Eric Note: Not sure if I wrote this in my last post, but Eric grabbed his walker head before leaving.
"Damn!" Eric says running through the… more woods. Strangely, again they weren't following him. He decides to stop, as he comes across a tire swing. "Hmm..." He says thinking about the rope. Eric pulls out his trust pocket knife, and begins to cut the rope at the bottom, and at the top.
Once the rope comes down, he ties it to Britney's face. "This is going to be REALLY fun."
Eric Note: Not sure if I wrote this in my last post, but Eric grabbed his walker head before leaving.
"Damn!" Eric says running through the… more woods. Strangely, again they weren't following him. He decides to stop, as he comes across a tire swing. "Hmm..." He says thinking about the rope. Eric pulls out his trust pocket knife, and begins to cut the rope at the bottom, and at the top.
Once the rope comes down, he ties it to Britney's face. "This is going to be REALLY fun."
"Thank you so much" she proclaimed. "I'm Francesca, call me Frankie, I was travelling with my husband and son when those..things attacked and..." Frankie collected herself and continued. "I've been on my own, looking for my daughter, Zara, she was on a camping trip with friends when all the world went to hell and now I don't know where she is. Sunny Side Campers is a few miles away from here and that's where I was headed but it's a death sentence for just one person" Francesca stopped. "Please believe me" she begged.
Daniel heard screams shortly after entering the cabin. He ran outside to see Trevor struggling with a walker. He was using his basketball to stop it from biting him. Daniel drew his machete, but as Trevor ran away, he decided to just let trevor deal with it. If things got real bad he'd intervene, but for now...
~Frankie~
"Thank you so much" she proclaimed. "I'm Francesca, call me Frankie, I was travelling with my husband and son when those..things … moreattacked and..." Frankie collected herself and continued. "I've been on my own, looking for my daughter, Zara, she was on a camping trip with friends when all the world went to hell and now I don't know where she is. Sunny Side Campers is a few miles away from here and that's where I was headed but it's a death sentence for just one person" Francesca stopped. "Please believe me" she begged.
Eric tracks down the group once again. "Let's see 7 members, 3 bit. 4 to go..." He says. He hides behind another tree. He grabs his end of the rope, and throws the head at one mans foot. She takes a bite into his shoe. Before they could stab it, Eric pulls her back to him, and runs to another tree. He aims the walker at the only other female but misses, and hits a man. it bites him in the neck also. Eric runs back into the woods. "Only one left."
Eric waited a few days before returning. He goes back to their camping spot, and sees 6 dead body's. "Laurie must have killed them. Now where did her tracks go...? He finds her tracks and follows her. Once he catches up to her, he pulls out his katana again. "The females are the ones I keep." He says as he lounges at her slicing her head off. "Man i love it when my group leaves me!"
Eric
Eric tracks down the group once again. "Let's see 7 members, 3 bit. 4 to go..." He says. He hides behind another tree. He grabs his en… mored of the rope, and throws the head at one mans foot. She takes a bite into his shoe. Before they could stab it, Eric pulls her back to him, and runs to another tree. He aims the walker at the only other female but misses, and hits a man. it bites him in the neck also. Eric runs back into the woods. "Only one left."
Eric waited a few days before returning. He goes back to their camping spot, and sees 6 dead body's. "Laurie must have killed them. Now where did her tracks go...? He finds her tracks and follows her. Once he catches up to her, he pulls out his katana again. "The females are the ones I keep." He says as he lounges at her slicing her head off. "Man i love it when my group leaves me!"
Eric
Eric tracks down the group once again. "Let's see 7 members, 3 bit. 4 to go..." He says. He hides behind another tree. He grabs his en… mored of the rope, and throws the head at one mans foot. She takes a bite into his shoe. Before they could stab it, Eric pulls her back to him, and runs to another tree. He aims the walker at the only other female but misses, and hits a man. it bites him in the neck also. Eric runs back into the woods. "Only one left."
Eric waited a few days before returning. He goes back to their camping spot, and sees 6 dead body's. "Laurie must have killed them. Now where did her tracks go...? He finds her tracks and follows her. Once he catches up to her, he pulls out his katana again. "The females are the ones I keep." He says as he lounges at her slicing her head off. "Man i love it when my group leaves me!"
