Midnight Hollow (Interactive story) CHARACTER SUBMITTING OPEN FOR BONUS EPISODES

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  • Wow Percy could have appeared in ep 1 and gotten more development....then again he would have probs erazed barrys werewolf memories.

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Alternate choices: Midnight Hollow Episode 1 Part 2 [Cry for help]- This would have lead to Norman crying in pain on the ground, shouting

  • Don't you mean Norman's?

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Wow Percy could have appeared in ep 1 and gotten more development....then again he would have probs erazed barrys werewolf memories.

  • Yep normans sorry missread

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Don't you mean Norman's?

  • I'm going to go and create The Decaying Age thread. The story won't start for quite a while but I want to have characters ready when it does start.

  • Alternate choices: Midnight Hollow Episode 2

    [Try to calm down]- This would have made Barry try to not go into his full wolfman form, however Ramsay would have insulted Barry's mother, causing him to transform and be framed for Amalia's death. [Run]- Barry would have tried to escape Ramsay but would have blacked out and awoken next to Amalia's corpse.

    [Report to the police department and face whatever punishment given]- This would have lead to Barry being imprisoned and sentenced to death.

    [Hide the body]- Barry would have tried to hide Amalia's body but would have been found and knocked out by the creature.

    [Find Ramsay, he's the deputy mayor and he could cover this up]- Barry would go back to his father but before speaking to him would be knocked out by the creature.

    [Be an ass and do nothing]- He would...be an ass and do nothing.

    [Investigate yourself (nothing can beat a werecat's nose)]- Jack would stumble upon the old abandoned castle and be possessed by Hope.

    [Kill Ramsay]- Jack would stab Ramsay in the throat, causing him to bleed out and die.

  • Now that is interesting. Barry could have died in Episode 2? I guess that would have altered the story of Episode 4 in a major way.

    These alternate choices are very interesting, great work!

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Alternate choices: Midnight Hollow Episode 2 [Try to calm down]- This would have made Barry try to not go into his full wolfman form, how

  • The next chapter of episode 5 should come out later today.

  • Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 3

    Midnight Hollow Morgue

    Jack Jackson opened his eyes. He went to pull himself up but banged his head on a cold ceiling. The wound in his chest hurt like hell. He was sure he was done for after he had been shot but it seemed that the bullet had entered through his chest but left through his waist. From the smell of corpses masking the air he figured that he was in a morgue. He felt too weak to kick his way out of the carcass drawer so he morphed into his werecat form to get more force. His wound opened up again in his cat form. He spat out the cluster of blood and mucus building up in his windpipe and burst his way out of the drawer. Thankfully the silver had gone right through him so he wasn't left with the infamous burning pain.

    "Now to find some help" he thought.

    [Go to the hospital]

    [Patch yourself up without help]

    [Get Amalia to patch you up since she shot you]


    Percy Ronan

    Percy had only just escaped the demon with his life. He had transformed into his rodent self and scuttled his way out. He had never studied Pandora's Box- the contraption which is said to have all of the Elder Demons imprisoned within it. One of them had escaped somehow and wanted revenge on the world. Elder Demons are apparently impossible to kill, or at least no one has ever found a way to kill one. Percy then remembered that Hope Kat had been possessed by Diablus. Whenever a demon or spirit leaves the host it is said that it leaves memories behind. Percy had studied some necromancy before, but had only been able to resurrect insects. The best he had ever resurrected was a goldfish. He could possibly try to resurrect Barry Cold because an alpha werewolf on his side could help him kill Diablus or at the very least trap him somehow. Brains or Brawn?

    [Resurrect Hope Kat]

    [Resurrect Barry Cold]

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    [Get Amalia to patch you up since she shot you] YAY JACK BTW

    [Resurrect Hope Kat] HOPE BTW TOO XD

    Awesome Chapter!!!

