Yeah i created him. And Hypnos too. Joseph was taugh by his parents to value human life. Thats why he built him a cell and thats why he put … morehis men in jail and didn't kill them. Hes going against everything he and his parents ever believed in. Just consider that. But anyway i did my argument. Eitherway i respect your choice (changed or not). I just hope for the best.
@Lord_EEA Next one will be the last chapter- I'm trying to wrap SON up sooner than JP so I can finally start with DA2 stuff.
WARNING: GRA… morePHIC RECOLLECTION IN THIS CHAPTER THAT MIGHT BE UNEASY TO READ FOR SOME
Shadow of November: Part 5: Game Over Chapter 7
Joseph: Tell me the truth... you owe me that...
Hypnos: Owe? Ha, I don't owe you anything boy, consider it a miracle that when you were searching for me I didn't kill you then...but I wouldn't want you to die without knowing why I do what I do...
Joseph: Okay then, how could you possibly justify killing a boy's parents?
Hypnos: For the greater good of course...
Rambo cocks gun
Joseph: What greater good is that- Hypnotizing people to your personal gain? Killing people for fun? Making money?
Hypnos: Just like your father, you never saw the big picture- your parents researched the serum with me... Hypnos starts walking back and picks up a briefcase you se-
Joseph:… [view original content]
Personally, I would rather see him dead than imprisoned, mostly because there's the chance that he can escape. They already failed to lock Sparker up and I know, I'm going to regret that I spared him. Hypnos is at least as dangerous as Sparker and I doubt they will manage to permanently lock him up this time. However, sparing him is important for Lord and I got your back, bro
@Lord_EEA Next one will be the last chapter- I'm trying to wrap SON up sooner than JP so I can finally start with DA2 stuff.
WARNING: GRA… morePHIC RECOLLECTION IN THIS CHAPTER THAT MIGHT BE UNEASY TO READ FOR SOME
Shadow of November: Part 5: Game Over Chapter 7
Joseph: Tell me the truth... you owe me that...
Hypnos: Owe? Ha, I don't owe you anything boy, consider it a miracle that when you were searching for me I didn't kill you then...but I wouldn't want you to die without knowing why I do what I do...
Joseph: Okay then, how could you possibly justify killing a boy's parents?
Hypnos: For the greater good of course...
Rambo cocks gun
Joseph: What greater good is that- Hypnotizing people to your personal gain? Killing people for fun? Making money?
Hypnos: Just like your father, you never saw the big picture- your parents researched the serum with me... Hypnos starts walking back and picks up a briefcase you se-
Joseph:… [view original content]
First of all, your writing is great and you shouldn't doubt yourself. I love this story and your other stories as well. Strangely enough, compared to Lord, I am more hyped for JP than for the SON finale. I don't really know why, but I always enjoyed JP more, for some reason. Nonetheless, I'm looking forward for the SON finale as well and especially for Dark Angels 2
ATTENTION EVERYBODY: This is what happens when you don't write a part for 3 Months, SOOOOO sorry guys- I tried writing multiple times during… more that period but each time I doubted myself and would feel like my writing was shit... I hope this never happens again and I'm sorry- overall this and JP count as failures in my book not because of a bad plot, or bad characters, but because of terrible god damn timing and distribution- I let you guys down and guess what? Bye the time things get wrapped up, it will almost have been A YEAR, yes you read that right, 1 WHOLE YEAR since the start...After finishing this, JP, and Dark Angels 2- I'm doubtful I will do another fan fic and if I feel inclined in sharing a shorty I was thinking of, I'll probably make it short and put it here: My Short Story Thread- Feel Free to post a story of yours here!
Overall: I'm disappointed in myself for having this take so long- it's clear that any shred of anticipation f… [view original content]
First of all, your writing is great and you shouldn't doubt yourself. I love this story and your other stories as well. Strangely enough, co… morempared to Lord, I am more hyped for JP than for the SON finale. I don't really know why, but I always enjoyed JP more, for some reason. Nonetheless, I'm looking forward for the SON finale as well and especially for Dark Angels 2
Pull Hypnos up
Personally, I would rather see him dead than imprisoned, mostly because there's the chance that he can escape. They alread… morey failed to lock Sparker up and I know, I'm going to regret that I spared him. Hypnos is at least as dangerous as Sparker and I doubt they will manage to permanently lock him up this time. However, sparing him is important for Lord and I got your back, bro
@Lord_EEA Next one will be the last chapter- I'm trying to wrap SON up sooner than JP so I can finally start with DA2 stuff.