Eric
Eric tracks down the group once again. "Let's see 7 members, 3 bit. 4 to go..." He says. He hides behind another tree. He grabs his en… mored of the rope, and throws the head at one mans foot. She takes a bite into his shoe. Before they could stab it, Eric pulls her back to him, and runs to another tree. He aims the walker at the only other female but misses, and hits a man. it bites him in the neck also. Eric runs back into the woods. "Only one left."
Eric waited a few days before returning. He goes back to their camping spot, and sees 6 dead body's. "Laurie must have killed them. Now where did her tracks go...? He finds her tracks and follows her. Once he catches up to her, he pulls out his katana again. "The females are the ones I keep." He says as he lounges at her slicing her head off. "Man i love it when my group leaves me!"
"Damn man you've got the best job in the world" Said a mid twenties curly hair blonde male who went by his nickname Smithey. "It's a pretty good job man, not like you'd think at times". Replied OJ, zipping up his red tracksuit. As he was zipping up his zipper, a young gorgeous female walked by wearing nothing but a tank top and pants and flip flops to complete it. "Bye OJ, fun working with you again". He reached out and gave her a hug. "Yeah babe, I'll see you later". She walked off and looked over her shoulder and said "Call me" and flashed OJ a provocative smile with her pearly whites. She opened the door and closed it while Smithey was reviewing the adult film he just filmed. "Good shots man, gonna be featured-" All of a sudden Smithey got a text message on his phone. OJ had completed in putting his outfit on and looked up to see Anita, the actress he was workign with, suddenly come in. "I got a weird message, my John is saying to come home now, some weird shit is going on'. OJ looked up and said "What the hell are you talking about?"
"She's right, my mom said turn on the news and get home, something is happening bro". They all walked and turned on the tv but had to scroll through what seemed like an endless array of Mexican futbal matches before finding the news.
"Attack of flesh eating cannibalists, all report to local government roundup for safety you will be escorted to a fema concen- holding place for safety."
Smith and OJ looked at eachother. "The Fuck!?" OJ said. He turned around and Anita was walking towards them making moans and pretending to be a flesh eating cannibal. "II....want your flesh!!" She said.
"Ah shit!" OJ said. "Babe are you playing??". She said nothing but kept walking forward slowly dragging her feet. Smith quickly turned to his ledft and reached in his cabinet and out came a chrome Colt 45 M1911. "Boom!" He blasted the girl! Brains and blood splattered all over his door.
OJ's eyes widened. 'WHAT THE FUCK!". He screamed. Anita fell backwards her body falling limp against the door, propped against it. Blood and brain mattter was nearly everywhere. "WHAT THE FUCK MAN, YOU JUST KILLED HER SHE WAS PLAYING".
Smith's voice was stutterring in pure shock. "I, I, I didn't know man". "What you mean you didn't know, you dumb white son of a bitch!". "You just killed someone!" "Gimme that gun!". Smithey then pointed the gun at him,. "Now you got two choices, I give you a gun and we go on and forget about this dumb bitch, or I fucking shoot you now because I'm not a killer man I was looking out for you". "Put that gun down and give me one you fucking crazy ass nerd". Smithey lowered the gun and reached into his cabinet and pulled out another Chrome 45. He handed it to OJ. "I never even fired a gun and you just killed a bitch". "Well shit, now your house looks like CSI Most Wanted". Smithey began examining the girl he just murdered and kicked open the window shattering glass. "Let's go see whats happening". OJ followed and looked back at what remained of his friend. 'I'm sorry".
They both left and embark on the world that await them.
