The Shadow of November Part 2: The Tomb Chapter 1
I've been set up........................................... An old friend was murdered,… more I tried to go to the embassy and sort things out but some old rivals tried to get me, I was set up by the Snake..........They're on the inside and there's no one I can trust............
Phil Cunningham: This is where you'll spend the rest of your days Peterson, You've probably locked some people in here yourself, It's called by many names like the Limbo, the Tomb, the Gallows, Death Watch, or my favorite, Hell on earth, Hoe you enjoy it.
As Phil, Me and a few guards were walking by some of the cells I saw one with marker on it: SPARKER
Phil Cunningham: Oh, I see you've noticed the cell reserved for Sparker, He's just some fucked up clown but he's done some damage so he has to be put away, Who knows you might meet him! Try to loosen up I'm the agent in charge here so your "stay" can go the easy … [view original content]
Well, we only had the first chapter so far, but I like it. Limbo is a really interesting place (that somehow reminds me of Impel Down from One Piece) and I'm excited for the various criminals imprisoned there. I think it's going to be a great part!
The Shadow of November Part 2: The Tomb Chapter 1
I've been set up........................................... An old friend was murdered,… more I tried to go to the embassy and sort things out but some old rivals tried to get me, I was set up by the Snake..........They're on the inside and there's no one I can trust............
Phil Cunningham: This is where you'll spend the rest of your days Peterson, You've probably locked some people in here yourself, It's called by many names like the Limbo, the Tomb, the Gallows, Death Watch, or my favorite, Hell on earth, Hoe you enjoy it.
As Phil, Me and a few guards were walking by some of the cells I saw one with marker on it: SPARKER
Phil Cunningham: Oh, I see you've noticed the cell reserved for Sparker, He's just some fucked up clown but he's done some damage so he has to be put away, Who knows you might meet him! Try to loosen up I'm the agent in charge here so your "stay" can go the easy … [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 2: The Tomb Chapter 1
I've been set up........................................... An old friend was murdered,… more I tried to go to the embassy and sort things out but some old rivals tried to get me, I was set up by the Snake..........They're on the inside and there's no one I can trust............
Phil Cunningham: This is where you'll spend the rest of your days Peterson, You've probably locked some people in here yourself, It's called by many names like the Limbo, the Tomb, the Gallows, Death Watch, or my favorite, Hell on earth, Hoe you enjoy it.
As Phil, Me and a few guards were walking by some of the cells I saw one with marker on it: SPARKER
Phil Cunningham: Oh, I see you've noticed the cell reserved for Sparker, He's just some fucked up clown but he's done some damage so he has to be put away, Who knows you might meet him! Try to loosen up I'm the agent in charge here so your "stay" can go the easy … [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 2: The Tomb Chapter 1
I've been set up........................................... An old friend was murdered,… more I tried to go to the embassy and sort things out but some old rivals tried to get me, I was set up by the Snake..........They're on the inside and there's no one I can trust............
Phil Cunningham: This is where you'll spend the rest of your days Peterson, You've probably locked some people in here yourself, It's called by many names like the Limbo, the Tomb, the Gallows, Death Watch, or my favorite, Hell on earth, Hoe you enjoy it.
As Phil, Me and a few guards were walking by some of the cells I saw one with marker on it: SPARKER
Phil Cunningham: Oh, I see you've noticed the cell reserved for Sparker, He's just some fucked up clown but he's done some damage so he has to be put away, Who knows you might meet him! Try to loosen up I'm the agent in charge here so your "stay" can go the easy … [view original content]
Peter: Well instead of telling you my story, I was thinking of punching you in the face and starting a fake fight so Cunningham would have a "talk" with me and I could get some info but I decided to play it nice, Want to do that still?
Pines: Nah, You don't want to know what happens if you start a fight..... I've done that
Peter: Okay then, If we're gonna get outta here, We need to figure out where this place is....
Pines: I could bet my dick that we're either under water in the Bermuda Triangle area or in Area 51
Peter: Don't bet your dick.......................................... That's just....I'm not even gonna go there........ And I know the Bermuda Triangle is a myth, And I've been to Area 51, That's stuff you don't wanna know about.....
