The Shadow of November

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  • John was Zachiscool's character, AKA "Rambo"

    supersagig posted: »

    Oh yep XD Who is John? XD. Sorry for the owner of the character

  • edited February 2015

    Incident Report

    Known Prisoners at Large: Peterson Hunt, Pines, Joseph Blake, Warren Roldan, Sparker + Possibly More

    Remaining Prisoner Amount: 1,575

    Remaining Prisoners Status: Terminated

    Staff Casualties: 824

    Staff Wounded: 913

    Remaining Staff Status: Transferred

    Current Limbo Status: Abandoned

    Comments: The former ward: Phil Cunningham was partly at fault for the incident at Limbo. After further investigation, there were inmates who were falsely charged and didn't deserve to be there. Cunningham was a clear problem with his ego and hiring of possible sleepers but another addition to his failure were the designs, It being in the location that it is, Was a great addition but made it too easy for inmates to leave the premises if they escaped the main containment area. Limbo was a failure due to it weaknesses and I have submitted new plans for a more secure desolate and safer containment unit for international war criminals so even if they do escape the containment region, They won't go far...
    - General George L. Whitelock

  • Does this make you feel better Liquid?

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Incident Report Known Prisoners at Large: Peterson Hunt, Pines, Joseph Blake, Warren Roldan, Sparker + Possibly More Remaining Prisone

  • Whoa

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Incident Report Known Prisoners at Large: Peterson Hunt, Pines, Joseph Blake, Warren Roldan, Sparker + Possibly More Remaining Prisone

  • Warren: You don't have the guts, You'll be dog food on the walls, They will Avenge me!

    Sparker: Don't count on it.....

    Sparker stabs Warren in the balls and shoots him three times in the chest

    Sparker: EHAHAHAAHAHAHAHA

    Alt text

    XD These stories are so badass among my favourite fanfics ever on this forum your talent for writing is just insanely good salty genius :)

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    The Shadow of November Part 3: War Games Chapter 6 Peter: After we get the info, We're gonna bring him in. Sparker: Fuck That. Pete

  • edited February 2015

    Before I start the new part of SON and release the final chapter of JP, Here's a Valentine's Day Special (Inspired by @Markd4547 )


    SPARKER'S VALENTINE'S DAY SPECIAL

    Snake: We going after this "Wilkerson" guy or what?

    Sparker: HELL YEAH EHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

    Peter: FUCK!

    1 Hour Later

    Snake: So what now?

    Sparker: Well, No one's looking for us so go to the nearest Zoo........

    Snake: What wanna fuck a Giraffe?

    Sparker: No, I wanna fuck some kid's fun today

    Snake: So before we go all "Mega Evil" you want to start out small?

    Sparker: Basically.

    Snake: Alright I like it Parks the Van think they'll come after us?

    Sparker: Doubt the skrubs will, They have bigger problems

    Snake: Like what?

    Sparker: I tipped that Rambo guy and Smith where they are, so if they don't move their asses they're fucked.

    Ticket Lady: Would you like to enter sirs? Would you like the couples pack?

    Sparker: The hell's that supposed to mean Mrs. Arendelle Bitch?

    Ticket Lady: Sorry, this is my first day, You two just looked like good friends, thhat's all, Sorry about the confusion.

    Snake: OH You did not say what I think you just said

    Little Boy: HEY! I wanna get SOME FOOD! HURRY UP FAGS!

    Sparker: Think you're tough LITTLE MAN!?

    Little Boy: Oh Yeah, Faggot, I WILL REK YOU!

    Sparker: This isn't the Telltale Forums or anything, Stop trying to act badass

    Little Boy kicks Sparker in the ankle

    Sparker: You remind me of a kid named Wilson Grabs Little Boy by the throat I HATED WILSON

    Little Boy: Mommy HEL- Sparker drops the kid

    Mom: What is it Billy?

    Sparker: Yes, what is it "Billy"? Stares at Billy

    Little Boy: Thought I saw a Unicorn.....