WARNING: GRA… morePHIC RECOLLECTION IN THIS CHAPTER THAT MIGHT BE UNEASY TO READ FOR SOME
Shadow of November: Part 5: Game Over Chapter 7
Joseph: Tell me the truth... you owe me that...
Hypnos: Owe? Ha, I don't owe you anything boy, consider it a miracle that when you were searching for me I didn't kill you then...but I wouldn't want you to die without knowing why I do what I do...
Joseph: Okay then, how could you possibly justify killing a boy's parents?
Hypnos: For the greater good of course...
Rambo cocks gun
Joseph: What greater good is that- Hypnotizing people to your personal gain? Killing people for fun? Making money?
Hypnos: Just like your father, you never saw the big picture- your parents researched the serum with me... Hypnos starts walking back and picks up a briefcase you se-
Joseph:… [view original content]
I was thinking about how I wouldn't be able to tell the difference between the red streaks on his jacket and his crushed body many floors down....but wait would that be what I want? Do I just want to kill him? Deaths his way out of this...
Hypnos: Do it, finish it.
Joseph: No...
Joseph pulls Hypnos up
Hypnos: What are you doing?
Joseph: I'm letting you rot...
Hypnos: No you can't....NOT THIS WAY
Hypnos grabs Joseph by the throat but Peter and Cunningham both start shooting at him causing him to drop Joseph and fall down
Hypnos: THOSE THINGS FUCKING HURT IDIOTS
Joseph: Good.... you're under arrest... Game Over
Hypnos angrily stares at Joseph, Peter, and Cunningham
Government Helicopters land on the roof
1 Hour Later
Cunningham: Well, this was a hell of a mess....
Joseph: Tell me about it... I just had to explain what happened to Don and...never mind...
Cunningham: You know, I've been notified that since Limbo is a empty shithole now, we're making a new secure facility- care to take position there?
Joseph: I'll think about it, might be nice for Hypnos to have a play-buddy once and a while, where did Peter go?
Cunningham: The general wants to speak with him, they drove him away already, you didn't see?
Joseph: No...
Cunningham: Well, he told me to tell you that he thinks you did the right thing with not dropping the bastard to his death but I would have done so
Joseph: Guess I'll have to talk to him in person later about it...
Car pulls up and Pines gets out
Pines: Woah, what happened here? And give me a reason not to fucking shoot you Points at Cunningham
Cunningham & Joseph: It's a long story...
Peter
A row of cars stops and Peter is escorted to a plane and enters, he then sees two men arguing
Jordan Wilkerson: How the hell did this happen!? Turns on TV to show Sparker charging an Elephant into a food stand First, that fucking psycho gets out of Limbo and now he can get away with THIS shit and just fucking vanishes!
General: I don't like it either but that doesn't change the fact that you yourself has a lot to answer for, you and your team were given a mission and you FUCKED up- you were supposed to bring a corrupt dictator in to interrogate, NOT TO KILL HIM General throws newspaper about Dictators death down- You and your former Spanish Forces friend put a few Bullets and a Machete through him and why? Because it was FUNNER!?
Jordan Wilkerson: Well it's a long st-
General: Shut the FUCK up and listen real good boy-
Peter: Am I interrupting something here?
General: Ah, Hunt- I'm General Whitlock, nice to meet you
Jordan sits down
Peter: Okay, why did you want to see me?
General Whitlock: Just wanted to debrief you on the situation...
Pines boards the plane
Pines: Well, well- the big bad hunter's in town...
Peter: Apparently you lived Pinetree, what happened to you?
Pines: A few ammeters came after me, I got that tracking thing out, and I've been shooting up some stuff since...Got to the building and all I saw were Cunningham, Joseph and a bunch of dead guys- then got one of the agency spooks to take me here...