-OJ Rogerson-
"Damn man you've got the best job in the world" Said a mid twenties curly hair blonde male who went by his nickname Smithey. … more"It's a pretty good job man, not like you'd think at times". Replied OJ, zipping up his red tracksuit. As he was zipping up his zipper, a young gorgeous female walked by wearing nothing but a tank top and pants and flip flops to complete it. "Bye OJ, fun working with you again". He reached out and gave her a hug. "Yeah babe, I'll see you later". She walked off and looked over her shoulder and said "Call me" and flashed OJ a provocative smile with her pearly whites. She opened the door and closed it while Smithey was reviewing the adult film he just filmed. "Good shots man, gonna be featured-" All of a sudden Smithey got a text message on his phone. OJ had completed in putting his outfit on and looked up to see Anita, the actress he was workign with, suddenly come in. "I got a weird message, my John is sayin… [view original content]
-OJ Rogerson-
"Damn man you've got the best job in the world" Said a mid twenties curly hair blonde male who went by his nickname Smithey. … more"It's a pretty good job man, not like you'd think at times". Replied OJ, zipping up his red tracksuit. As he was zipping up his zipper, a young gorgeous female walked by wearing nothing but a tank top and pants and flip flops to complete it. "Bye OJ, fun working with you again". He reached out and gave her a hug. "Yeah babe, I'll see you later". She walked off and looked over her shoulder and said "Call me" and flashed OJ a provocative smile with her pearly whites. She opened the door and closed it while Smithey was reviewing the adult film he just filmed. "Good shots man, gonna be featured-" All of a sudden Smithey got a text message on his phone. OJ had completed in putting his outfit on and looked up to see Anita, the actress he was workign with, suddenly come in. "I got a weird message, my John is sayin… [view original content]
"We're waiting for the rest of our group to come back. They went off looking for shelter and supplies. Maybe you could wait here with us until they come back?"
You use two spaces instead of one.
Also, you could've had that be the prequel for your character and then maybe... I don't know, there's about three separate groups now.
This Michael ran away. Good riddance, unless he comes back with a gang. Then we'll have problems, Anton thought. "Like we don't have already". Searching around the cabin, they found some food and tools, something that was useful. As Anton was checking in the kitchen, he heard struggling sounds from outside. It was Trevor. Daniel ran out to help him. "What a nice leader we have", Anton thought sarcastically. Poses himself like a cool guy - gets in trouble for the first few minutes of being alone. "How did he survive till this point?".
Anton
This Michael ran away. Good riddance, unless he comes back with a gang. Then we'll have problems, Anton thought. "Like we don't have … morealready". Searching around the cabin, they found some food and tools, something that was useful. As Anton was checking in the kitchen, he heard struggling sounds from outside. It was Trevor. Daniel ran out to help him. "What a nice leader we have", Anton thought sarcastically. Poses himself like a cool guy - gets in trouble for the first few minutes of being alone. "How did he survive till this point?".
Theodore is walking down the streets of Macon, along side Trina and his Rottweiler Boateng, just after coming out of Atlanta. Boateng starts sniffing around a Drugstore called "Everett's Pharmacy" he then wildly starts barking at someone inside. Theo and Trina run to the store Armed, they notice a Guy holding off some Walkers in the Store, Trina then shoots one behind Aaron saving his Life, Theo runs in and stabs another Walker grabbing Aaron, Trina shoots 2 more, Theo says "Lay off the trigger Trina. Now you, who are you and why did I just save your ass?"
Eric... 2 Months after his group incident (Current time as the other events)
"Ah, Britney you have a total of 12 victims. Laurie your trailing behind with 9." Eric says to the walkers. He has done some work to them over the past couple months also. He has attached 3 knifes to each of their necks, so in case he misses, his victims still get stabbed. He has a rope tied to each of them, and is ready at any second, for anybody to become his next victim.
Eric never starves, because most of the victims he comes across, always are stocked and loaded with food. He was living the life.
Eric had been walking, wherever the world took him. He never got any attention from walkers either. He had his backpack tricked out so the knifes in their neck had nice resting place, and he opened the back of the bag so walkers only say the heads, not him.
But Eric hasn't had food in a while, neither has his pets. He was beginigng to starve, when he sees 4 men walking down a road. Eric decides to spy on them, to see what they're doing. While he is observing them, he looks at one man's bag, it has his name on it. It read, Larry Laps.
Another update to the character list and story so far. Hopefully I never fall behind. The episode is progressing beautifully, and once more, i'd like to greatly thank everyone involved.