    Mom: Boy! What did I tell you bout that Gay ass Shit!? Mom drags little boy away

    Snake: Got us the tickets, Let's get this over with.

    Sparker: Society's Insane Peeps.............

    As Sparker and Snake walks by some Exhibits they stop upon a Reptile Building

    Snake: Oh Shit..... Snakes in there....I hate Snakes.....

    Sparker: Aint that something.... Snake is afraid of Snakes.....

    Snake: Not Afraid...... Just not overly fond of them....

    Sparker: Whatever you say........

    Snake: Nah, I'm just kidding, I love the small bastards.

    Sparker: Kewl then.

    Sparker and Snake walk to the Cougar Exhibit

    Sparker: Looks badass

    Snake: Bitch pregnant?

    Cougar hisses at them

    Snake: Mood and Swing.

    Sparker and Snake walk by a Giraffe Exhibit

    Sparker: Why do Giraffe's remind me of THE gays?

    Snake: I don't know, Where to next?

    Sparker: Let's check out the Asian Elephants, they look kewl

    Sparker and Snake walk to the Asian Elephant Exhibit to see the Elephants playing around

    Sparker: That's cute.....

    Snake: When this species were used in battle, Hell Yeah.

    Sparker: This reminds me of the Wilkerson guy and his team.;.... Happy but Ignorant Bitches who have to cause trouble, Then that results in me bringing chaos to balance that, And not to mention is fun.......... EHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

    Snake: What's the keeper doing?

    Zoo Keeper: YOU STUPID FUCKS! Starts beating the Elephant with a baton as the Elephant whimpers in pain and the other Elephant helplessly watches

    Snake:Wow......... Good kiddies aren't here

    Sparker: Ah, it would toughen em up.

    Snake: True......

    Sparker: BUT NO ONE HURTS THEM EXCEPT FOR ME Sparker jumps over the fence as Snake follows

    Snake: We have a plan?

    Sparker: Nope, Just doing......

    Zookeeper stops hitting the elephant and stares at Sparker and Snake coming

    Zookeeper: Can I help you gentlemen?

    Snake: Yes you can Boy........

    Zookeeper: Okay.....What do you want?

    Snake: I'm part of the Nature and Animal Protection service, I've noticed that you were abusing the cute animal here, So I'm gonna be conficating it cause it now belongs to me and the service.

    Zookeeper: Do they belong to you now?

    Sparker: Yes, like your life Sparker pulls out knife

    Zookeeper: What do you want?

    Snake: Fair treatment of this magnificent species.

    Zookeeper: And I was providing them with discipline, Can't we all just let it go?

    Sparker: LET IT GO!? LET IT GO!?? EHAHAHAHAHAHA Sparker stabs the Zookeeper

    Snake: What now?

    The two elephants look at the Zookeepers dead body

    Snake: Should we start running?

    Sparker: Hell Nah

    Abused Elephant comes over and grabs Sparker with it's Trunk

    Snake: This is gonna be fun.....

    Second Elephant comes over to Snake

    Snake: Hey big guy or gal.....

    Sparker: They're bros.....

    Snake: How can you tell?

    Sparker: Cause they're not humping eachother, now let's leave this place.

    Sparker goes on top of the elephant

    Snake: This was "Fun", What now?

    Snake goes on top of the other elephant

    Sparker: We Ride.....And figure something oiut from there, Once you get to know me better, I just DO things...... But we should get some slushies and start thinking about Wilkerson and his gang.

    Snake: Sounds Good..........

    Sparker and Snake ride out of the Exhibit into the sunset

    Little Boy: MOM! GET OVER HERE!

    END OF VALENTINE'S DAY SPECIAL

    Tell me what you guys thought! :D

  • Awesome!!