Pines: Then how do you wanna tell where we are?
Peter: Let me look around this place more.....
Guard: Hey Hunt, Cunningham wants you to come with us to his office......
Peter: Sure.....
Pines: Hope you get lucky Bro!
Peter shakes his head
Guard: I said move!
Peter walks with the guards and then into Cunningham's office
Phil Cunningham: Feeling comfortable yet?
Peter: Not really.
Phil Cunningham: Good....... Suppose you've met Agent Jordan Smith
Peter: One way or another..... But he's not who you think he is...
Jordan Smith: Shut the hell up you lying faggot.....
Phil Cunningham:Walk out Jordan..... Jordan walks out I know my personnel, You on the other hand have been up to no good....
Peter: I told you I was framed.....
Phil Cunningham: We know you killed your "old friend" Shannon Clare....
Peter: I was framed.....
Phil Cunningham: By who then?
Peter: The Snake....
Phil Cunningham: The Snake!? Ha! he's not even real, Just a legend made up to scare us back at the academy, You'll have to do better than that Mr. Hunt....
Peter: ...
Phil Cunningham:Listen, It's not your dead friend who I care about, I care about what you're planning with that serum? And how were you planning to spread it?
Peter: What Serum?
Phil Cunningham: Don't act like you don't known what I'm talking about shitbird....... Usually I'm not as nice as this but I'm willing to make a deal if you fucking cooperate, I don't give a shit about you, I just need to know what the hell you were planning.
Peter: I don't know shit..... So keep your pants on son...
Phil Cunningham: Well you're gonna be locked away here forever!
Peter: [Sorry, I'll help you in any way I can] OR [Let me go or else I will burn this place to the ground and kill you, No matter what it takes]
The Shadow of November Part 2: The Tomb Chapter 2
Pines: So that's who you were before this?
Peter: Yep, And now I'm stuck here with y… moreou.....
Pines: Could be worse.
Peter: True.
Pines: What now?
Peter: Well instead of telling you my story, I was thinking of punching you in the face and starting a fake fight so Cunningham would have a "talk" with me and I could get some info but I decided to play it nice, Want to do that still?
Pines: Nah, You don't want to know what happens if you start a fight..... I've done that
Peter: Okay then, If we're gonna get outta here, We need to figure out where this place is....
Pines: I could bet my dick that we're either under water in the Bermuda Triangle area or in Area 51
Peter: Don't bet your dick.......................................... That's just....I'm not even gonna go there........ And I know the Bermuda Triangle is a myth, And I've been to Area 51, That's stuff you don't… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 2: The Tomb Chapter 2
Pines: So that's who you were before this?
Peter: Yep, And now I'm stuck here with y… moreou.....
Pines: Could be worse.
Peter: True.
Pines: What now?
Peter: Well instead of telling you my story, I was thinking of punching you in the face and starting a fake fight so Cunningham would have a "talk" with me and I could get some info but I decided to play it nice, Want to do that still?
Pines: Nah, You don't want to know what happens if you start a fight..... I've done that
Peter: Okay then, If we're gonna get outta here, We need to figure out where this place is....
Pines: I could bet my dick that we're either under water in the Bermuda Triangle area or in Area 51
Peter: Don't bet your dick.......................................... That's just....I'm not even gonna go there........ And I know the Bermuda Triangle is a myth, And I've been to Area 51, That's stuff you don't… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 2: The Tomb Chapter 2
Pines: So that's who you were before this?
Peter: Yep, And now I'm stuck here with y… moreou.....
Pines: Could be worse.
Peter: True.
Pines: What now?
Peter: Well instead of telling you my story, I was thinking of punching you in the face and starting a fake fight so Cunningham would have a "talk" with me and I could get some info but I decided to play it nice, Want to do that still?
Pines: Nah, You don't want to know what happens if you start a fight..... I've done that
Peter: Okay then, If we're gonna get outta here, We need to figure out where this place is....