General Whitlock: As I was saying, seems like the moles are dead, your friend Audrey is going to be fine-
Jordan: And that's what I'm gonna go check on, Jordan leaves after having a brief stare-down with Whitlock
General Whitlock: Hypnos is going to be under very close watch and his serum is under possession, your other friend Zayne is going to live but he might need to undergo some therapy, and you've been officially cleared of your friend Shannon's murder. Excellent job Hunt, seems like you cleaned house.
Peter: Well, I didn't do it alone
Pines: You're god damn right you didn't do it alone
Peter: Think I was talking to you?
Pines smiles
General Whitlock: Now listen, there's a bit of trouble going on with some operatives right now and I think you wouldn't be bad as a guy to help clean up their mess, you interested to get back in the game? You've already taken quite a step.
Peter: Funny, this went from telling me that everything's fine now to offering me a position back into the game filled with liars, killers, and fucking politicians who don't give a shit about the guys who burry their darkest secrets for them...some of the best people I've known died for ignorant fools like you- people who have the audacity to judge us based on field decisions, you don't know what it's like to be in the field and you don't have the guts to do anything yourself, just like Jordan right there, you're judging him based on an action that only allowed mili-seconds of thinking time...I'm retired and I've given my country almost everything, enjoy hell shitbreath Peter walks out as Whitlock starts to talk to Pines
Peter: The nerve of some people....
a few months later
In a lighten cabin
Peter: What a year: friend died, I was framed and put in a secret facility for a few months, broke out and teamed up with some people to kill some baddies.. I'm getting too old for this shit...
Joseph: well, I've taken a position at the new facility thing, I doubt Hypnos will get out
Peter: Why so certain?
Joseph: Well, let's just say he wouldn't physically be able to survive if he escaped...
Peter: interesting....
Joseph: yup, you interested in joining me?
Peter: Not again..
Joseph: Can you blame me for trying? You're one of the best...
Peter: I guess not...Did I tell you that I'm going on a vacation?
Joseph: No, where to?
Peter: Bermuda
Joseph: Nice, when do you leave?
Peter: Tomorrow
Joseph: Think you can stay out of trouble this time? Joseph gets up
Peter: You never know what can happen Peter packs a gun and smiles
The Shadow of November
Thank you so much for reading this everybody, I can't wait to start on DA2 after finishing JP, and again- Thank you so much and sorry that this took about a YEAR to finish, I hope you guys liked this as a reader but as a author- I think no one else has dropped the ball on a fanfic more than I have with this because of that timing but hope you enjoyed
I liked Peter and Joseph and I liked Pines even though he dropped out of the story for a while. However, I am glad he got to come back at the end.
Who was your least favorite character?
I despised Hypnos.
What was your favorite Part (aka episode)?
I don't know, really. Maybe The Tomb.
Name something you liked about this story (for future references)
This doesn't necessarily have much to do with SON, but in Dark Angels, I liked the whole team-dealio. (If DA2 returns to that whole vibe, I would love to see things like callsigns and military tactics in it.) But in SON, I did really like secret prison complex, the character dynamics, and the spy/action movie-esque fights and scenarios.
Name something you disliked about this story (for future references)
My only gripe would have to be that, in parts, it feels like it moves too fast or without a transition. That's really it. The stories are great and I'm looking forward to JP conclusion and the start of DARK ANGELS 2!
Who was your favorite character?
Who was your least favorite character?
What was your favorite Part (aka episode)?
Name something y… moreou liked about this story (for future references)
Name something you disliked about this story (for future references)
Last Chapter for this!
Shadow of November: Part 5: Game Over Chapter 8
Joseph
Joseph stares at Hypnos and starts thinking
Hypnos… more: For Mommy? or for Daddy? Hypnos smiles
Joseph: No, for me...
Joseph drops Hypnos
I was thinking about how I wouldn't be able to tell the difference between the red streaks on his jacket and his crushed body many floors down....but wait would that be what I want? Do I just want to kill him? Deaths his way out of this...