    Sparker x Snake = Snaker

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Before I start the new part of SON and release the final chapter of JP, Here's a Valentine's Day Special (Inspired by @Markd4547 ) SPAR

  • Happy Valentine's Day Super :)

    supersagig posted: »

    Awesome!! Sparker x Snake = Snaker

  • Happy Valentine´s day for you too Salt :D

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Happy Valentine's Day Super

  • Happy Valentine's Day, Salty. :3

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Before I start the new part of SON and release the final chapter of JP, Here's a Valentine's Day Special (Inspired by @Markd4547 ) SPAR

  • Happy Valentine's Day :P What did you think?

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Happy Valentine's Day, Salty.

  • I honestly think this was awesome (i over use the word but its true)

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Before I start the new part of SON and release the final chapter of JP, Here's a Valentine's Day Special (Inspired by @Markd4547 ) SPAR

  • Alt text

    You know what your getting to get with salty awesome, hilarious, random, badass quotes and genius stories how you made such a simple idea as a zoo visit so random and brilliant is beyond me I had a great time reading this awesome job I need more stories Salty he knows the stories I like XD

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Before I start the new part of SON and release the final chapter of JP, Here's a Valentine's Day Special (Inspired by @Markd4547 ) SPAR

  • Thanks :)

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    I honestly think this was awesome (i over use the word but its true)

  • Pics not showing :P

    Oh Great inspiration for this part, What did you think? :P

    Markd4547 posted: »

    You know what your getting to get with salty awesome, hilarious, random, badass quotes and genius stories how you made such a simple idea as

  • I liked it. :3

    Also... Is character submission still open... I'd like to know... for... reasons... :3

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Happy Valentine's Day :P What did you think?

  • Kewl and for Character Submission.............Not Now, I'll think about it for later.

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    I liked it. Also... Is character submission still open... I'd like to know... for... reasons...

  • Okay, I'm gonna save this character for Dark Angles 2... :3

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Kewl and for Character Submission.............Not Now, I'll think about it for later.

  • Did you see the Dark Angel 2 Part Names?

    NoHopeLeft posted: »

    Okay, I'm gonna save this character for Dark Angles 2...

  • Really funny and random I enjoyed the whole thing :D

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Pics not showing :P Oh Great inspiration for this part, What did you think? :P

  • Yus :3

    Their pretty neat, I'm really looking forward to it.

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Did you see the Dark Angel 2 Part Names?

  • Sparker saved the Elephants :)

    You know what? I think this was a good ending for him.

    SPARKER WILL NOT RETURN

    Remember that, I was gonna have him in DA2 but I'm gonna redo some ideas I had, Sparker will not show up there ALL because of Mark :P

    JK, JK, JK, DID I TRICK YOU GUYS? I HOPE I DID, SPARKER WILL BE BACK

    Markd4547 posted: »

    Really funny and random I enjoyed the whole thing

  • :)

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Sparker saved the Elephants You know what? I think this was a good ending for him. SPARKER WILL NOT RETURN Remember that, I was go

  • Here's the animals Sparker and Snake saw at the zoo :)

    Snakes- Alt text

    Cougar/Puma/Mountain Lion....Whatever you want to call it- Alt text

    Giraffe- Alt text

    Asian Elephants-Alt text

    SPARKER AND SNAKE ARE THE SAVIORS

  • And people said sparing him was bad

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Here's the animals Sparker and Snake saw at the zoo Snakes- Cougar/Puma/Mountain Lion....Whatever you want to call it- Giraffe- Asian Elephants- SPARKER AND SNAKE ARE THE SAVIORS

  • Lord_EAA posted: »

    And people said sparing him was bad

  • Awesome chapter!

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Before I start the new part of SON and release the final chapter of JP, Here's a Valentine's Day Special (Inspired by @Markd4547 ) SPAR

  • Technically it wasn't a chapter since it isn't part of the main story but thanks! :D

    zachiscool3 posted: »

    Awesome chapter!

