar.
Pines: Happens too often to too many Damn good people. I've been trying to break out but every chance just turns out to be a test from the big guys....
Peter: I think I could help you get out of here
Pines: I doubt it, But what do you want to do now?
Tell Pines your story OR Fist Pines
Tell me what you guys think!
Tell Pines your story
I wonder if Sparky makes a cameo in this story
We'll see