Theodore
Theodore is walking down the streets of Macon, along side Trina and his Rottweiler Boateng, just after coming out of Atlanta. Boat… moreeng starts sniffing around a Drugstore called "Everett's Pharmacy" he then wildly starts barking at someone inside. Theo and Trina run to the store Armed, they notice a Guy holding off some Walkers in the Store, Trina then shoots one behind Aaron saving his Life, Theo runs in and stabs another Walker grabbing Aaron, Trina shoots 2 more, Theo says "Lay off the trigger Trina. Now you, who are you and why did I just save your ass?"
Eric... 2 Months after his group incident (Current time as the other events)
"Ah, Britney you have a total of 12 victims. Laurie your trail… moreing behind with 9." Eric says to the walkers. He has done some work to them over the past couple months also. He has attached 3 knifes to each of their necks, so in case he misses, his victims still get stabbed. He has a rope tied to each of them, and is ready at any second, for anybody to become his next victim.
Eric never starves, because most of the victims he comes across, always are stocked and loaded with food. He was living the life.
Eric had been walking, wherever the world took him. He never got any attention from walkers either. He had his backpack tricked out so the knifes in their neck had nice resting place, and he opened the back of the bag so walkers only say the heads, not him.
But Eric hasn't had food in a while, neither has his pets. He was beginigng to starve, when he sees 4 men … [view original content]
I looked at Frankie whilst she was telling the story. Something in my heart told me she might be telling the truth.
"God...I don't know. I...I think she is telling the truth guys. I honestly do, I've got a good bullshit detector and I think she's being truthful" I said.
"Thank you so much" She proclaimed. She moved towards them and could help but grimace at the dead monsters. "Did you...do all this?" Frankie asked glancing at the young girl. She wasn't exactly happy to be running in with murderers. As soon as she found Zara, she'd leave these people and find her parents. Family is what's important now. These people would offer strong protection in the meantime.
~Frankie~
"Thank you so much" she proclaimed. "I'm Francesca, call me Frankie, I was travelling with my husband and son when those..things … moreattacked and..." Frankie collected herself and continued. "I've been on my own, looking for my daughter, Zara, she was on a camping trip with friends when all the world went to hell and now I don't know where she is. Sunny Side Campers is a few miles away from here and that's where I was headed but it's a death sentence for just one person" Francesca stopped. "Please believe me" she begged.
The Walker kept after Trevor as he ran... towards the cabin. The Walker now cornered Trevor, and it was looking bad. Daniel sighed and quickly walked over to Trevor to give him a hand. Once he was close enough, he decapitated the walker with ease, and quickly stabbed downward to end it's life.
"Well, nice to see you can handle yourself," Daniel said in a tone absolutely dripping with sarcasm.
He turned to see Larry and Anton still in the square. "We can rest here. In the morning, I'll go back out and get everyone else. I don't think this is a permanent solution, but it'll work for now."
Comments
Best. Weapon. Ever.
I knew you were kidding (kinda). I like the idea of Theo and Trina rescuing Aaron, though.
Oh fuck. I'm so horrified of what's gonna happen when Eric meets Ivy.
~Frankie~
"Thank you so much" she proclaimed. "I'm Francesca, call me Frankie, I was travelling with my husband and son when those..things attacked and..." Frankie collected herself and continued. "I've been on my own, looking for my daughter, Zara, she was on a camping trip with friends when all the world went to hell and now I don't know where she is. Sunny Side Campers is a few miles away from here and that's where I was headed but it's a death sentence for just one person" Francesca stopped. "Please believe me" she begged.
Daniel
Daniel heard screams shortly after entering the cabin. He ran outside to see Trevor struggling with a walker. He was using his basketball to stop it from biting him. Daniel drew his machete, but as Trevor ran away, he decided to just let trevor deal with it. If things got real bad he'd intervene, but for now...
...Are you going to tell the rest of your story to the group?
Eric
Eric tracks down the group once again. "Let's see 7 members, 3 bit. 4 to go..." He says. He hides behind another tree. He grabs his end of the rope, and throws the head at one mans foot. She takes a bite into his shoe. Before they could stab it, Eric pulls her back to him, and runs to another tree. He aims the walker at the only other female but misses, and hits a man. it bites him in the neck also. Eric runs back into the woods. "Only one left."