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 3 Midnight Hollow Morgue Jack Jackson opened his eyes. He went to pull himself u

  • [Get Amalia to patch you up since she shot you]

    [Resurrect Hope Kat] I may be very opinionated here... But I'm gonna vote to bring Hope back from the dead. :D

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 3 Midnight Hollow Morgue Jack Jackson opened his eyes. He went to pull himself u

  • edited March 2015

    [Get Amalia to patch you up since she shot you]

    Supernaturals are really tough to kill XD

    Even though I don't think Jack is Amy's responsibility or problem, this means more screentime for her, which is always a great thing :D

    [Resurrect Hope Kat]

    I doubt Barry could go one on one with the demon. I doubt anyone could. But maybe Hope has knowledge on how to defeat the demon and that could give the edge here. I also think a cat could be easier to resurrect than a werewolf.

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 3 Midnight Hollow Morgue Jack Jackson opened his eyes. He went to pull himself u

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    [Go to the hospital]

    [Resurrect Barry Cold] Plz ;_;

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 3 Midnight Hollow Morgue Jack Jackson opened his eyes. He went to pull himself u

  • Wait......Pandoras Box......and......Midnight Hollow have been leading up to.................HUNTERS OF OBLIVION

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 3 Midnight Hollow Morgue Jack Jackson opened his eyes. He went to pull himself u

  • Voting closed!

    Jack will go to Amalia for help!

    Percy will try to resurrect Hope!

  • Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 4

    Jack Jackson and Amalia Grigorov

    "You know me and you have a lot in common" Jack grinned as Amalia Grigorov punctured the needle into his bullet wound. He tried to put on a brave face despite the fact that he was in agony.

    "Like what?" Amalia murmured. The werecat had used several pick-up lines in the few hours she had spent sewing his chest back together.

    "Well, we um... both only have one hand" Jack whined, waving his bloody stump.

    "Remember that I am the one that took your hand" Amalia hissed. "Besides, I am way too old for you".

    "It's actually my sixteenth birthday today" said Jack.

    "Good for you, mine was one hundred and sixty one years ago!" Amalia spat.

    "Alright already!" Jack breathed, "You've made your point".

    Jack looked around the old mansion in which Amalia and her father Lucius had lived in. It was filled with oil paintings and ornaments that looked like they hadn't been touched in the centuries that the Grigorovs had lived in the town for.

    Suddenly a ringing sounds echoed through out Jack's head. He looked at Amalia and had the urge to kiss her.

    Jack then heard a voice, it definitely didn't sound human. He couldn't even make out what it was saying. The mansion began to rumble and the voice's cold whisper made the spines of Jack Jackson and Amalia Grigorov chill.

    Jack looked at Amalia and noticed that she was in a trance. Her eyes were closed and her lips were puckered.

    [Make out]

    [Attempt to break out of the trance]


    Percy Ronan

    Percy looked at the blue coffin in front of him. He could do this. He took a deep breath and lifted the lid and wrinkled his nose as he saw the two fallen felines before him. Maybe he could revive Whiskers after this would all be over. If this would ever be over. He gently picked up the corpse of Hope Kat, still wrapped in his blanket and laid him along the table. Before he could mutter any incantation a sharp pain punctured his shoulder. He fell to the floor and screamed in pain as the sweet crimson streamed from his shoulder. He looked up to see Orma Greenlef standing over him wielding a bloody knife.

    "How fucking dare you disturb my best friend's grave!" she screamed as the knife raced down towards Percy's heart. He quickly wrapped his hands around her wrists to prevent the knife from coming anywhere near him. The knife tip was only a quarter of an inch near his chest when he kicked out violently, knocking Orma over the stair railings and plummeting onto the tiled floor below. He listened. He certainly didn't hear any collision with the floor. He dragged his bleeding body up and limped towards the railings. There was no body. He heard a growling noise and turned to see that Orma had shape-shifted into a direwolf and was baring her sharp teeth at him.

    [Run]

    [Run and try to take Hope with you]

    [Transform into something]

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    [Attempt to break out of the trance]

    [Transform into something]

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 4 Jack Jackson and Amalia Grigorov "You know me and you have a lot in common" Ja

  • The other choice?