Hypnos: Do it, finish it.
Joseph: No...
Joseph pulls Hypnos up
Hypnos: What are you doing?
Joseph: I'm letting you rot...
Hypnos: No you can't....NOT THIS WAY
Hypnos grabs Joseph by the throat but Peter and Cunningham both start shooting at him causing him to drop Joseph and fall down
Hypnos: THOSE THINGS FUCKING HURT IDIOTS
Joseph: Good.... you're under arrest... Game Over
Hypnos angrily stares at Joseph, Peter, and Cunningham
Government Helicopt… [view original content]
Last Chapter for this!
Shadow of November: Part 5: Game Over Chapter 8
Joseph
Joseph stares at Hypnos and starts thinking
Hypnos… more: For Mommy? or for Daddy? Hypnos smiles
Joseph: No, for me...
Joseph drops Hypnos
I was thinking about how I wouldn't be able to tell the difference between the red streaks on his jacket and his crushed body many floors down....but wait would that be what I want? Do I just want to kill him? Deaths his way out of this...
Hypnos: Do it, finish it.
Joseph: No...
Joseph pulls Hypnos up
Hypnos: What are you doing?
Joseph: I'm letting you rot...
Hypnos: No you can't....NOT THIS WAY
Hypnos grabs Joseph by the throat but Peter and Cunningham both start shooting at him causing him to drop Joseph and fall down
Hypnos: THOSE THINGS FUCKING HURT IDIOTS
Joseph: Good.... you're under arrest... Game Over
Hypnos angrily stares at Joseph, Peter, and Cunningham
Government Helicopt… [view original content]
Who was your favorite character?
I liked Peter and Joseph and I liked Pines even though he dropped out of the story for a while. However,… more I am glad he got to come back at the end.
Who was your least favorite character?
I despised Hypnos.
What was your favorite Part (aka episode)?
I don't know, really. Maybe The Tomb.
Name something you liked about this story (for future references)
This doesn't necessarily have much to do with SON, but in Dark Angels, I liked the whole team-dealio. (If DA2 returns to that whole vibe, I would love to see things like callsigns and military tactics in it.) But in SON, I did really like secret prison complex, the character dynamics, and the spy/action movie-esque fights and scenarios.
Name something you disliked about this story (for future references)
My only gripe would have to be that, in parts, it feels like it moves too fast or without a transition. That's really it. The stories are great and I'm looking forward to JP conclusion and the start of DARK ANGELS 2!
I greatly enjoyed Audrey. She was already among my favourites in Dark Angels and it was great to see her back. Her inclusion greatly helped in putting the story closer to Dark Angels. Out of the new characters, Joseph is probably my favourite and the one I felt had the deepest characterization. Also, I liked Cunningham for reasons that are bias
Who was your least favorite character?
As Hope said, Hypnos is a truly despicable villain. I generally do not like villains, but I deeply hated Hypnos. That said, he had some wicked style.
What was your favorite Part (aka episode)?
The Tomb was the episode that made the biggest impression on me. I love the general idea of this max-security prison the heroes have to escape from. However, my favourite part by far was the Valentine's Day special with Sparker and Snake, also known as Snaker, where they adopt two elephants and ride into the sunset. It was just beautiful :')
Name something you liked about this story (for future references)
The general setting and the genre of the story are probably what I enjoy the most. Your writing is awesome, especially as this whole story felt like a huge enjoyable action-movie. While Dark Angels gave me an Expendables-vibe with focus on a big team of (almost) equally important characters, I enjoyed the more spy-movie-like style of SON with a big focus on Peter. All in all, the whole story was great and I can't wait for the finale of JP and for DA2
Name something you disliked about this story (for future references)
Well, obviously the waiting times weren't ideal. In fact, I had to reread several parts to get into the story again, so that I was able to appropriately appreciate the finale. That of course is not necessarily a bad thing, but it did not help when it came to build up attachement to some of the characters. For example, I had a serious problem in telling Zayne and Wayne apart from each other, which I think was a direct consequence of the long wait between some of the parts.
Who was your favorite character?
Who was your least favorite character?