Pines: I could bet my dick that we're either under water in the Bermuda Triangle area or in Area 51
Peter: Don't bet your dick.......................................... That's just....I'm not even gonna go there........ And I know the Bermuda Triangle is a myth, And I've been to Area 51, That's stuff you don't… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 2: The Tomb Chapter 2
Pines: So that's who you were before this?
Peter: Yep, And now I'm stuck here with y… moreou.....
Pines: Could be worse.
Peter: True.
Pines: What now?
Peter: Well instead of telling you my story, I was thinking of punching you in the face and starting a fake fight so Cunningham would have a "talk" with me and I could get some info but I decided to play it nice, Want to do that still?
Pines: Nah, You don't want to know what happens if you start a fight..... I've done that
Peter: Okay then, If we're gonna get outta here, We need to figure out where this place is....
Pines: I could bet my dick that we're either under water in the Bermuda Triangle area or in Area 51
Peter: Don't bet your dick.......................................... That's just....I'm not even gonna go there........ And I know the Bermuda Triangle is a myth, And I've been to Area 51, That's stuff you don't… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 2: The Tomb Chapter 2
Pines: So that's who you were before this?
Peter: Yep, And now I'm stuck here with y… moreou.....
Pines: Could be worse.
Peter: True.
Pines: What now?
Peter: Well instead of telling you my story, I was thinking of punching you in the face and starting a fake fight so Cunningham would have a "talk" with me and I could get some info but I decided to play it nice, Want to do that still?
Pines: Nah, You don't want to know what happens if you start a fight..... I've done that
Peter: Okay then, If we're gonna get outta here, We need to figure out where this place is....
Pines: I could bet my dick that we're either under water in the Bermuda Triangle area or in Area 51
Peter: Don't bet your dick.......................................... That's just....I'm not even gonna go there........ And I know the Bermuda Triangle is a myth, And I've been to Area 51, That's stuff you don't… [view original content]
I'll probably release another chapter for this after I finish the last Dark Angels chapter so we can possibly get some good cameos
And http://www.strawpoll.me/3270178
Voice: Think you're tough big guy!? Bring it biatch, You fucking Cunt we both know I'll get out of here in no time.....
Peter: Might want too chill out I saw them escort him in a cell labeled SPARKER
Sparker: You can let me go now or when I do get out, Say goodbye to your balls............. Sure let the sheep run the pen! See how far that gets you Urban! Sparker looks around his cell This could take a while.......
Peter: Fricking Clown....
4 Months Later
Pines: Shit, all out attempts haven't worked.....
Peter: I know....
Pines: Think of anything else?
Peter: No.....
Pines: Dammit Man! You have to keep your head in the game!
Peter: ...
Guard: You're going back to your cell now, Cunningham wants to speak to you.
Peter walks into his Bullet Proof Glass Dome like cell
Peter: Yes Cunningham?
Phil Cunningham: Don't talk shit to me like that..... You know what you did, You tried to stall but tell me what you did with that "Serum" of yours.
Peter: I've told you a thousand times..... I don't know. Cunningham walks out
Phil Cunningham: Smith! I tried to avoid this but he isn't cooperating, It's time to beat the truth out of him, Have Fun
Jordan Smith: My Pleasure Sir Walks into Cell
Peter: How did you get by Cunningham's Radar? You know being a drugs dealer and somehow making it look like you're an agent on his side,
Jordan Smith: I would say that's the least of you problem Punches Peter The fun thing is if you fight back Hit Peter with the butt of his gun I can kill ya..... Jordan starts beating Peter
1 Day Later
Pines: What happened?
Peter: Does it matter?
Pines: Ah, the Big Place, They put you there for a day
Peter: After getting the shit knocked out of me, yeah.
Pines: Don't let them break you, We have to get out of here
Voice: Good Day or Night....Ladies and Gentlemen.....
Pines: Who are you?
Voice: My name is Sparker..... And we can get out of here if we work together.....
Peter: We've tried everything.... We're gonna stay here for the rest of our lives....
Pines: Dammit Man! Don't Talk like that!