Eric waited a few days before returning. He goes back to their camping spot, and sees 6 dead body's. "Laurie must have killed them. Now where did her tracks go...? He finds her tracks and follows her. Once he catches up to her, he pulls out his katana again. "The females are the ones I keep." He says as he lounges at her slicing her head off. "Man i love it when my group leaves me!"
Should Eric and Theodore meet up? Need to Introduce him somehow.
Wait, so that was all a prequel, not happening at the same time as everything else?
I love Eric's Character! Would make a good villain
Edited.
You can have Theodore save Aaron perhaps? As Martin already suggested.
-OJ Rogerson-
"Damn man you've got the best job in the world" Said a mid twenties curly hair blonde male who went by his nickname Smithey. "It's a pretty good job man, not like you'd think at times". Replied OJ, zipping up his red tracksuit. As he was zipping up his zipper, a young gorgeous female walked by wearing nothing but a tank top and pants and flip flops to complete it. "Bye OJ, fun working with you again". He reached out and gave her a hug. "Yeah babe, I'll see you later". She walked off and looked over her shoulder and said "Call me" and flashed OJ a provocative smile with her pearly whites. She opened the door and closed it while Smithey was reviewing the adult film he just filmed. "Good shots man, gonna be featured-" All of a sudden Smithey got a text message on his phone. OJ had completed in putting his outfit on and looked up to see Anita, the actress he was workign with, suddenly come in. "I got a weird message, my John is saying to come home now, some weird shit is going on'. OJ looked up and said "What the hell are you talking about?"
"She's right, my mom said turn on the news and get home, something is happening bro". They all walked and turned on the tv but had to scroll through what seemed like an endless array of Mexican futbal matches before finding the news.
"Attack of flesh eating cannibalists, all report to local government roundup for safety you will be escorted to a fema concen- holding place for safety."
Smith and OJ looked at eachother. "The Fuck!?" OJ said. He turned around and Anita was walking towards them making moans and pretending to be a flesh eating cannibal. "II....want your flesh!!" She said.
"Ah shit!" OJ said. "Babe are you playing??". She said nothing but kept walking forward slowly dragging her feet. Smith quickly turned to his ledft and reached in his cabinet and out came a chrome Colt 45 M1911. "Boom!" He blasted the girl! Brains and blood splattered all over his door.
OJ's eyes widened. 'WHAT THE FUCK!". He screamed. Anita fell backwards her body falling limp against the door, propped against it. Blood and brain mattter was nearly everywhere. "WHAT THE FUCK MAN, YOU JUST KILLED HER SHE WAS PLAYING".
Smith's voice was stutterring in pure shock. "I, I, I didn't know man". "What you mean you didn't know, you dumb white son of a bitch!". "You just killed someone!" "Gimme that gun!". Smithey then pointed the gun at him,. "Now you got two choices, I give you a gun and we go on and forget about this dumb bitch, or I fucking shoot you now because I'm not a killer man I was looking out for you". "Put that gun down and give me one you fucking crazy ass nerd". Smithey lowered the gun and reached into his cabinet and pulled out another Chrome 45. He handed it to OJ. "I never even fired a gun and you just killed a bitch". "Well shit, now your house looks like CSI Most Wanted". Smithey began examining the girl he just murdered and kicked open the window shattering glass. "Let's go see whats happening". OJ followed and looked back at what remained of his friend. 'I'm sorry".
They both left and embark on the world that await them.
What do you all think?
I think it'd be better if Theo and Trina save Aaron from Macon. Eric hasn't even met any of the group yet.
I like it, but if you used paragraphs it would be easier to read.
Okay, that could work. Where is Aaron located again? I forgot.
Yeah, just an introduction to what kind of a person he can be.
Ok i'll do this in the future. When do you recommend I continue the story?
Also how do we do paragraphs? They don't seem to work in the comment box..
Great prequel, thought i'd point out though that the story is taking place several months after Season 1.
Ah... Macon. Everett's Pharmacy to be exact.