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    [Attempt to break out of the trance] [Transform into something]

  • You saw nothing >.>

    <.<

    By the way, great chapter!

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    The other choice?

  • Good part :)

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 4 Jack Jackson and Amalia Grigorov "You know me and you have a lot in common" Ja

  • [Make out]

    [Run and try to take Hope with you]

    Awesome Part!!!

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 4 Jack Jackson and Amalia Grigorov "You know me and you have a lot in common" Ja

  • Wow Jack, what a pick-up line XD

    [Attempt to break out of the trance]

    Making out would be quite awkward here. I mean, it's not like she has a choice, huh?

    [Transform into something]

    I have to admit, even though he left Lucius and Steve to die, Percy grows on me.

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 4 Jack Jackson and Amalia Grigorov "You know me and you have a lot in common" Ja

  • This episode might seem slow at the moment, but I am planning on making this the longest episode so all of secrets and twists can be explained. It is probably going to be around 15 chapters long.

  • The pace of this episode seems perfect for me, I love it :) And a long episode sounds awesome

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    This episode might seem slow at the moment, but I am planning on making this the longest episode so all of secrets and twists can be explained. It is probably going to be around 15 chapters long.

  • Voting closed!

    Jack will attempt to break out of the trance!

    Percy will transform into something!

  • Alternate choices: Midnight Hollow Episode 3 Part 1

    [Obey]- Jack would have killed Ramsay

    [Go into cat form]- Jack would have attempted to transform and succeeded but would have been possessed and killed Ramsay.

    [Go over there with Orma]- This would have lead to Orma and possessed Whiskers killing all of the past team and Whiskers would have managed to kill the future team.

    [Stay here]- This would have ended the story and the bad ending would appear as Diablus would have gotten his true form without intervention and destroyed the world.

    The same overall stuff would have happened regardless of the teams chosen, however if Lucius went to the future he would have lost his chance to save Amy.

    [Follow Alexander's advice]- Lucius would have died as Whiskers would have prepared to attack. Brail would have died due to a knife to the heart. Amalia would have stayed dead. This would lead to the bad ending.

    [Allow the ambulance to come]- This would have allowed Lucius to survive the season. After coming out of the hospital late at night he would find Odessa with Hope and Orma. He would have managed to save her however Orma would have tried to kill him but Amalia would have found them and taken the fatal blow. (I wanted a Doug and Carley situation in the story however both could have died).

  • Oh my... from my perspective, we made exactly the right choices in Episode 3. I mean, Lucius was a great guy, but I like Amy more than him. Looks like meddling with the timeline did something good this time. Also, bad ending in which everyone dies sounds very dark. Good job, I enjoy these alternate choices!

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Alternate choices: Midnight Hollow Episode 3 Part 1 [Obey]- Jack would have killed Ramsay [Go into cat form]- Jack would have attempte

  • I apologize for the inactivity on this story recently. I haven't actually been able to get focused on writing lately and I don't want to give a poor chapter.

  • Take your time. Don't rush yourself.

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    I apologize for the inactivity on this story recently. I haven't actually been able to get focused on writing lately and I don't want to give a poor chapter.

  • Take your time , it´s okay

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    I apologize for the inactivity on this story recently. I haven't actually been able to get focused on writing lately and I don't want to give a poor chapter.

  • Can we make characters for MH 2?

  • Not yet, I decided to change the plot so I need to sort out the time era and other stuff.

    supersagig posted: »

    Can we make characters for MH 2?

  • Expect a new chapter either today or tomorrow.

  • Because I feel bad about the Pandora's Box delay I have decided to make it so rather then I do one Nocturnal Academy episode then a Pandora's Box episode, it will be one Nocturnal Academy chapter then one Pandora's Box chapter.

  • Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 5

    Percy Ronan

    The wings of the fully transformed Percy dragon gracefully flapped his wings throughout the cold winter air. He had managed to go full on dragon and swat the direwolf away like it was a mere housefly. In his talons was the corpse of Hope Kat. His house had most likely been destroyed by Diablus by now so he would have to try and find a new place to resurrect the decaying feline. He scanned the town below him and saw something burning. It was the Grigorov residence.

    [Investigate]

    [Be an ass and fly away]


    Ramsay Wolfson

    Ramsay could feel warm, salty tears trickle down his face. He had been found guilty of murder of second-degree murder. How could he have been such a fool? He hadn't intended to take the detective's life. He had only brought the silver knife with him out of fear of Diablus. He had lost his temper. It was true that Diablus had commanded him to acquire lycanthrope blood but he was planning to steal some from a witch or wizard. It was the first time that he had taken a life. He could remember the rage that he had felt from Norman Avery's refusal too allow him to see his only son. He had felt the power of Lycos dawning on him. Killing Norman Avery had allowed his inner wolf to calm. He could remember gripping the cold handle and thrusting the blade into Norman's heart.

    Ramsay reflected back onto his past. His father had favoured the rest of the litter to him. He had been the runt. The weakling. This had made Ramsay Wolfson a violent and despicable excuse of a human being. The angrier a werewolf is in their human form, the more frenzied they will become in their wolf form.

    The town was going to vote on his fate. All Ramsay could do was wait.

    [Execute Ramsay Wolfson]

    [Imprison Ramsay Wolfson]

    [Exile Ramsay Wolfson to Oblivion]


    Larry Stain

    Larry choked as the thick layer of dust that had coated "The Book Of Oblivion" flew into his lungs. He needed to find some information on Elder Demons. He looked around at his surroundings. There were no other people in the town library. He opened the abnormally large book onto his contents page. The paper was a disgusting yellow and stained with the different assortment of beverages that the past readers of the book had spilt onto its crusty pages; it felt more like a mixture of sand paper and cardboard. He scanned the contents and turned over to page 394. The list of Elder Demons. There were seven of them, and they were all living, breathing embodiments of The Seven Deadly Sins.

    1) Diablus the Lust Demon= An extremely powerful demon who can transform into what people lust for the most. His presence can also cause two people to become enamoured with eachother and this will cause the couple to conceive a child which will become a Minion of Diablus or a Shadowling if they are not of mortal blood once the offspring hits puberty. Diablus is a master of disguise and can transform into two forms: His true physical form and his dark mist form.

    2) Gorelock the Wrath Demon= A violent, evil creature the size of the statue of Liberty. He had caused many natural disasters over the years and could turn the world into a second sun with his fury. His true form is a massive charcoal skinned creature covered in millions red glowing horns. Like other Elder Demons he had a dark mist form.

    3) Insomniall the Sloth Demon= He is the smallest and physically the weakest demon as his true form is the size of a grizzly bear and moves as fast as a slug. He resembled an obese sloth and covered in giant glowing red crystals that would create a shield around it. He enjoys life in Pandora's Box. He never uses a mist form and his yawns can cause earthquakes.

    The rest of the information on other Elder Demons was missing due to the page on it being ripped from the book.

  • Not voting for percy out of fear ill end up killing him

    [Imprison Ramsay wolfson.]

    There is no point in killing him. He was afraid of a demon and seems to regret his actions. Life imprisonment seems fair.

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 5 Percy Ronan The wings of the fully transformed Percy dragon gracefully flapped

  • [Investigate]

    Damn it... let's hope Percy can save Jack and Amy.

    [Imprison Ramsay Wolfson]

    I agree with Lord here.

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 5 Percy Ronan The wings of the fully transformed Percy dragon gracefully flapped

  • Investigate

    [Imprison Ramsay Wolfson]

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 5 Percy Ronan The wings of the fully transformed Percy dragon gracefully flapped

  • Anyone get the Harry Potter reference?

    TheFurryOne posted: »

    Midnight Hollow Episode 5: Master of Disguise Chapter 5 Percy Ronan The wings of the fully transformed Percy dragon gracefully flapped

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