Peter: It's the truth....
Sparker: It ain't if ya pussies help me out
Guard: Pines, Cunningham wants you.
Pines: Oh Shit...... Whispers to Jordan Not sure if we should trust this guy, Listen to him more and you can decide
Peter: Yep, You stay safe too
Sparker: Was that about me Faggot?
Peter: No, It was about my cousin, him and Pines were good friends
Sparker: Help me get out, I really want to get payback on some assholes who locked me in here.
Peter: Odds are we're gonna die in here, Wait a sec, Jordan Wilkerson mentioned you....
Sparker: Yeah, He's a good guy, It's not about him.....
Peter: What if I don't want to help you?
Sparker: Then I'll go to Cunningham and make up something, I bet he trusts me more than you, Your Choice Brownie HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA
The Shadow of November Part 2: The Tomb Chapter 3
Peter: Sorry, I'll help you in any way I can
Cunningham: You better or else.........… more
Peter is escorted out
Voice: Think you're tough big guy!? Bring it biatch, You fucking Cunt we both know I'll get out of here in no time.....
Peter: Might want too chill out I saw them escort him in a cell labeled SPARKER
Sparker: You can let me go now or when I do get out, Say goodbye to your balls............. Sure let the sheep run the pen! See how far that gets you Urban! Sparker looks around his cell This could take a while.......
Peter: Fricking Clown....
4 Months Later
Pines: Shit, all out attempts haven't worked.....
Peter: I know....
Pines: Think of anything else?
Peter: No.....
Pines: Dammit Man! You have to keep your head in the game!
Peter: ...
Guard: You're going back to your cell now, Cunningham wants to speak to you.
Peter walks into his Bullet Pro… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 2: The Tomb Chapter 3
Peter: Sorry, I'll help you in any way I can
Cunningham: You better or else.........… more
Peter is escorted out
Voice: Think you're tough big guy!? Bring it biatch, You fucking Cunt we both know I'll get out of here in no time.....
Peter: Might want too chill out I saw them escort him in a cell labeled SPARKER
Sparker: You can let me go now or when I do get out, Say goodbye to your balls............. Sure let the sheep run the pen! See how far that gets you Urban! Sparker looks around his cell This could take a while.......
Peter: Fricking Clown....
4 Months Later
Pines: Shit, all out attempts haven't worked.....
Peter: I know....
Pines: Think of anything else?
Peter: No.....
Pines: Dammit Man! You have to keep your head in the game!
Peter: ...
Guard: You're going back to your cell now, Cunningham wants to speak to you.
Peter walks into his Bullet Pro… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 2: The Tomb Chapter 3
Peter: Sorry, I'll help you in any way I can
Cunningham: You better or else.........… more
Peter is escorted out
Voice: Think you're tough big guy!? Bring it biatch, You fucking Cunt we both know I'll get out of here in no time.....
Peter: Might want too chill out I saw them escort him in a cell labeled SPARKER
Sparker: You can let me go now or when I do get out, Say goodbye to your balls............. Sure let the sheep run the pen! See how far that gets you Urban! Sparker looks around his cell This could take a while.......
Peter: Fricking Clown....
4 Months Later
Pines: Shit, all out attempts haven't worked.....
Peter: I know....
Pines: Think of anything else?
Peter: No.....
Pines: Dammit Man! You have to keep your head in the game!
Peter: ...
Guard: You're going back to your cell now, Cunningham wants to speak to you.
Peter walks into his Bullet Pro… [view original content]
The Shadow of November Part 2: The Tomb Chapter 3
Peter: Sorry, I'll help you in any way I can
Cunningham: You better or else.........… more
Peter is escorted out
Voice: Think you're tough big guy!? Bring it biatch, You fucking Cunt we both know I'll get out of here in no time.....
Peter: Might want too chill out I saw them escort him in a cell labeled SPARKER
Sparker: You can let me go now or when I do get out, Say goodbye to your balls............. Sure let the sheep run the pen! See how far that gets you Urban! Sparker looks around his cell This could take a while.......