That's a damn good Villain. He slaughters his whole Group with a Zombified head? Bad. Ass.
Double Spaces
You use two spaces instead of one.
Also, you could've had that be the prequel for your character and then maybe... I don't know, there's about three separate groups now.
So Aaron is currently trapped in Macon by himself? Alright Theo will save him then.
Elizabeth
"We're waiting for the rest of our group to come back. They went off looking for shelter and supplies. Maybe you could wait here with us until they come back?"
Okay thanks guys.
I'll use that as my prequel. I'll post what happens after season one later on.
Anton
This Michael ran away. Good riddance, unless he comes back with a gang. Then we'll have problems, Anton thought. "Like we don't have already". Searching around the cabin, they found some food and tools, something that was useful. As Anton was checking in the kitchen, he heard struggling sounds from outside. It was Trevor. Daniel ran out to help him. "What a nice leader we have", Anton thought sarcastically. Poses himself like a cool guy - gets in trouble for the first few minutes of being alone. "How did he survive till this point?".
Yeah, sorry about that. It'll happen.
Theodore
Theodore is walking down the streets of Macon, along side Trina and his Rottweiler Boateng, just after coming out of Atlanta. Boateng starts sniffing around a Drugstore called "Everett's Pharmacy" he then wildly starts barking at someone inside. Theo and Trina run to the store Armed, they notice a Guy holding off some Walkers in the Store, Trina then shoots one behind Aaron saving his Life, Theo runs in and stabs another Walker grabbing Aaron, Trina shoots 2 more, Theo says "Lay off the trigger Trina. Now you, who are you and why did I just save your ass?"
Eric... 2 Months after his group incident (Current time as the other events)
"Ah, Britney you have a total of 12 victims. Laurie your trailing behind with 9." Eric says to the walkers. He has done some work to them over the past couple months also. He has attached 3 knifes to each of their necks, so in case he misses, his victims still get stabbed. He has a rope tied to each of them, and is ready at any second, for anybody to become his next victim.
Eric never starves, because most of the victims he comes across, always are stocked and loaded with food. He was living the life.
Eric had been walking, wherever the world took him. He never got any attention from walkers either. He had his backpack tricked out so the knifes in their neck had nice resting place, and he opened the back of the bag so walkers only say the heads, not him.
But Eric hasn't had food in a while, neither has his pets. He was beginigng to starve, when he sees 4 men walking down a road. Eric decides to spy on them, to see what they're doing. While he is observing them, he looks at one man's bag, it has his name on it. It read, Larry Laps.
Another update to the character list and story so far. Hopefully I never fall behind. The episode is progressing beautifully, and once more, i'd like to greatly thank everyone involved.
Aaron was being attacked by walkers at the pharmacy..
....
This is less cool now that he's stalking our group...
Fixed.
Kieran
I looked at Frankie whilst she was telling the story. Something in my heart told me she might be telling the truth.
"God...I don't know. I...I think she is telling the truth guys. I honestly do, I've got a good bullshit detector and I think she's being truthful" I said.
~Frankie~
"Thank you so much" She proclaimed. She moved towards them and could help but grimace at the dead monsters. "Did you...do all this?" Frankie asked glancing at the young girl. She wasn't exactly happy to be running in with murderers. As soon as she found Zara, she'd leave these people and find her parents. Family is what's important now. These people would offer strong protection in the meantime.
Larry
"Do you guys mind if I just head back and get the others? I really don't want any to fights to go on, and I want nothing to do with them?"
I really like Frankie, I feel so bad being a bitch to her as Molly but it's in her character.
Daniel
The Walker kept after Trevor as he ran... towards the cabin. The Walker now cornered Trevor, and it was looking bad. Daniel sighed and quickly walked over to Trevor to give him a hand. Once he was close enough, he decapitated the walker with ease, and quickly stabbed downward to end it's life.
"Well, nice to see you can handle yourself," Daniel said in a tone absolutely dripping with sarcasm.
He turned to see Larry and Anton still in the square. "We can rest here. In the morning, I'll go back out and get everyone else. I don't think this is a permanent solution, but it'll work for now."