What was your favorite Part (aka episode)?
Name something y… moreou liked about this story (for future references)
Name something you disliked about this story (for future references)
Who was your favorite character?
I greatly enjoyed Audrey. She was already among my favourites in Dark Angels and it was great to see her… more back. Her inclusion greatly helped in putting the story closer to Dark Angels. Out of the new characters, Joseph is probably my favourite and the one I felt had the deepest characterization. Also, I liked Cunningham for reasons that are bias
Who was your least favorite character?
As Hope said, Hypnos is a truly despicable villain. I generally do not like villains, but I deeply hated Hypnos. That said, he had some wicked style.
What was your favorite Part (aka episode)?
The Tomb was the episode that made the biggest impression on me. I love the general idea of this max-security prison the heroes have to escape from. However, my favourite part by far was the Valentine's Day special with Sparker and Snake, also known as Snaker, where they adopt two elephants and ride into the sunset. It was jus… [view original content]
You are a shipper aren't you? Well anyway glad to see you you're awesome. I'm excited to see Audrey in DA2 . It's sad she's not bi though i feel bad for Joseph.
Yeah, Audrey's... I can't imagine Audrey with anyone else but Charity... but then again, I'm her creator so my imagination is different than other people's.
You are a shipper aren't you? Well anyway glad to see you you're awesome. I'm excited to see Audrey in DA2 . It's sad she's not bi though i feel bad for Joseph.
I'm a huge Rhyiona nerd.
Yeah, Audrey's... I can't imagine Audrey with anyone else but Charity... but then again, I'm her creator so my imagination is different than other people's.
Comments
Crap... I-- I've been convinced
I'm changing my vote to [Pull him up]
Thank you
Wait..........D: ?
Do you feel bad about switching?
Pull Hypnos Up Great Chapter!
I have and it was awesome.
It was
. I love the ending.
No Zackbro. Why?
Actually on second thought...
Yes.
And I changed my vote.
My only gripe: I'm worried he might escape confinement. That's about it, really.
Well at least he won't escape any time soon. If he ever does.
Pull Hypnos up
Personally, I would rather see him dead than imprisoned, mostly because there's the chance that he can escape. They already failed to lock Sparker up and I know, I'm going to regret that I spared him. Hypnos is at least as dangerous as Sparker and I doubt they will manage to permanently lock him up this time. However, sparing him is important for Lord and I got your back, bro
First of all, your writing is great and you shouldn't doubt yourself. I love this story and your other stories as well. Strangely enough, compared to Lord, I am more hyped for JP than for the SON finale. I don't really know why, but I always enjoyed JP more, for some reason. Nonetheless, I'm looking forward for the SON finale as well and especially for Dark Angels 2
I just haven't read JP recently. But i do love it
Thanks bro
. One day i MIGHT return the favor 
Pull Hypnos up
Wow i did not expect you to vote that. Thought thanks bro
Thank you all for helping me with the vote. If you guys ever need my help ill be there
Last Chapter for this!
Shadow of November: Part 5: Game Over Chapter 8
Joseph
Joseph stares at Hypnos and starts thinking
Hypnos: For Mommy? or for Daddy? Hypnos smiles
Joseph: No, for me...
Joseph drops Hypnos
I was thinking about how I wouldn't be able to tell the difference between the red streaks on his jacket and his crushed body many floors down....but wait would that be what I want? Do I just want to kill him? Deaths his way out of this...
Hypnos: Do it, finish it.
Joseph: No...
Joseph pulls Hypnos up
Hypnos: What are you doing?
Joseph: I'm letting you rot...
Hypnos: No you can't....NOT THIS WAY
Hypnos grabs Joseph by the throat but Peter and Cunningham both start shooting at him causing him to drop Joseph and fall down
Hypnos: THOSE THINGS FUCKING HURT IDIOTS
Joseph: Good.... you're under arrest... Game Over
Hypnos angrily stares at Joseph, Peter, and Cunningham
Government Helicopters land on the roof
1 Hour Later
Cunningham: Well, this was a hell of a mess....
Joseph: Tell me about it... I just had to explain what happened to Don and...never mind...