Peter: Fricking Clown....
4 Months Later
Pines: Shit, all out attempts haven't worked.....
Peter: I know....
Pines: Think of anything else?
Peter: No.....
Pines: Dammit Man! You have to keep your head in the game!
Peter: ...
Guard: You're going back to your cell now, Cunningham wants to speak to you.
Peter walks into his Bullet Pro… [view original content]
Comments
Tell Pines your story - The other option, what... o.O
Pines is in now
I know that, but...You know what...Never mind... o.O
The other option, Let's just say it resembles something in TWAU but it would have a purpose
...
It also means something else XD
Yes but it has a purpose xD It's not too bad...
Okay... XD
So What do you guys think about Part 2: The Tomb so far?
It's only one chapter in, but it's looking great!
I'm glad Pines has entered the story
We'll see if Pines Bites the dust soon
Don't mock me :<
...
Spare him, please
Well, we only had the first chapter so far, but I like it. Limbo is a really interesting place (that somehow reminds me of Impel Down from One Piece) and I'm excited for the various criminals imprisoned there. I think it's going to be a great part!
Tell Pines yout story Awesome Chapter!!!!
It´s awesome!!!
Tell Pines your story
Excellent chapter!
Pines
Tell Pines your story
The Shadow of November Part 2: The Tomb Chapter 2
Pines: So that's who you were before this?
Peter: Yep, And now I'm stuck here with you.....
Pines: Could be worse.
Peter: True.
Pines: What now?
Peter: Well instead of telling you my story, I was thinking of punching you in the face and starting a fake fight so Cunningham would have a "talk" with me and I could get some info but I decided to play it nice, Want to do that still?
Pines: Nah, You don't want to know what happens if you start a fight..... I've done that
Peter: Okay then, If we're gonna get outta here, We need to figure out where this place is....
Pines: I could bet my dick that we're either under water in the Bermuda Triangle area or in Area 51
Peter: Don't bet your dick.......................................... That's just....I'm not even gonna go there........ And I know the Bermuda Triangle is a myth, And I've been to Area 51, That's stuff you don't wanna know about.....
Pines: Then how do you wanna tell where we are?
Peter: Let me look around this place more.....
Guard: Hey Hunt, Cunningham wants you to come with us to his office......
Peter: Sure.....
Pines: Hope you get lucky Bro!
Peter shakes his head
Guard: I said move!
Peter walks with the guards and then into Cunningham's office
Phil Cunningham: Feeling comfortable yet?
Peter: Not really.
Phil Cunningham: Good....... Suppose you've met Agent Jordan Smith
Peter: One way or another..... But he's not who you think he is...
Jordan Smith: Shut the hell up you lying faggot.....
Phil Cunningham:Walk out Jordan..... Jordan walks out I know my personnel, You on the other hand have been up to no good....
Peter: I told you I was framed.....
Phil Cunningham: We know you killed your "old friend" Shannon Clare....
Peter: I was framed.....
Phil Cunningham: By who then?
Peter: The Snake....
Phil Cunningham: The Snake!? Ha! he's not even real, Just a legend made up to scare us back at the academy, You'll have to do better than that Mr. Hunt....
Peter: ...
Phil Cunningham:Listen, It's not your dead friend who I care about, I care about what you're planning with that serum? And how were you planning to spread it?
Peter: What Serum?
Phil Cunningham: Don't act like you don't known what I'm talking about shitbird....... Usually I'm not as nice as this but I'm willing to make a deal if you fucking cooperate, I don't give a shit about you, I just need to know what the hell you were planning.
Peter: I don't know shit..... So keep your pants on son...
Phil Cunningham: Well you're gonna be locked away here forever!
Peter: [Sorry, I'll help you in any way I can] OR [Let me go or else I will burn this place to the ground and kill you, No matter what it takes]
Tell me what you guys think!
[Let me go or else I will burn this place to the ground and kill you, No matter what it takes]
Awesome Chapter!!!!!!!!
Thanks!
What do you think of Jordan Smith? Acting like he's so innocent....