  • XD

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    @LiquidChicagoTed XD

  • Wait? Sparker and Snake going to the zoo, riding elephants and stuff? Okay... this is officially the most epic, as well as the most hilarious thing that ever happened in your stories. That was so magnificent :D

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Before I start the new part of SON and release the final chapter of JP, Here's a Valentine's Day Special (Inspired by @Markd4547 ) SPAR

  • I'm telling ya, I will still regret this once he targets the heroes again instead of saving animals XD

    But I'm regretting it a bit less now. Sparker and Snake are hilarious and their chaotic but evil schemes will be among the things I'm looking forward the most in Season 2. But I'm still convinced sparing him will cost the good guys dearly.

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    @LiquidChicagoTed XD

  • Happy Valentine's Day :)

    Wait? Sparker and Snake going to the zoo, riding elephants and stuff? Okay... this is officially the most epic, as well as the most hilarious thing that ever happened in your stories. That was so magnificent

  • Damn.............It's been a while....

    The Shadow of November Part 4: A Helping Hand Chapter 1

    Audrey: Well I got my ass down from that roof and ran all the way over here, Think we can find anything?

    Joseph: Doubt It....

    Peter: Fuck..........

    Audrey: I'm gonna have problems down the road........

    Joseph: We all will.

    Peter: We can't stay here long................

    Several Vans pull up

    Joseph: Shit....

    Peter: We can't pick a fight right now.....

    Jordan Smith, Reservoir, and Rambo along with 20 Henchmen step out of the vans

    Peter: Damn................. Get ready..............

    Jordan: Hunt! You have 10 Seconds to come down or else we'll throw some Grenades up there and smoke you out! 10!

    Rambo takes out Bazooka

    Jordan: 9!

    Reservoir takes out some Grenades and grabs a mega-phone

    Reservoir: Greeting dipshits, Oh...Is that LESBIAN up there? Just tell her that her LESBIAN friend is up in hell scissoring with some other Chick

    Jordan Smith: Really Rez? She is?? you hear that bitches!? That chick who was with you earlier is SCISSORING with some other fucking bitch in hell! SPOONING HER HARD! OH YEAH!! I SEE ITTT!!! OH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Audrey: Those assholes..........

    Audrey jumps out and starts shooting the henchmen below, 7 Remain

    Peter: They're trying to get a reaction out of you, Relax.....

    Audrey: You relax dammit!

    Jordan Smith: They never learn.........

    Reservoir throws some Grenades up and the men start shooting

    Joseph: Dammit Guys! I'm over here, Let's go!

    Peter: I'm fine! Audrey!? Where are you!?

    Audrey: Leave me dammit!

    Joseph: What?

    Audrey: I'm not getting out of this!

    Joseph: Why!?

    Audrey: I'm STUCK UNDER SOME SHIT! I CAN'T GET UP, GET OUT OF HERE BEFORE THE COME UP!!!!

    Peter:Leave Audrey OR Save Audrey

    Sorry if this Part sucked, Getting back into writing now.

  • Its cool salt bro

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Damn.............It's been a while.... The Shadow of November Part 4: A Helping Hand Chapter 1 Audrey: Well I got my ass down from tha

  • Again, Just getting back into it

    (And Dat Vote Though)

    Lord_EAA posted: »

    Its cool salt bro

  • Oh yeah sorry [Save Audrey] i always spare/save determinants

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Again, Just getting back into it (And Dat Vote Though)

  • Save Audrey

    Great to see it back! Awesome part :D

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Damn.............It's been a while.... The Shadow of November Part 4: A Helping Hand Chapter 1 Audrey: Well I got my ass down from tha

  • Save Audrey

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Damn.............It's been a while.... The Shadow of November Part 4: A Helping Hand Chapter 1 Audrey: Well I got my ass down from tha

  • Save Audrey

    Awesome Chapter!!!

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Damn.............It's been a while.... The Shadow of November Part 4: A Helping Hand Chapter 1 Audrey: Well I got my ass down from tha

  • Save Audrey

    Good chapter!

    Saltlick123 posted: »

    Damn.............It's been a while.... The Shadow of November Part 4: A Helping Hand Chapter 1 Audrey: Well I got my ass down from tha

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