Cunningham: You know, I've been notified that since Limbo is a empty shithole now, we're making a new secure facility- care to take position there?
Joseph: I'll think about it, might be nice for Hypnos to have a play-buddy once and a while, where did Peter go?
Cunningham: The general wants to speak with him, they drove him away already, you didn't see?
Joseph: No...
Cunningham: Well, he told me to tell you that he thinks you did the right thing with not dropping the bastard to his death but I would have done so
Joseph: Guess I'll have to talk to him in person later about it...
Car pulls up and Pines gets out
Pines: Woah, what happened here? And give me a reason not to fucking shoot you Points at Cunningham
Cunningham & Joseph: It's a long story...
Peter
A row of cars stops and Peter is escorted to a plane and enters, he then sees two men arguing
Jordan Wilkerson: How the hell did this happen!? Turns on TV to show Sparker charging an Elephant into a food stand First, that fucking psycho gets out of Limbo and now he can get away with THIS shit and just fucking vanishes!
General: I don't like it either but that doesn't change the fact that you yourself has a lot to answer for, you and your team were given a mission and you FUCKED up- you were supposed to bring a corrupt dictator in to interrogate, NOT TO KILL HIM General throws newspaper about Dictators death down- You and your former Spanish Forces friend put a few Bullets and a Machete through him and why? Because it was FUNNER!?
Jordan Wilkerson: Well it's a long st-
General: Shut the FUCK up and listen real good boy-
Peter: Am I interrupting something here?
General: Ah, Hunt- I'm General Whitlock, nice to meet you
Jordan sits down
Peter: Okay, why did you want to see me?
General Whitlock: Just wanted to debrief you on the situation...
Pines boards the plane
Pines: Well, well- the big bad hunter's in town...
Peter: Apparently you lived Pinetree, what happened to you?
Pines: A few ammeters came after me, I got that tracking thing out, and I've been shooting up some stuff since...Got to the building and all I saw were Cunningham, Joseph and a bunch of dead guys- then got one of the agency spooks to take me here...
General Whitlock: As I was saying, seems like the moles are dead, your friend Audrey is going to be fine-
Jordan: And that's what I'm gonna go check on, Jordan leaves after having a brief stare-down with Whitlock
General Whitlock: Hypnos is going to be under very close watch and his serum is under possession, your other friend Zayne is going to live but he might need to undergo some therapy, and you've been officially cleared of your friend Shannon's murder. Excellent job Hunt, seems like you cleaned house.
Peter: Well, I didn't do it alone
Pines: You're god damn right you didn't do it alone
Peter: Think I was talking to you?
Pines smiles
General Whitlock: Now listen, there's a bit of trouble going on with some operatives right now and I think you wouldn't be bad as a guy to help clean up their mess, you interested to get back in the game? You've already taken quite a step.
Peter: Funny, this went from telling me that everything's fine now to offering me a position back into the game filled with liars, killers, and fucking politicians who don't give a shit about the guys who burry their darkest secrets for them...some of the best people I've known died for ignorant fools like you- people who have the audacity to judge us based on field decisions, you don't know what it's like to be in the field and you don't have the guts to do anything yourself, just like Jordan right there, you're judging him based on an action that only allowed mili-seconds of thinking time...I'm retired and I've given my country almost everything, enjoy hell shitbreath Peter walks out as Whitlock starts to talk to Pines
Peter: The nerve of some people....
a few months later
In a lighten cabin
Peter: What a year: friend died, I was framed and put in a secret facility for a few months, broke out and teamed up with some people to kill some baddies.. I'm getting too old for this shit...
Joseph: well, I've taken a position at the new facility thing, I doubt Hypnos will get out
Peter: Why so certain?
Joseph: Well, let's just say he wouldn't physically be able to survive if he escaped...
Peter: interesting....
Joseph: yup, you interested in joining me?
Peter: Not again..
Joseph: Can you blame me for trying? You're one of the best...
Peter: I guess not...Did I tell you that I'm going on a vacation?
Joseph: No, where to?
Peter: Bermuda
Joseph: Nice, when do you leave?