[Sorry, I'll help you in any way I can]
[Let me go or else I will burn this place to the ground and kill you, no matter what is takes]
Good chapter!
[Sorry, I'll help you in any way I can]
Very good chapter, as always!
[Sorry, I'll help you in any way I can]
I think provoking the man in charge is a very bad idea...
We'll see what happens......
I'll probably release another chapter for this after I finish the last Dark Angels chapter so we can possibly get some good cameos
And http://www.strawpoll.me/3270178
I cannot really belive hes actually living i thought i was cursed
But it seems 4 is my lucky number
The Shadow of November Part 2: The Tomb Chapter 3
Peter: Sorry, I'll help you in any way I can
Cunningham: You better or else.........
Peter is escorted out
Voice: Think you're tough big guy!? Bring it biatch, You fucking Cunt we both know I'll get out of here in no time.....
Peter: Might want too chill out I saw them escort him in a cell labeled SPARKER
Sparker: You can let me go now or when I do get out, Say goodbye to your balls............. Sure let the sheep run the pen! See how far that gets you Urban! Sparker looks around his cell This could take a while.......
Peter: Fricking Clown....
4 Months Later
Pines: Shit, all out attempts haven't worked.....
Peter: I know....
Pines: Think of anything else?
Peter: No.....
Pines: Dammit Man! You have to keep your head in the game!
Peter: ...
Guard: You're going back to your cell now, Cunningham wants to speak to you.
Peter walks into his Bullet Proof Glass Dome like cell
Peter: Yes Cunningham?
Phil Cunningham: Don't talk shit to me like that..... You know what you did, You tried to stall but tell me what you did with that "Serum" of yours.
Peter: I've told you a thousand times..... I don't know. Cunningham walks out
Phil Cunningham: Smith! I tried to avoid this but he isn't cooperating, It's time to beat the truth out of him, Have Fun
Jordan Smith: My Pleasure Sir Walks into Cell
Peter: How did you get by Cunningham's Radar? You know being a drugs dealer and somehow making it look like you're an agent on his side,
Jordan Smith: I would say that's the least of you problem Punches Peter The fun thing is if you fight back Hit Peter with the butt of his gun I can kill ya..... Jordan starts beating Peter
1 Day Later
Pines: What happened?
Peter: Does it matter?
Pines: Ah, the Big Place, They put you there for a day
Peter: After getting the shit knocked out of me, yeah.
Pines: Don't let them break you, We have to get out of here
Voice: Good Day or Night....Ladies and Gentlemen.....
Pines: Who are you?
Voice: My name is Sparker..... And we can get out of here if we work together.....
Peter: We've tried everything.... We're gonna stay here for the rest of our lives....
Pines: Dammit Man! Don't Talk like that!
Peter: It's the truth....
Sparker: It ain't if ya pussies help me out
Guard: Pines, Cunningham wants you.
Pines: Oh Shit...... Whispers to Jordan Not sure if we should trust this guy, Listen to him more and you can decide
Peter: Yep, You stay safe too
Sparker: Was that about me Faggot?
Peter: No, It was about my cousin, him and Pines were good friends
Sparker: Help me get out, I really want to get payback on some assholes who locked me in here.
Peter: Odds are we're gonna die in here, Wait a sec, Jordan Wilkerson mentioned you....
Sparker: Yeah, He's a good guy, It's not about him.....
Peter: What if I don't want to help you?
Sparker: Then I'll go to Cunningham and make up something, I bet he trusts me more than you, Your Choice Brownie HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA
Help Sparker OR No Fucking Way
No Fucking Way
Helping Sparky?
Absolutely! No! Fucking! Way!
No Fucking Way NOPE! Good chapter!
Help Sparker
Awesome Chapter!!!!!!!
No Fucking Way - NOPE NOPE NOPE
Yes :P
Do should do it too!! :P
Are you TRYING to make us regret keeping him alive?
Maybe.............Uhhhhhh
Hey salt havent seen you in a while how's werwolf
But InGen broke you heart ;P
I'm 2-0 MUAHAHHAHAHAHHAHHA