Peter: Tomorrow
Joseph: Think you can stay out of trouble this time? Joseph gets up
Peter: You never know what can happen Peter packs a gun and smiles
The Shadow of November
Thank you so much for reading this everybody, I can't wait to start on DA2 after finishing JP, and again- Thank you so much and sorry that this took about a YEAR to finish, I hope you guys liked this as a reader but as a author- I think no one else has dropped the ball on a fanfic more than I have with this because of that timing but hope you enjoyed
Who was your favorite character?
Who was your least favorite character?
What was your favorite Part (aka episode)?
Name something you liked about this story (for future references)
Name something you disliked about this story (for future references)
Who was your favorite character?
I liked Peter and Joseph and I liked Pines even though he dropped out of the story for a while. However, I am glad he got to come back at the end.
Who was your least favorite character?
I despised Hypnos.
What was your favorite Part (aka episode)?
I don't know, really. Maybe The Tomb.
Name something you liked about this story (for future references)
This doesn't necessarily have much to do with SON, but in Dark Angels, I liked the whole team-dealio. (If DA2 returns to that whole vibe, I would love to see things like callsigns and military tactics in it.) But in SON, I did really like secret prison complex, the character dynamics, and the spy/action movie-esque fights and scenarios.
Name something you disliked about this story (for future references)
My only gripe would have to be that, in parts, it feels like it moves too fast or without a transition. That's really it. The stories are great and I'm looking forward to JP conclusion and the start of DARK ANGELS 2!
Awesome. This was a fantastic story. Great job salt
Amazing Story. Great job
.
I agree with everything said here.
Who was your favorite character?
I greatly enjoyed Audrey. She was already among my favourites in Dark Angels and it was great to see her back. Her inclusion greatly helped in putting the story closer to Dark Angels. Out of the new characters, Joseph is probably my favourite and the one I felt had the deepest characterization. Also, I liked Cunningham for reasons that are bias
Who was your least favorite character?
As Hope said, Hypnos is a truly despicable villain. I generally do not like villains, but I deeply hated Hypnos. That said, he had some wicked style.
What was your favorite Part (aka episode)?
The Tomb was the episode that made the biggest impression on me. I love the general idea of this max-security prison the heroes have to escape from. However, my favourite part by far was the Valentine's Day special with Sparker and Snake, also known as Snaker, where they adopt two elephants and ride into the sunset. It was just beautiful :')
Name something you liked about this story (for future references)
The general setting and the genre of the story are probably what I enjoy the most. Your writing is awesome, especially as this whole story felt like a huge enjoyable action-movie. While Dark Angels gave me an Expendables-vibe with focus on a big team of (almost) equally important characters, I enjoyed the more spy-movie-like style of SON with a big focus on Peter. All in all, the whole story was great and I can't wait for the finale of JP and for DA2
Name something you disliked about this story (for future references)
Well, obviously the waiting times weren't ideal. In fact, I had to reread several parts to get into the story again, so that I was able to appropriately appreciate the finale. That of course is not necessarily a bad thing, but it did not help when it came to build up attachement to some of the characters. For example, I had a serious problem in telling Zayne and Wayne apart from each other, which I think was a direct consequence of the long wait between some of the parts.
HELLO!!!!! it's been so long :"D
I'm glad to see you again
Btw i never asked you how do you feel about Zach in Multiverse Prime. I hope i did him justice. If i didn't.....any pointers?
HEYY!!! Nice to see you all too!
I've mostly been in the Tales from the Borderlands section, sorry. ;_;
You are a shipper aren't you? Well anyway glad to see you you're awesome. I'm excited to see Audrey in DA2 . It's sad she's not bi though i feel bad for Joseph.
I'm a huge Rhyiona nerd.
Yeah, Audrey's... I can't imagine Audrey with anyone else but Charity... but then again, I'm her creator so my imagination is different than other people's.
Yeah i guess so
I think you handled his character well. Everyone hates him, so you know you did it right!
Wait was he supposed to be hated or are you being sarcastic?
He's supposed to be hated, yes.
Oh cool. I thought it was just a side effecr